From ef978d0335daf77a5251a191e7ffcfa8f38be0d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Fri, 18 Jan 2013 23:18:27 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Standardise "my lord" to lower case (excepting "my Lord Rimoah" in Book 7) git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2194 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/01fftd.xml | 4 ++-- en/xml/04tcod.xml | 12 ++++++------ en/xml/15tdc.xml | 4 ++-- en/xml/17tdoi.xml | 4 ++-- en/xml/18dotd.xml | 20 ++++++++++---------- en/xml/22tbos.xml | 8 ++++---- en/xml/27v.xml | 4 ++-- en/xml/28thos.xml | 3 ++- 8 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/01fftd.xml b/en/xml/01fftd.xml index 2ab2127..21cef6c 100644 --- a/en/xml/01fftd.xml +++ b/en/xml/01fftd.xml @@ -1710,7 +1710,7 @@ 88 -

You cautiously peer around the rock to see a soldier lying on his back. By his side is a Spear and shield. On the shield is the painting of a white pegasusthe Prince of Sommerlunds emblem. He is one of the Princes soldiers, and he is only just conscious. His uniform is badly torn, and you can see that he has a deep wound in his left arm. As you move nearer, his eyes flicker open. Heal me, my Lord, he begs. I can barely feel my arm.

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You cautiously peer around the rock to see a soldier lying on his back. By his side is a Spear and shield. On the shield is the painting of a white pegasusthe Prince of Sommerlunds emblem. He is one of the Princes soldiers, and he is only just conscious. His uniform is badly torn, and you can see that he has a deep wound in his left arm. As you move nearer, his eyes flicker open. Heal me, my lord, he begs. I can barely feel my arm.

If you possess and wish to use the Kai Discipline of Healing on this man, turn to 216. If you do not possess the skill, or if you do not want to use it, then turn to 31. @@ -5682,7 +5682,7 @@

(82) Replaced steed and with steed, and.

(83) Added another s after posses in the last choice and moved that choice into the first position.

(87) Replaced Graveweed with graveweed. Replaced click with click.

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(88) Replaced or do with or if you do.

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(88) Replaced or do with or if you do. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(91) Moved the last choice (about Sixth Sense) into the first position.

(97) Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(105) Replaced jet black with jet-black. Replaced skill, with skill, or if you do not wish to use it,.

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As the warrior falls dead at your feet, you turn to rally your men. To your horror, you see three of them lying spread-eagled on the stairs, killed by crossbow bolts. The other man is wounded and surrounded by the enemy. As more guards flood into the chamber, he shouts in desperation, Flee, my Lord. Escape while you still can.

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As the warrior falls dead at your feet, you turn to rally your men. To your horror, you see three of them lying spread-eagled on the stairs, killed by crossbow bolts. The other man is wounded and surrounded by the enemy. As more guards flood into the chamber, he shouts in desperation, Flee, my lord. Escape while you still can.

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Your men push open the door with their swords and quickly enter. You hear a muffled voice, and a ranger soon reappears at the door. It is safe, my Lord, he says, and stands aside to allow you to enter.

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Your men push open the door with their swords and quickly enter. You hear a muffled voice, and a ranger soon reappears at the door. It is safe, my lord, he says, and stands aside to allow you to enter.

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The two guards are completely unprepared for your attack. They have only just drawn their swords when your men reach them and knock them both to the ground.

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Shall we dispatch them immediately, my Lord? asks a ranger, his sword tip at the throat of a nervous guard.

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Shall we dispatch them immediately, my lord? asks a ranger, his sword tip at the throat of a nervous guard.

No, you reply. Tie them. They may be of some use to us yet.

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(67) Replaced razor sharp with razor-sharp. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(69) Replaced away and with away, and.

(70) Replaced the middle choice If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, with If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by turning to 159. and moved it to the bottom. Also changed duties and with duties, and. Replaced tracks and with tracks, and.

