From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 20:31:11 +0000 (+0000) Subject: correcting issues reported by gblint.pl X-Git-Tag: 20180215~13 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=871890dd70ac23e8e770709e04e3e9082d1a17ab correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2685 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/04cc.xml b/en/xml/04cc.xml index 0351efa..8c24a56 100644 --- a/en/xml/04cc.xml +++ b/en/xml/04cc.xml @@ -937,7 +937,7 @@

The first you see of Ajo is a battered city-limits sign looming out of the dusty darkness. Night has now fallen, although visibility was already so poor that you hardly notice the transition from day to night. Buildings appear as grey silhouettes, featureless and indistinguishable from one another. Suddenly the fear strikes you that you may never find the Ajo hospital, and therefore the vital Atropine, in time to save Kates life.

You have no idea where the hospital is located, so you decide to try to find a town map. You bring your car around and point it at the nearest building so that the headlights illuminate a sign that is fixed to the wall. It reads:

- AJO RANGER STATION + Ajo Ranger Station If you wish to enter this building, turn to 228. If you decide to continue along the highway, turn to 327. @@ -1262,9 +1262,9 @@

The route Jaeger took yesterday, when he hiked from the well in the mountains to Interstate 8, followed the course of the San Cristobal Wash. For him it was a difficult trail to follow on foot, and you soon discover that it is an even harder one to negotiate in a pick-up truck. The broken ground is deeply rutted and littered with boulders, and it takes more than an hour to make the fifteen-mile climb to the well.

The well itself is located at the bottom of a bowl-shaped gully, shaded from the sun by two peaks of the Mohawk Mountains. A pump house stands beside the bore-hole, to which is affixed a sign that reads:

- LUKE AIR FORCE RANGE - GARCIA WELL - US. GOVT. PROPERTYKEEP OUT! + Luke Air Force Range + Garcia Well + US. Govt. Propertykeep out!

You park the pick-up beside the pump house and Jaeger helps you unload the containers. I had to draw the water up by hand yesterday, he says, nodding towards the bore-hole, cause I couldnt get the pump to work. I reckon its OKjus needs some gasolene, thats all. Maybe if we could siphon some fuel from the truck we could get its engine running. Itd save us a whole lotta hard work.

If you possess some Plastic Tube, turn to 211. @@ -1663,7 +1663,7 @@

With a roar, the drums start to explode, showering the warehouse with liquid fire that triggers yet more explosions. With terror in your heart you look for a way to escape from the raging inferno. All you can see, through the billowing smoke and flame, is a staircase leading to an office on the first floor and a corridor marked by a sign that says:

- TEST LABORATORIES THIS WAY + Test Laboratories This Way If you wish to climb the stairs to the office, turn to 343. If you wish to follow the corridor to the test laboratories, turn to 111. @@ -3744,9 +3744,9 @@

Rather than continue in this direction, you decide to try a more indirect route that takes you west, away from the Wash, across an expanse of desert. By chance you happen upon the remains of a dirt road that winds southwards into the mountains. You stay with this track and, although its surface is far from perfect, you make good time.

At length you reach a ridge that overlooks the well. The site itself is located at the bottom of a bowl-shaped gully, shaded from the sun by two of the Mohawks highest peaks. A pump house stands beside the bore-hole, to which is affixed a sign that reads:

- LUKE AIR FORCE RANGE - GARCIA WELL - US GOVT. PROPERTYKEEP OUT! + Luke Air Force Range + Garcia Well + US. Govt. PropertyKeep Out!

Carefully you descend, following the dirt road as it zigzags towards the site. You are within a few hundred yards of your destination when you are faced by an unexpected hazard. You take a sharp right bend to find that a section of the road beyond has collapsed. You brake, but the wheels skid on the loose stones and the rear of the truck starts to slide out towards the edge. Frantically you fight to correct the skid as the truck slides nearer and nearer to the edge of the steep ravine.

Pick a number from the Random Number Table and add to it your Driving skill score. Add to this total your current ENDURANCE points score.

