From: Jonathan Blake Date: Fri, 20 Mar 2015 22:09:05 +0000 (+0000) Subject: minor change: switching square brackets to parentheses X-Git-Tag: 20150414~16 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=999b17d2726aa176f05d0d8c98a07882e43d2d08 minor change: switching square brackets to parentheses git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2429 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/02smr.xml b/en/xml/02smr.xml index e4964fb..56c5a7e 100644 --- a/en/xml/02smr.xml +++ b/en/xml/02smr.xml @@ -5542,7 +5542,7 @@

(276) Replaced perception skill with Perception skill.

(277) Replaced read weal with red weal.

(279) Replaced (minimum equals one; maximum equals four) with (minimum: one burst; maximum: four bursts). Replaced breach with breech.

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(281) Replaced For two days and nights the town is hit with All day and all night the town is hit. The convoy breaks out of Big Spring prior to daybreak and that morning Cal drives south to San Angelo, arriving at dusk. He spends the night in the basement of the Sears Megamarket. On day two, Cal rescues Kate and escapes from San Angelo. They spend that night in Eldorado [or fall asleep while driving through the night and crash]. The next day [day three], Cal and Kate drive to Bakersfield. They spend that night in the library there. On day four, they reach Fort Stockton and meet the WDL soldiers. At the beginning of Section 281, it mentions that the weather deteriorates at dawn the following morning which would be day five. So, two days and two nights of bad weather would mean that the heroes cannot leave until the morning of day seven. If it is day seven, however, that throws off the arrival at Kent which happens on day six, i.e. the day prior to the scheduled rendezvous with the convoy on day seven. It also throws off the statement in Section 350 that the adventure lasted one week. Therefore, amending the bad weather to one day and night rather than day six to day seven seems to be the best fix.

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(281) Replaced For two days and nights the town is hit with All day and all night the town is hit. The convoy breaks out of Big Spring prior to daybreak and that morning Cal drives south to San Angelo, arriving at dusk. He spends the night in the basement of the Sears Megamarket. On day two, Cal rescues Kate and escapes from San Angelo. They spend that night in Eldorado (or fall asleep while driving through the night and crash). The next day (day three), Cal and Kate drive to Bakersfield. They spend that night in the library there. On day four, they reach Fort Stockton and meet the WDL soldiers. At the beginning of Section 281, it mentions that the weather deteriorates at dawn the following morning which would be day five. So, two days and two nights of bad weather would mean that the heroes cannot leave until the morning of day seven. If it is day seven, however, that throws off the arrival at Kent which happens on day six, i.e. the day prior to the scheduled rendezvous with the convoy on day seven. It also throws off the statement in Section 350 that the adventure lasted one week. Therefore, amending the bad weather to one day and night rather than day six to day seven seems to be the best fix.

(282) Replaced If you do not possess a missile weapon, or lack sufficient ammunition to use it with If you do not possess a missile weapon, lack sufficient ammunition to use it, or do not wish to use it. Replaced weapon, and with weapon and.

(283) Replaced on to with onto.

(286) Replaced hand, causes with hand causes.