From: Simon Osborne Date: Fri, 13 Jun 2014 12:40:03 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Last of the 28thos errata; 10tdot 65: 1000 miles -> 1,000 miles X-Git-Tag: 20140625~9 X-Git-Url: http://git.projectaon.org/?p=project-aon.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=caefa4e2ccf60d9115152141f8f7467f1fd9df3f Last of the 28thos errata; 10tdot 65: 1000 miles -> 1,000 miles git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2364 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- diff --git a/en/xml/10tdot.xml b/en/xml/10tdot.xml index 8c44600..e16c9f3 100644 --- a/en/xml/10tdot.xml +++ b/en/xml/10tdot.xml @@ -1445,7 +1445,7 @@ 65 -

You recognize the emblem of Salony, the smallest of the Stornland nations. The two soldiers are dressed in the uniforms of mercenary swordsmen from the town of Amory, which is situated close to its northern border. Fear and suspicion grow stronger and you try to fathom a reason why these soldiers of fortune are here on this remote isle, 1000 miles from their homeland.

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You recognize the emblem of Salony, the smallest of the Stornland nations. The two soldiers are dressed in the uniforms of mercenary swordsmen from the town of Amory, which is situated close to its northern border. Fear and suspicion grow stronger and you try to fathom a reason why these soldiers of fortune are here on this remote isle, 1,000 miles from their homeland.

One of the men struggles to his feet and begins walking towards you. You sense that he has not seen youhe is merely answering the call of naturebut you decide that it is wise to slip away. Under cover of the forest you return to the front of the building.

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(61) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

(62) Replaced rope and with Rope and.

(63) Replaced The hail of arrows and the sight of your black-clad form lurching towards them makes with The hail of arrows and the sight of your black-clad form lurching towards them make.

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(65) Replaced 1000 miles with 1,000 miles.

(66) Replaced Drakkar sniper with Drakkarim sniper to reflect standard usage.

(67) Replaced bow and with Bow and. Replaced foliage, then with foliage, and then.

(70) Replaced each occurrence of arrow with Arrow.

diff --git a/en/xml/28thos.xml b/en/xml/28thos.xml index ba9a235..aedbeda 100644 --- a/en/xml/28thos.xml +++ b/en/xml/28thos.xml @@ -2092,11 +2092,11 @@
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If your Kai Weapon is Illuminatus, you may decide that you should add an extra 2 points to the Tomb Robbers COMBAT SKILL as it is being used underground.

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You steel yourself for the attack, and then you kick open the door and launch yourself screaming into the chamber beyond. Your sudden appearance catches the robbers completely by surprise, but to your dismay, you soon discover that one of your adversaries is armed with your Kai Weapon which he delights in using against you.

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You draw your Kai Weapon and, as you raise it in readiness to strike the first blow, a heavy silver orb comes hurtling through the crypt door and cracks your forearm. Numbed by the unexpected force of its impact, you drop your Kai Weapon and cradle your aching limb to your chest. Seconds later, a group of swarthy-faced tomb robbers come running up the crypt steps and barge you aside. You grapple with one of them and wrest a dagger from his hand, but in the blink of an eye he draws another from his boot and attempts to stab you through the heart.

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You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon.

If you win this combat, turn to 139.
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Vannar delves among the pile of rags that litter the floor and produces a gleaming arrow, crafted of pure korlinium. Even in the poor light of this cell, the missile shimmers and gleams, radiating all of the colours of the rainbow. Its halo of light reveals its sorcerous origins.

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This was crafted by the Elder Magi millennia ago. It harbours the power to slay the vampire Lord Sejanoz. This is the reason why he would send his agents to pursue me, if he knew where I was.

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This was crafted by the Elder Magi millennia ago. It harbours the power to slay the vampire, Lord Sejanoz. This is the reason why he would send his agents to pursue me, if he knew where I was.

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If you possess Elementalism or Grand Nexus, you may increase your COMBAT SKILL by 3 for the duration of this fight.

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If you possess the Kai Weapon Valiance, you will benefit from its unique properties. If you possess Elementalism or Grand Nexus, you may increase your COMBAT SKILL by 3 for the duration of this fight.

If you win the combat, turn to 105. @@ -3956,6 +3957,7 @@

You draw your Kai Weapon but, as you raise it in readiness to defend yourself, a heavy silver orb comes hurtling through the air and strikes your forearm. Numbed by the unexpected force of its impact, you drop your Kai Weapon and cradle your aching limb to your chest. Seconds later, one of the tomb robbers comes leaping over the gravestone and drags you to the ground. You grapple with him and wrest a dagger from his hand, but in the blink of an eye he draws another from his boot and attempts to stab you through the heart.

Tomb Robber3035 +

You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon.

If you win this combat, turn to 139. @@ -4571,7 +4573,7 @@

The troopers work like demons to free you from the crushing weight of the carriage. Thanks to their speedy action you are released and pulled free within seconds of it tipping over, yet still the damage you sustain to your chest is considerable.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table and add 2 (0 = 10). If you possess Deliverance, you may deduct 2 from your total. The resultant score equals the number of ENDURANCE points you lose due to the crushing of your rib cage.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table (0 = 10) and add 2 if you do not possess Deliverance. The resultant score equals the number of ENDURANCE points you lose due to the crushing of your rib cage.