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You follow the highway for a quarter of a mile until you come to a junction. Directly ahead you see a large building with a sign that says:

- AJO FIRE STATION - PIMA COUNTY + Ajo Fire Station + Pima County

You feel sure that the local fire department would have a map of the local area, so you drive onto the forecourt and park near the main door. Covering your face against the stinging wind, you leave your roadster and run towards the building. Inside the lobby, bathed in the light from your vehicles headlamps, you find a laminated town map fixed to the counter. You grab a pen lying nearby and hurriedly note directions to the hospital on the back of your left hand.

As you turn to leave you notice an open door off to your left.

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(28) Replaced tracks, then with tracks, and then. Replaced click with click.

(29) Replaced Most of the colony still distrust with Most of the colony still distrusts. Replaced the Chargers clan are in control with the Chargers clan is in control.

(31) Replaced storerooms with store rooms.

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(32) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.). Replaced AJO RANGER STATION with Ajo Ranger Station.

(33) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.). Replaced time, and with time and.

(36) Replaced or are with or if you are.

(37) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.). Replaced bus, and with bus and. Replaced or are with or if you are.

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(51) Replaced 1 Pistol with Pistol. Replaced stiffen, then with stiffen, and then.

(52) Replaced head east with head west. Replaced Cmon Cal, weve with Cmon, Cal. Weve.

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(55) Replaced moutains with Mountains. Replaced syphon with siphon. Replaced Mohawk mountains with Mohawk Mountains. Replaced gasolene thats all with gasolene, thats all. Replaced San Christobal Wash with San Cristobal Wash. Replaced LUKE AIR FORCE RANGE GARCIA WELL US. GOVT. PROPERTYKEEP OUT! with Luke Air Force Range Garcia Well US. Govt. PropertyKeep Out!.

(56) Replaced freeway and follow the service road towards a diner, the largest building in the rest-stop complex, and park your roadster with freeway, follow the service road towards a dinerthe largest building in the rest-stop complexand park your roadster.

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(59) Replaced holes, then with holes, and then. Replaced me Cal with me, Cal. Replaced or choose with or if you choose.

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(80) Replaced intact, then with intact, and then.

(82) Replaced you Shooting skill with your Shooting skill.

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(84) Replaced TEST LABORATORIES THIS WAY with Test Laboratories This Way.

(85) Replaced take two Drinks or lose 6 ENDURANCE points with take two Drinks or lose 3 ENDURANCE points per drink missed.

(86) Replaced on to with onto.

(87) Replaced Mowhawk Mountains with Mohawk Mountains.

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(130) Replaced HE Grenade, and with HE Grenade and.

(131) Replaced Quick Cal, lets with Quick, Cal. Lets.

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(132) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(136) Replaced briefing, then with briefing, and then. Replaced flare, he says, and removes with flare. He removes. Replaced a promise, but with a promise; but.

(139) Replaced your life, and the case of food, intact with your lifeand the case of foodintact.

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(235) Replaced Kate, then with Kate, and then. Replaced their car and run with their car, and run.

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(238) Replaced zig-zags with zigzags. Replaced San Christobal Wash with San Cristobal Wash.

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(238) Replaced zig-zags with zigzags. Replaced San Christobal Wash with San Cristobal Wash. Replaced LUKE AIR FORCE RANGE GARCIA WELL US. GOVT. PROPERTYKEEP OUT! with Luke Air Force Range Garcia Well US. Govt. PropertyKeep Out!.

(239) Replaced in order set with in order to set. Replaced yellow flash, is with yellow flash is. Replaced attack, and the with attack and the.

(243) Replaced Jeager with Jaeger.

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(325) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(326) Replaced Cmon Cal, lets with Cmon, Cal. Lets.

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(327) Replaced on to with onto. Replaced AJO FIRE STATION PIMA COUNTY with Ajo Fire Station Pima County.

(328) Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.). Replaced again, and with again and.

(329) Replaced on to with onto.

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