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(71) Replaced spreadeagled with spread-eagled. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(72) Replaced enemy, which with enemy which. Replaced you, and with you and. Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

(73) Replaced this Item with this item.

(74) Replaced incident and with incident, and. Replaced burnt out with burnt-out.

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(303) Replaced ladder and with ladder, and.

(304) Replaced air and with air, and.

(305) Replaced slovenlinesss with slovenliness.

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(306) Replaced voice and with voice, and. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(307) Replaced pace and with pace, and. Replaced Ruanon but with Ruanon, but.

(308) Replaced ground, its with ground; its. Replaced combat and with combat, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

(309) Replaced minutes you with minutes, you. Replaced each of the ramps are guarded with each of the ramps is guarded.

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(314) Replaced duties and with duties, and. Replaced window and with window, and.

(315) Replaced damp and with damp, and. Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced Torch with torch as the lit torch does not count towards your Backpack Items limit.

(318) Replaced war-lord with warlord. Replaced dead and with dead, and. Replaced town and with town, and in the illustrations caption. Replaced town and with town, and.

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(320) Replaced despatch with dispatch. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(321) Replaced No trace of your men remain with No trace of your men remains.

(322) Replaced Shovels and with shovels, and. Replaced Torch you with torch, you. Replaced Torch with torch as the lit torch does not count towards your Backpack Items limit.

(323) Replaced arrow and with arrow, and. Replaced bandit-leader with Bandit Leader.

diff --git a/en/xml/15tdc.xml b/en/xml/15tdc.xml index 4a59271..d022235 100644 --- a/en/xml/15tdc.xml +++ b/en/xml/15tdc.xml @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@

With respect, my lord, surely this one weapon, however evil it may be, is no match when pitted against all the armoured might of Lencia? you replied diplomatically, as yet unconvinced by the envoys plea.

Perhaps so, Grand Master, he replied, were the nature of the threat merely the weapon alone. Sadly this is not the only issue here. Until now, the Nadziranim sorcerers who control the strongholds of Kagorst and Akagazad have refused to aid Magnaarn in his war against us. Many times he has begged them for help, for within those fortress walls are thousands of Giaks and other breeds who sought sanctuary there after the defeat of the Darklords. They still possess their weapons and they would make a formidable enemy if ever they were mustered against us. Magnaarns possession of the Doomstone of Darke will most certainly influence the Nadziranim. Its power is such that Magnaarn could simply force them to obey his every command. Their refusal would result in their immediate destruction.

Politely you dismissed the envoy whilst you considered your response to his plea. In the solitude of your chamber you pondered the problem, weighing the plight of Lencia against your duties and responsibilities there at the Kai Monastery. At length, after careful deliberation, you reached your decision.

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Well my Lord? enquired the envoy, nervously, upon re-entering your chamber. Will you help us thwart Magnaarn?

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Well my lord? enquired the envoy, nervously, upon re-entering your chamber. Will you help us thwart Magnaarn?

Once, not so very long ago, your King and his army aided me during my quest for the Magnakai, you replied. Perhaps now the time has come for me to repay my debt of gratitude. Yes, I shall help you. I shall return with you to Lencia and champion your cause. I vow that I shall do all in my power to thwart Magnaarns quest.

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(Blurb) Replaced THE DARKE CRUSADE with The Darke Crusade.

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(The Story So Far) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced feted with fted. Replaced both occurrences of Left-Handed with Left-handed. Replaced Right-Handed with Right-handed. Replaced freestate with Freeland. Replaced both occurrences of doomstone with Doomstone. Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord. Replaced monastery of the Kai with Monastery of the Kai. Replaced each occurrence of Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced new-found with newfound. Added a paragraph break after their own extinction in line with this section in other Grand Master books. Replaced north-east with northeast. Replaced Old Kingdom Magic with Old Kingdom magic. Replaced Akagazad and with Akagazad, and. Replaced Banedon, then with Banedon, and then. Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced each occurrence of Magic with magic. Replaced comprised with were part of. Replaced he replied, Were the with he replied, were the.

