From: Simon Osborne Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2015 18:00:01 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Footnote Removal (Book 22); Checkerrata issue (Book 24) X-Git-Tag: 20180215~185 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=b774545cc2bae8169bdf73142130a143865a8c65 Footnote Removal (Book 22); Checkerrata issue (Book 24) git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2513 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/22tbos.xml b/en/xml/22tbos.xml index 5092557..cee7763 100644 --- a/en/xml/22tbos.xml +++ b/en/xml/22tbos.xml @@ -2172,16 +2172,10 @@
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As the Kholo is especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack, it seems reasonable that you may double all bonuses conferred by the use of Mindblast as well.

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Suddenly the growling stops and you sense that the creatures are preparing to attack. Hurriedly you draw a weapon as two wolf-like animals come bounding towards you from the rear of the cave.

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These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.

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These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.

If you win this combat, turn to 101.
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As the Kholo is especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack, it seems reasonable that you may double all bonuses conferred by the use of Mindblast as well.

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You take up your instrument and begin a soothing ballad that you hope will calm these hungry creatures. Unfortunately, the sound of your playing has an adverse effect upon them; they react in anger and immediately attack. Hurriedly you drop your instrument and draw a weapon as two wolf-like animals come bounding towards you from the rear of the cave.

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These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.

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These creatures are especially susceptible to all forms of psychic attack: double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.

If you win this combat, turn to 101.
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(83) Replaced timber and leather with timber, and leather. Replaced each occurrence of Nobels with Nobles. Replaced Nobel with Noble.

(84) Replaced Lourdanian with Lourdenian. Replaced The Captain with The captain.

(85) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced first volley of arrows come with first volley of arrows comes.

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(86) Replaced double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it with double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.

(87) Replaced broad-leafed with broad-leaved. Replaced Bow, and with Bow and. Replaced or choose with or if you choose.

(90) Replaced consciousness, then with consciousness; then. Replaced disorientated with disoriented. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and. Replaced Kai-surge, and with Kai-surge and.

(92) Added a paragraph break between you retort. and But. Added a paragraph break between the Captain. and Ive no. Replaced kilometre with mile. Replaced the Captain with the captain.

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(266) Replaced the creatures with the creature.

(267) Replaced Bow nor with Bow, nor. Replaced Bow, and with Bow and. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Elementalism, and with Elementalism and.

(268) Replaced the Captain with the captain.

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(269) Replaced double all bonuses if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it with double all bonuses to Kai-surge (or Mindblast) if you possess Kai-surge and elect to use it.

(270) Replaced to be indulged with to be indulged in. Added If the Kai Weapon you wield is Valiance, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties..

(271) Replaced Item. with Item.).

(272) Replaced the Derby with the derby. Replaced he warns, hes ruthless with he warns. Hes ruthless.

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(169) Replaced Volzoc potion with Potion of Volzoc. Replaced clang with clang.

(170) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

(172) Replaced 12 pistol balls with twelve pistol balls. Replaced Magnakai healing with Kai healing.

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(174) Replaced riverbank with river bank. Replaced Assimilance, and with Assimilance and. Replaced Kai rank of Grand with rank of Kai Grand. Replaced Kai Pathsmanship with Magnakai Pathsmanship. Separated the last paragraph about having neither skill into two paragraphs before or you can. Replaced you can either fix with you can fix. Replaced (turn to 117), with by turning to 117.. Replaced or you can with Or you can. Replaced (turn to 185) with by turning to 185.

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(174) Replaced riverbank with river bank. Replaced Assimilance, with Assimilance. Replaced Kai rank of Grand with rank of Kai Grand. Replaced Kai Pathsmanship with Magnakai Pathsmanship. Separated the last paragraph about having neither skill into two paragraphs before or you can. Replaced you can either fix with you can fix. Replaced (turn to 117), with by turning to 117.. Replaced or you can with Or you can. Replaced (turn to 185) with by turning to 185.

(175) Replaced leaching with leeching. Replaced each occurrence of Vial, and with Vial and.

(178) Replaced bellows, And with bellows. And. Added a paragraph break between alongside hers. and Stay.

(179) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Removed the dashes around Mind Charm.