From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 18:43:23 +0000 (+0000) Subject: correcting issues reported by gblint.pl X-Git-Tag: 20180215~33 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=53f8342cbef6c6df39f11e2589b43e06ade97fe8 correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2665 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/08tjoh.xml b/en/xml/08tjoh.xml index c81d9f1..5881002 100644 --- a/en/xml/08tjoh.xml +++ b/en/xml/08tjoh.xml @@ -1355,12 +1355,12 @@

Shafts of sunlight break through the slate-grey cloud, and the rain eases off and finally stops. You ride across the rolling valley floor towards the River Phoen until the track stops at a ramshackle house perched precariously on the river bank. An old wooden jetty juts out from the side of the house, its platform almost submerged in the rain-swollen river. A notice board standing in front of the house reads:

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FERRY HOUSE LANDING

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Ferry House Landing

Passenger barges to Tharroembark from this jetty. Barges to Phoenaembark from opposite bank.

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NO CATTLE, WAGONS, CARAVANS, OR HERD ANIMALS UNLESS BY SPECIAL ARRANGEMENT

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No cattle, wagons, caravans, or herd animals unless by special arrangement.

 If you wish to wait here for a barge to Tharro, turn to 299. If you wish to investigate the Ferry House, turn to 130. @@ -2700,7 +2700,7 @@ Renegade Shaman of Mogaruith. Leader of the forbidden sect of Dazudskul.

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It is hereby proclaimed by lawful authority that in just retribution for vile acts of black sorcery perpetrated throughout the Freelands of Talestria, a bounty of TEN THOUSAND LUNE is offered for the head of Kezoor the Necromancer.

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It is hereby proclaimed by lawful authority that in just retribution for vile acts of black sorcery perpetrated throughout the Freelands of Talestria, a bounty of Ten Thousand Lune is offered for the head of Kezoor the Necromancer.

By order of Queen Evaine of Talestria MS5060 @@ -3155,7 +3155,7 @@ 204 -

You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words TEMPLE OF THE SWORD engraved along the blade.

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You arrive at a flagstoned quadrangle. It is well lit by street lanterns, which hang from the first-floor balcony of a large and unusual building constructed of blue stone, with silver and scarlet veins running through it. The bricks have been polished to give a mirror-like shine. A huge wooden door banded with copper dominates the entrance, above which a bronze cast depicts a flaming broadsword with the words Temple of the Sword engraved along the blade.

Beyond the temple, a street ascends to a stone watchtower. It is built on the peak of a hill and dominates the town.

If you have a Map of Tharro, you may consult it before choosing any of the following options: turn to 22. If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Pathsmanship, turn to 327. @@ -5490,7 +5490,7 @@

(51) Replaced head first with head-first.

(53) Replaced ago this with ago, this. Replaced luxurious but with luxurious, but and air and with air, and. Replaced rope and with rope, and.

(54) Replaced desperation one with desperation, one. Replaced Discipline with Disciplines.

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(55) Replaced cloud and with cloud, and. Replaced river-bank with river bank. Replaced noticeboard with notice board. Replaced CARAVANS OR with CARAVANS, OR.

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(55) Replaced cloud and with cloud, and. Replaced river-bank with river bank. Replaced noticeboard with notice board. Replaced FERRY HOUSE LANDING with Ferry House Landing. Replaced NO CATTLE, WAGONS, CARAVANS, OR HERD ANIMALS UNLESS BY SPECIAL ARRANGEMENT with No cattle, wagons, caravans, or herd animals unless by special arrangement..

(56) Replaced korlinium and with korlinium, and. Replaced signals it with signals, it.

(57) Replaced confusion you with confusion, you. Replaced ribcage with rib cage.

(58) Replaced light you with light, you. Replaced on to with onto.

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(163) Replaced explodes and with explodes, and.

(164) Replaced each occurrence of arrows with Arrows.

(165) Replaced aside but with aside, but. Replaced him but with him, but. Replaced inside and with inside, and. Replaced Bor-musket with Bor musket. Replaced trigger and with trigger, and.

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(166) Replaced Dazudskul with Dazudskul.. Replaced fortune whispers with fortune, whispers.

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(166) Replaced Dazudskul with Dazudskul.. Replaced fortune whispers with fortune, whispers. Replaced TEN THOUSAND LUNE with Ten Thousand Lune.

(168) Replaced counter and with counter, and. Put dashes between each item on the list and its price. Replaced arrows and with arrows, and. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced quiver with Quiver. Replaced bowstrings and with bowstrings, and. Replaced finger and wrist with wrist and finger.

(169) Replaced Psi-shield with Psi-screen. Replaced duck and with duck, and. Replaced clawed skeletal with clawed, skeletal. Added If you win the combat against the Vordak you are able to retrieve the Weapon and keep it noted on your Action Chart. as clarified by the Lone Wolf Club Newsletter Summer Special 1987.

(172) Replaced him and with him, and.

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(200) Replaced bang with bang.

(201) Replaced aside and with aside, and. Replaced glowing silvery with glowing, silvery. Replaced Tan-ash-oka, Nadoknar Gnaag! with Tan-ash-okja Nadoknar Gnaag!. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced on to with onto.

(202) Replaced remains and with remains, and. Replaced robes presumably with robes, presumably.

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(204) Replaced both occurrences of watch-tower with watchtower. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced options; with options:. Replaced building. Constructed with building constructed.

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(204) Replaced both occurrences of watch-tower with watchtower. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced options; with options:. Replaced building. Constructed with building constructed. Replaced TEMPLE OF THE SWORD with Temple of the Sword.

(206) Replaced bow and with Bow and. Replaced bow or do with Bow, or if you do.

(208) Replaced each occurrence of arrow with Arrow. Replaced bow with Bow.

(209) Replaced arrow with Arrow.