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(The Story So Far) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced feted with fted. Replaced both occurrences of Left-Handed with Left-handed. Replaced Right-Handed with Right-handed. Replaced freestate with Freeland. Replaced both occurrences of doomstone with Doomstone. Replaced Kai lord with Kai Lord. Replaced monastery of the Kai with Monastery of the Kai. Replaced each occurrence of Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced new-found with newfound. Added a paragraph break after their own extinction in line with this section in other Grand Master books. Replaced north-east with northeast. Replaced Old Kingdom Magic with Old Kingdom magic. Replaced Akagazad and with Akagazad, and. Replaced Banedon, then with Banedon, and then. Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced each occurrence of Magic with magic. Replaced comprised with were part of. Replaced he replied, Were the with he replied, were the. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(The Game Rules) Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages. Removed on the last page of this book. Replaced both occurrences of (ie with (i.e.. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below. Replaced each occurrence of Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced Chart (you with Chart. (You. Replaced Items). with Items.). Replaced on to with onto. Replaced each occurrence of Lone Wolf Kai with Lone Wolf Kai. Replaced each occurrence of Magnakai with Magnakai. Replaced Grand Master series with Lone Wolf Grand Master series. Replaced Lone Wolf Grand Master series with Lone Wolf Grand Master series. Added Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the Lone Wolf Kai and Lone Wolf Magnakai books in harmony with the Mongoose Publishing edition.

diff --git a/en/xml/17tdoi.xml b/en/xml/17tdoi.xml index 33f76d4..af7bf7d 100644 --- a/en/xml/17tdoi.xml +++ b/en/xml/17tdoi.xml @@ -1173,7 +1173,7 @@

Skilfully Bosun Nolrim lands the Skyrider on the paved courtyard in front of the Vadera Citadel, which has been cleared of crowds in expectation of your arrival. Awaiting you is a party of stern-faced Vadera officials who, with a minimum of fuss, escort you and Banedon directly to the court of King Sarnac.

We are honoured to welcome you once again to our city, Grand Master, says the silver-haired King. My only regret is the reason for your visit. Id have hoped our meeting would have been in less ominous circumstances.

Formally you acknowledge the Kings greeting; then you turn to face the elderly man who is standing beside the Kings throne. You recognized him as soon as you entered the Kings chamberhe is Lord Ardan, an Elder Magi from Dessi, one of Lord Rimoahs countrymen.

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Well met, my Lord, you say, and Ardan returns your greeting with a smile. Sadly, his smile soon fades when he says: No doubt your able companion, Guildmaster Banedon, has told you of the rise of evil in Ixia. Dire news indeed, Grand Master, for it threatens our very existence, most especially the existence of our Lencian friends. If the Deathlords power is allowed to grow unchecked, Lencia will be the first Freeland state to suffer his wrath.

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Well met, my lord, you say, and Ardan returns your greeting with a smile. Sadly, his smile soon fades when he says: No doubt your able companion, Guildmaster Banedon, has told you of the rise of evil in Ixia. Dire news indeed, Grand Master, for it threatens our very existence, most especially the existence of our Lencian friends. If the Deathlords power is allowed to grow unchecked, Lencia will be the first Freeland state to suffer his wrath.

I pledge to do all in my power to prevent such an outcome, my lord, you reply earnestly.

We have every faith in you, Lone Wolf, says King Sarnac, and we shall help you accomplish your mission in whatever way we can. He signals to one of his silver-armoured bodyguards and the soldier leaves the chamber. He returns shortly in the company of another man, clad in the court uniform of a Guard Captain.

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(18) Replaced Skark oil with skark oil. Began a new paragraph before Do not fear,. Replaced you reply, I shall soon return. with you reply. I shall soon return.. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced fought, Captain with fought, captain.

(19) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery. Replaced attained, above with attained above.

