From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Date: Sat, 27 Oct 2012 13:44:48 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: making 256 parallel with 397 by adding "(only if you have heard that name before)"
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making 256 parallel with 397 by adding "(only if you have heard that name before)"


git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2151 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11
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diff --git a/en/xml/05sots.xml b/en/xml/05sots.xml
index d8048ea..52ebb49 100644
--- a/en/xml/05sots.xml
+++ b/en/xml/05sots.xml
@@ -3739,7 +3739,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p><quote>Here you are,</quote> says Banedon, flicking a Gold Crown into her empty bowl. <quote>Now will you help us in return?</quote> She snatches the coin to her mouth and bites into the gold. Satisfied that the coin is real, she nods her head.</p>
-      <choice idref="sect307">If you wish to ask her if she is Soushilla, <link-text>turn to 307</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect307">If you wish to ask her if she is Soushilla (only if you have heard that name before), <link-text>turn to 307</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect314">If you wish to ask her if she knows were Tipasa the Wanderer can be found, <link-text>turn to 314</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -6219,6 +6219,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect250">250</a>) Replaced <quote>blood and</quote> with <quote>blood, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect253">253</a>) Replaced <quote>subsides; but</quote> with <quote>subsides, but</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect254">254</a>) Replaced <quote>battle-jerkins, pull</quote> with <quote>battle-jerkins pull</quote>. Replaced <quote>gratitude for</quote> with <quote>gratitude, for</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>sky-ship and</quote> with <quote>skyship, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>sky-ship</quote> with <quote>skyship</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect256">256</a>) Added <quote>(only if you have heard that name before)</quote> since you will not have heard the name Soushilla unless you cured the vaxeler in <a idref="sect356">Section 356</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>noise, and</quote> with <quote>noise and</quote>. Replaced <quote>terror but</quote> with <quote>terror, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>) Replaced <quote>sky-ship and</quote> with <quote>skyship, and</quote>.</p>
@@ -6309,7 +6310,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect394">394</a>) Replaced <quote>madman, as</quote> with <quote>madman as</quote>. Replaced <quote>mass of writhing insects tumble</quote> with <quote>mass of writhing insects tumbles</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect395">395</a>) Replaced <quote>it, and</quote> with <quote>it and</quote>. Replaced <quote>beneath it, and come</quote> with <quote>beneath it and come</quote>. Replaced <quote>crackle and splutter</quote> with <quote>crackle and sputter</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect396">396</a>) Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>spirals stairs</quote> with <quote>spiral stairs</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect397">397</a>) Replaced <quote>If you wish to ask her if she is Soushilla</quote> with <quote>If you wish to ask her if she is Soushilla (only if you have heard that name before)</quote> since you will not have heard the name Soushilla unless you cured the vaxeler in <a idref="sect356">Section 356</a>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect397">397</a>) Added <quote>(only if you have heard that name before)</quote> since you will not have heard the name Soushilla unless you cured the vaxeler in <a idref="sect356">Section 356</a>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect399">399</a>) Replaced <quote>Alas I</quote> with <quote>Alas, I</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect400">400</a>) Added <quote>(If you lost the Sommerswerd in the confrontation with the Darklord, you may now retrieve it.)</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf series</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite> series</quote>. Replaced <quote>peaceful as</quote> with <quote>peaceful, as</quote>.</p>