From: Jonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Date: Tue, 6 Mar 2018 22:44:04 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: 14tcok: total score > your total score
X-Git-Tag: 20180411~9
X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=73ceb3a8b98ed5cc7df91f2fe8e8927c79b53e0b

14tcok: total score > your total score


git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2704 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11
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diff --git a/en/xml/14tcok.xml b/en/xml/14tcok.xml
index 897d2a6..89d0774 100644
--- a/en/xml/14tcok.xml
+++ b/en/xml/14tcok.xml
@@ -1164,7 +1164,7 @@
        <p><quote>I<ch.apos/>ve been sent here by my master to deliver an unholy relic,</quote> you say, patting your canvas haversack.</p>
        <p>The two guards stare at the satchel then look at each other and converse in a language you do not recognize.</p>
        <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you possess Kai-alchemy or Assimilance, add 2 to the number you have picked.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect239">If total score is now 5 or less, <link-text>turn to 239</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect239">If your total score is now 5 or less, <link-text>turn to 239</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect98">If it is 6 or more, <link-text>turn to 98</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
@@ -5793,6 +5793,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>) Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>Okak dan-ish! Ok der kog!<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><foreign xml:lang="x-giak"><ch.lsquot/>Okak dan-ish! Ok der kog!<ch.rsquot/></foreign><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect23">23</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect25">25</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkar guard</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim guard</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect26">26</a>) Replaced <quote>If total score</quote> with <quote>If your total score</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon<ch.apos/>s speech in favour of italicizing the text.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>tack and</quote> with <quote>tack, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>rib-cage</quote> with <quote>rib cage</quote>.</p>