(20) Replaced now-open with now open. Replaced all occurrences of free-standing with freestanding. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

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(22) Replaced freestate with Freeland state. Replaced in previous Lone Wolf adventures with in any previous Lone Wolf adventures. Replaced If you have not with If you did not. Replaced King greeting, then with Kings greeting; then. Replaced the Lencian capital with the great northern Lencian port in harmony with the recent Mongoose Publishing edition. Replaced Cetza, or with Cetza or. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(23) Replaced Ixian undead with Ixian Undead.

(24) Replaced your psi-screen with your Psi-screen. Replaced head in which with head from which. Replaced Bow, and with Bow and. Replaced them, or with them or.

(25) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

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The Lord Constable is an imposing man with a proud and noble countenance. At your approach he removes a white leather gauntlet and welcomes you with a formal salute.

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Greetings, my Lord, he says, his voice deep and resonant. Welcome to Garthen. I am Nathor, Lord Constable of the Royal Citadel. It would be an honour if you would allow me to escort you and Lord Ardan to an audience with Queen Evaine.

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Greetings, my lord, he says, his voice deep and resonant. Welcome to Garthen. I am Nathor, Lord Constable of the Royal Citadel. It would be an honour if you would allow me to escort you and Lord Ardan to an audience with Queen Evaine.

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In the name of the gods! splutters Nathor, spilling liqueur down the front of his tunic. What was that?

A knot of fear tightens in the pit of your stomach. A Kraan, you reply, recognizing at once the fell cry of this unwelcome creature.

You hurry to a window and see the large, bat-like Kraan silhouetted against the moon. A man-sized rider clings precariously to the creatures reptilian back as it swoops and soars among the hills and gullies.

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You had best come away from the window, my Lord, replies an anxious Nathor, lest it detect your presence here.

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You had best come away from the window, my lord, replies an anxious Nathor, lest it detect your presence here.

You take heed of the Lord Constables advice and retreat from the window. Furthermore, you use your Magnakai skill of Psi-screen to shield your mind in case the Kraan rider is able to employ psychic abilities to locate your presence.

It is not the first time it has come, says Rasbarin. Every night for the past ten days weve heard it circling the hills. Sometimes there is more than one of its kind. He suggests that you bunk in the cellar of the monastery where you may be safer from detection, and you accept his offer gladly.

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You give the gruff-looking fellow a slight bow and he nods his head in response, albeit begrudgingly.

We are returning from a visit to my cousins estate. We were hoping to reach Kalma by sunset, but we were delayed by bandits, she says, almost apologetically.

We made em pay dearly for wastin our time, though, adds Dorst, with quiet menace.

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It appears that we shall now have to encamp here in the hills this night, says the Baroness. Perhaps you would care to join us, my Lord? I would feel so much safer if you did.

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It appears that we shall now have to encamp here in the hills this night, says the Baroness. Perhaps you would care to join us, my lord? I would feel so much safer if you did.

Despite Dorsts cutting glances, you agree to the Baronesss proposal. Then you produce the six trout that you caught earlier and offer them to her as a gift.

Why, thank you, she says, with a wide smile. They lookdelicious.

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In the name of the gods! splutters Nathor, spilling liqueur down the front of his tunic. What was that?

You hurry to the window and see a large, bat-like shape silhouetted against the moon. A man-sized rider clings precariously to the creatures back as it swoops and soars among the hills and gullies. A knot of fear tightens in the pit of your stomach.

A Kraan, you say, recognizing at once the outline of this unwelcome creature.

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You had best come away from the window, my Lord, replies an anxious Nathor, lest it detect your presence here.

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You had best come away from the window, my lord, replies an anxious Nathor, lest it detect your presence here.

You take heed of the Lord Constables advice and retreat from the window. Furthermore, you use your Magnakai skill of Psi-screen to shield your mind in case the Kraan rider is able to employ psychic abilities to locate your presence.

It is not the first time, says Rasbarin. Every night for the past ten days weve heard it circling the hills. Sometimes there is more than one of its kind. He offers you a bunk in the cellar of the monastery where you may be safe from detection, and you accept gladly.