Make the necessary adjustments to your Action Chart before continuing your adventure by turning to 151. @@ -5533,7 +5535,7 @@

(87) Replaced A healing fungi with A healing fungus.

(88) Replaced mid-summer with midsummer.

(90) Replaced Shavane, hell with Shavane. Hell.

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(92) Replaced Kai rank of with rank of. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and have attained the rank of Sun Knight, with Kai-alchemy and wish to use it (cf. erratum for Section 22). Deleted or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, in view of the previous change, as an Improved Discipline is no longer required here. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

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(92) Replaced Kai-alchemy, and have attained the Kai rank of Sun Knight, with Kai-alchemy and wish to use it (cf. erratum for Section 22). Deleted or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, in view of the previous change, as an Improved Discipline is no longer required here. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

(94) Replaced gases and with gases, and.

(95) Replaced Crack!; the with Crack! The. Replaced ribcage with rib cage. Replaced Knight, or with Knight or. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

(96) Replaced throght with throughout. Replaced distant corridor with distant corridors.

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(168) Replaced none of these skills or rank, or the Backpack Item with neither of these skills, nor the Backpack Item, or have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Nexus, and with Nexus and.

(170) Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 6 or lower now leads to Section 55 which has the larger ENDURANCE penalty, whereas a score of 7 or more now leads to Section 285.

(171) Replaced imperial family with Imperial Family.

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(172) Replaced weapon with Kai Weapon.

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(172) Replaced weapon with Kai Weapon. Added You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon. (cf. Section 139).

(173) Replaced Mitzu, please with Mitzu. Please. Replaced with your Bow with with a Bow since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.

(174) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced add +1 to with add 1 to. Replaced rib-cage with rib cage. Replaced combat skill with COMBAT SKILL.

(175) Replaced power word with power-word.

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(185) Replaced each occurrence of Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced half ie, with half, i.e..

(186) Replaced pain, then with pain; then. Replaced both occurrences of arrow with Arrow. Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell.

(187) Replaced horse, then with horse, and then. Replaced Angsei with angsei. Replaced 20 Imperial Cavalry with twenty Imperial Cavalry. Replaced Kirusami with kirusami. Replaced Papers of State with papers of state.

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(189) Replaced therain-bow with the rainbow. Replaced milleniums with millennia.

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(189) Replaced therain-bow with the rainbow. Replaced milleniums with millennia. Replaced vampire Lord Sejanoz with vampire, Lord Sejanoz.

(190) Replaced special item with Special Item. Replaced each occurrence of the die with the dice.

(192) Replaced apporpriate with appropriate. Replaced Gold crowns with Gold Crowns.

(193) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell.

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(196) Replaced Klorva with a Potion of Klorva.

(197) Replaced crescendo, then with crescendo, and then. Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon.

(198) Replaced scouting party have with scouting party has. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Kai-surge, and with Kai-surge and.

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(200) Added If you possess the Kai Weapon Valiance, you will benefit from its unique properties. as Brumalghasts are magical creatures (cf. Section 235).

(201) Replaced agonising with agonizing. Replaced you Kai with your Kai.

(203) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell.

(204) Replaced reach Javai Forest with reach the Javai Forest, as elsewhere in this section and this book. Replaced freshly brewed with freshly-brewed. Replaced His gang have with His gang has. Replaced the Captain with the captain. Replaced his Captains with his captains.

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(220) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced you look at each of the people who are gathered here with you look at each of the persons gathered here.

(222) Replaced Between these with From between their. Replaced metres with yards.

(224) Replaced add +1 to with add 1 to.

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(225) Replaced weapon with Kai Weapon.

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(225) Replaced weapon with Kai Weapon. Added You must fight this combat without your Kai Weapon. (cf. Section 139).

(226) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(228) Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

(229) Replaced dwarves and with dwarves, and. Replaced The Captain with The captain. Replaced Astrology, and with Astrology and. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

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(262) Replaced Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing with Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing.

(265) Replaced as a Special Item which you store in your backpack with as a Special Item.

(266) Replaced each occurrence of flagtower with flag-tower.

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(267) Replaced my Lord with my lord.

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(267) Replaced my Lord with my lord. Replaced tyrant Lord of Bhanar with tyrant lord of Bhanar.

(270) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced each occurrence of metres with yards. Replaced well-founded with well founded. Replaced the Captain with the captain. Replaced The Captain with The captain.

(271) Replaced life and your mission ends with life and your mission end. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(272) Replaced gutteral with guttural. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and. Replaced Bow, and with Bow and.

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(275) Replaced ribcage with rib cage.

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(275) Replaced ribcage with rib cage. Replaced Random Number Table and add 2 (0 = 10). If you possess Deliverance, you may deduct 2 from your total with Random Number Table (0 = 10) and add 2 if you do not possess Deliverance.

(276) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced each occurrence of arrow with Arrow. Replaced flagtower with flag-tower. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

(277) Replaced hesitates, then with hesitates, and then. Replaced counter threat with counter-threat. Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 5 or lower now leads to Section 201 which has the larger ENDURANCE penalty, whereas a score of 6 or more now leads to Section 29.

(278) Replaced your surprise you with your surprise, you. Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon. Replaced metres with yards. Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon and 50 metres with 50 yards in the illustrations caption.