From: Simon Osborne Date: Mon, 3 Mar 2014 13:36:25 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Changes to Book 28. X-Git-Tag: 20140625~43 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=9824bd8d8faada730906ed50683debd0a27f2705 Changes to Book 28. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2330 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/28thos.xml b/en/xml/28thos.xml index 0d76496..34b5bed 100644 --- a/en/xml/28thos.xml +++ b/en/xml/28thos.xml @@ -1478,7 +1478,7 @@ 18 -

As the carriage draws level with your horse, you leap from the saddle and scramble onto the roof. You are drawing your Kai Weapon from its sheath when one of the remaining monsters lashes out at you with its razor-sharp talons. You shield your face with your free arm, but its cruel claws slash your unarmoured limb: lose 4 ENDURANCE points. You must now fight them.

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As the carriage draws level with your horse, you leap from the saddle and scramble onto the roof. You are drawing your Kai Weapon from its sheath when one of the monsters lashes out at you with its razor-sharp talons. You shield your face with your free arm, but its cruel claws slash your unarmoured limb: lose 4 ENDURANCE points. You must now fight them.

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Hurriedly, you recite the words of the Brotherhood Spell Halt Missile, and sweep your hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronars arrow strikes the invisible shield created by your spell, and shatters harmlessly into a hundred pieces. Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow, and its barbed tip grazes his shoulder.

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Hurriedly, you recite the words of the Brotherhood Spell Invisible Shield, and sweep your hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronars arrow strikes the invisible shield created by your spell, and shatters harmlessly into a hundred pieces. Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow, and its barbed tip grazes his shoulder.

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Captain Chan, let the prisoner go you whisper, and be ready to signal to the caravan.

Reluctantly, Chan obeys your command. He unwinds the trailing rope from his saddle and Xango digs his heels into his horses flanks, making the animal lurch away at the gallop. As soon as his brother is out of the field of fire, Kronar utters a coarse laugh. Then, simultaneously, he and his companion let loose their straining bowstrings.

- If you possess Kai-alchemy and have attained the rank of Sun Knight, turn to 22. + If you possess Kai-alchemy and wish to use it, turn to 22. If you possess Magi-magic and wish to use it, turn to 215. - If you do not possess either of these skills, or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, turn instead to 170. + If you do not possess either of these skills, turn instead to 170. @@ -3843,7 +3843,7 @@ 215 -

Quickly, you speak the words of the Old Kingdom Spell Invisible Shield, and move your open hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronars arrow strikes the shimmering barrier created by your spell and is deflected harmlessly away. Captain Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow. His swift reflexes save his life, and he escapes the missiles barbed tip with nothing more than a grazed shoulder.

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Quickly, you speak the words of the Old Kingdom Spell Shield, and move your open hand before your face with a circular motion. Kronars arrow strikes the shimmering barrier created by your spell and is deflected harmlessly away. Captain Chan flattens himself to the neck of his horse to avoid the other arrow. His swift reflexes save his life, and he escapes the missiles barbed tip with nothing more than a grazed shoulder.

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(14) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced you look at each of the people in turn who have gathered with you look in turn at each person who is gathered.

(16) Replaced They lead with It leads respecting the robbers trail.

(17) Replaced Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing with Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing.

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(18) Replaced on to with onto. Replaced one of the two remaining with one of the remaining as there are still three of them.

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(18) Replaced on to with onto. Replaced one of the two remaining monsters with one of the monsters as there are still three of them.

(19) Replaced densely packed with densely-packed.

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(22) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell.

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(22) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced Halt Missile with Invisible Shield as the spell described in the section is Invisible Shield.

(24) Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon. Replaced the enemy have a with the enemy has a.

(25) Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Kai-surge, and with Kai-surge and.

(26) Replaced arrow with Arrow.

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(87) Replaced A healing fungi with A healing fungus.

(88) Replaced mid-summer with midsummer.

(90) Replaced Shavane, hell with Shavane. Hell.

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(92) Replaced Kai rank of with rank of. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

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(92) Replaced Kai rank of with rank of. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and have attained the rank of Sun Knight, with Kai-alchemy and wish to use it (cf. erratum for Section 22). Deleted or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, in view of the previous change, as an Improved Discipline is no longer required here. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

(94) Replaced gases and with gases, and.

(95) Replaced Crack!; the with Crack! The. Replaced ribcage with rib cage. Replaced Knight, or with Knight or. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

(96) Replaced throght with throughout. Replaced distant corridor with distant corridors.

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(212) Replaced power word with power-word.

(213) Replaced Kirusami with Kirusami. Replaced to 1 with by 1. Replaced point). with point.).

(214) Replaced platform, then with platform; then. Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced flagtower with flag-tower.

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(215) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell. Replaced reflex saves with reflexes save.

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(215) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell. Replaced reflex saves with reflexes save. Replaced Invisible Shield with Shield as Invisible Shield is a Brotherhood Spell, not an Old Kingdom Spell as here stated.

(217) Replaced out of Rakholi with out from Rakholi.

(218) Replaced each occurrence of ie, with i.e.. Replaced 7 or 9 with 7, or 9. Replaced 0, 2, 4, 6 or 8 with 2, 4, 6, 8, or 0. Replaced survived your wounds with survived your wounding.

(219) Replaced on to with onto.