From: Simon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Date: Mon, 13 Jun 2016 09:56:21 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Change to Bk 17
X-Git-Tag: 20180215~162
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Change to Bk 17

git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2536 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11
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diff --git a/en/xml/17tdoi.xml b/en/xml/17tdoi.xml
index a3165f6..9e7c5b5 100644
--- a/en/xml/17tdoi.xml
+++ b/en/xml/17tdoi.xml
@@ -3995,7 +3995,7 @@
       <meta><title>240</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>You advance slowly along the slippery foredeck towards steps which ascend to the raised stern of this alien vessel. Every inch of its coal-black timbers are decorated with strange and intricate carvings, and archaic symbols embellish the metal rails which encircle its gunwales. Drawing on your Grand Master Disciplines, you determine that this vessel was not constructed by the unhuman creatures who crewed it, but that it is an ancient ship, built and crafted by a race of mariners who have long since disappeared into the mists of time. Closer examination of the timbers reveals it to be more than eleven thousand years old.</p>
+       <p>You advance slowly along the slippery foredeck towards steps which ascend to the raised stern of this alien vessel. Every inch of its coal-black timbers is decorated with strange and intricate carvings, and archaic symbols embellish the metal rails which encircle its gunwales. Drawing on your Grand Master Disciplines, you determine that this vessel was not constructed by the unhuman creatures who crewed it, but that it is an ancient ship, built and crafted by a race of mariners who have long since disappeared into the mists of time. Closer examination of the timbers reveals it to be more than eleven thousand years old.</p>
        <p>You climb to the wheelhouse, which stands in the centre of the stern deck, and discover there a large, glassy sphere mounted upon an ornate base of glittering black stone. A low hum and a faint greenish glow radiate from this sphere, which in turn is connected by silver tubes and strands of braided metal to the wheel which steers the craft. After careful study of the controls you feel confident that you could sail the vessel.</p>
        <p>Prarg enters the wheelhouse and announces that, having thoroughly searched the bow and below deck areas, he is sure that it is empty<ch.emdash/>no hidden enemies are lurking aboard.</p>
        <p><quote>Well, Grand Master,</quote> he continues, staring bemusedly at the strange workings of this craft, <quote>this is a rum craft and no mistake. Are you sure it can carry you to Ixia?</quote></p>
@@ -6067,7 +6067,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect235">235</a>) Replaced all occurrences of <quote>chaos-creatures</quote> with <quote>Chaos-creatures</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect236">236</a>) Replaced <quote>sea water</quote> with <quote>seawater</quote>. Replaced <quote>rail, then</quote> with <quote>rail, and then</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect239">239</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>fifteen thousand</quote> with <quote>eleven thousand</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect240">240</a>) Replaced <quote>fifteen thousand</quote> with <quote>eleven thousand</quote> in harmony with the Collector<ch.apos/>s Edition. Replaced <quote>are decorated</quote> with <quote>is decorated</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect241">241</a>) Replaced <quote>to see better</quote> with <quote>to better see</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun Knight, or higher</quote> with <quote>Sun Knight or higher</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect242">242</a>) Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect243">243</a>) Replaced <quote>Drakkarim undead</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim Undead</quote>. Reduced the illustration number from XVI to XV (see erratum for <a idref="sect69">Section 69</a>).</p>