From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 21:06:17 +0000 (+0000) Subject: correcting issues reported by gblint.pl X-Git-Tag: 20180215~12 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=aaefe3988a2db10cdf1efa079951211a2bb307e3 correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2686 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/01gstw.xml b/en/xml/01gstw.xml index 89b2d75..65ed3b3 100644 --- a/en/xml/01gstw.xml +++ b/en/xml/01gstw.xml @@ -134,11 +134,6 @@ LeRoy McSwain Simon Osborne -
Coordination
Jonathan Blake @@ -1659,14 +1654,7 @@
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Taking Shans arm, you break into a trot, pulling him after you, though he seems to need little encouragement. Unfortunately your sudden movement attracts the attention of the Quoku, and a chorus of loud and rapid croaking fills the evening air.

The Wall of Azakawa is still many miles away and you pray that you will be able to outdistance the Quoku. Even if you should be able to reach the cliff-face, you know no way of crossing beyond the wall into the Azanam. With a growing dread, you fear that your run will be in vain. Unless you can find somewhere to hide, or think of a swift way of scaling the cliff once you reach it, you will be caught. But despite your doubt, you keep running: you have no choice.

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One stall in particular catches your eye. A sign reads:

- MADAM TARLASHERBAL CURES REMEDIES - APOTHECARY TO NOBLEMEN KINGS + Madam TarlasHerbal Cures Remedies + Apothecary to Noblemen Kings @@ -3072,7 +3060,7 @@

The narrow street widens and grows lighter. The source of the light is the window of a grim, stone building at the end of the street which opens on to the market square. Above the doorway of the building hangs a sign which reads:

- INN OF THE LAUGHING MOON + Inn of the Laughing Moon

You decide that you must try to find some information from the Suhnese inhabitants. Perhaps you can pick up some clues about the whereabouts of the Lost Tribe of Lara.

If you wish to try to gain this information in the market square, turn to 157. If you would rather enter the Inn of the Laughing Moon, turn to 82. @@ -5614,7 +5602,7 @@

(176) Replaced jailers with Gaolers. Replaced on to with onto.

(178) Replaced or would with or if you would.

(181) Replaced elemental plane with Elemental Plane.

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(183) Removed the line of periods from the first item. Replaced 1 jar of Ezeran crystals with 1 Jar of Ezeran Crystals. Replaced with sulphur) with with sulphur).. Replaced A Pestle and Mortar with Pestle and Mortar. Replaced 1 bottle of Naptha with 1 Bottle of Naphtha. Replaced 1 vial of Graveweed essence with 1 Vial of Graveweed Essence. Replaced 1 vial of Alether with 1 Vial of Alether. Replaced 1 bundle of dried Azawood leaves with 1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves. Replaced seeds with Seeds. Replaced these Items with these items.

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(183) Removed the line of periods from the first item. Replaced 1 jar of Ezeran crystals with 1 Jar of Ezeran Crystals. Replaced with sulphur) with with sulphur).. Replaced A Pestle and Mortar with Pestle and Mortar. Replaced 1 bottle of Naptha with 1 Bottle of Naphtha. Replaced 1 vial of Graveweed essence with 1 Vial of Graveweed Essence. Replaced 1 vial of Alether with 1 Vial of Alether. Replaced 1 bundle of dried Azawood leaves with 1 Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves. Replaced seeds with Seeds. Replaced these Items with these items. Replaced MADAM TARLASHERBAL CURES REMEDIES with Madam TarlasHerbal Cures Remedies. Replaced APOTHECARY TO NOBLEMEN KINGS with Apothecary to Noblemen Kings.

(184) Replaced cliff face with cliff-face.

(186) Replaced away hoping with away, hoping.

(187) Replaced tortuous with tortured. Replaced visited with been arrested at. Replaced Jailer with Gaoler.

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(191) Changed the second choice to lead to Section 314 instead of Section 150 and the third choice to lead to Section 288 instead of Section 320. These sections were unreachable in the original and make much more sense in the context of the story. Replaced astral plane, and with Astral Plane and.

(193) Replaced A Pestle and Mortar with Pestle and Mortar (Backpack Item). Replaced A packet of Ezeran crystals with Packet of Ezeran Crystals. Replaced 1 jar of Yabari ointment with Jar of Yabari Ointment. Replaced seeds with Seeds. Replaced the Items with the items.

(194) Replaced waist, with with waist with. Replaced closer and with closer, and. Replaced Shan but, overwhelmed with Shan, but overwhelmed.

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(195) Replaced street, which with street which. Replaced sign, which reads.: with sign which reads:.

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(195) Replaced street, which with street which. Replaced sign, which reads.: with sign which reads:. Replaced INN OF THE LAUGHING MOON with Inn of the Laughing Moon.

(197) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(199) Replaced each occurrence of power with Power.

(200) Replaced all instances of alley-ways with alleyways. Added the following choice: If you have the Magical Power of Prophecy and wish to use it, turn to 64. This is to parallel Section 40.