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The smooth dark hair and noble countenance of the Lord Constable are oddly familiar, reminding you of someone whose name momentarily you cannot recall.

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Welcome, my Lord, he says, with a respectful salute. I am Nathor, Lord Constable of the Royal Citadel. My troop would be honoured to escort you to an audience with Queen Evaine.

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Welcome, my lord, he says, with a respectful salute. I am Nathor, Lord Constable of the Royal Citadel. My troop would be honoured to escort you to an audience with Queen Evaine.

Pray tell me, Lord Constable, you reply, have we not met before?

No, sire. I venture you must be thinking of my late brotherAdamas. He held the office of Lord Constable afore me. I understand that you and he once fought together in the war gainst the Darklords. He spoke most highly of your courage. Sadly, though, he is no longer with us. He died valiantly during the great siege of Torgar.

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(44) Replaced Tyso, He with Tyso. He. Replaced heavy, The with heavy, the. Replaced new order with New Order.

(45) Replaced Lucky Bucket inn with Lucky Bucket Inn.

(46) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced the levitation spell with the Levitation spell.

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(48) Replaced resonant, Welcome with resonant. Welcome. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(49) Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced says. The with says. The. Replaced Sun-Crystal with Sun-crystal. Replaced the Tower with the tower. Replaced Ravens Eerie with Ravens Eyrie.

(51) Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced Gr..Grand with GrGrand. Replaced GodsOur with gods! Our. Replaced they are the rays with it is the rays. Replaced warmly golden light with warm golden light.

(52) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced reduce you with reduce your. Replaced (imposters) with (impostors). Replaced guardsmen with Guardsmen.

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(59) Replaced points.) with points).. Replaced coach, then with coach, and then.

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(61) Replaced tunic, what with tunic. What. Replaced gulleys with gullies. Replaced Kai-screen with Psi-screen. Replaced lest it detects with lest it detect. Replaced In the name of the Gods with In the name of the gods. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(63) Replaced counter-charge with countercharge. Replaced brigands with Brigands. Replaced wave of brigands come with wave of brigands comes. Replaced rounds, by with rounds by.

(64) Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced world, then Sommerlund with world, Sommerlund.

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(132) Replaced gaoler, Ive with gaoler. Ive. Merged the paragraph that ends with the cruel pincers with the following paragraph. Replaced tough un with tough un. Replaced Disciplines, or with Disciplines or.

(133) Replaced dug-out, then with dugout; then. Replaced line of Eldenoran soldiers have with line of Eldenoran soldiers has.

(134) Replaced both occurrences of Sun-Crystal with Sun-crystal. Replaced the Gate with the Shadow Gate.

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(135) Replaced smile, they with smile. They. Replaced on to with onto.

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(135) Replaced smile, they with smile. They. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(136) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced Sun-Crystal with Sun-crystal. Replaced shoulder, you with shoulder. You.

(137) Replaced (imposters) with (impostors). Replaced guardsmen with Guardsmen. Replaced horde of bogus castle guardsmen come with horde of bogus castle guardsmen comes.

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(196) Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery. Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced Sun Lord, or higher with Sun Lord or higher. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

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(198) Replaced tunic, what with tunic. What. Replaced gulleys with gullies. Replaced Kai-screen with Psi-screen. Replaced lest it detects with lest it detect. Replaced In the name of the Gods with In the name of the gods. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(200) Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and.

(201) Replaced Sir with sir.

(202) Replaced co-operation with cooperation. Replaced 3 arrows with 3 Arrows. Replaced a line of soldiers come with a line of soldiers comes. Replaced half mile with half-mile. Replaced smile, then with smile, and then.

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(289) Replaced Captain with captain. Replaced Deliverance, and with Deliverance and.

(290) Replaced Items however with Items, however. Replaced weapons, money pouch, backpack, with Weapons, Belt Pouch, Backpack,. Replaced cord, then with cord; then.

(291) Replaced both occurrences of lavas with Lavas. Replaced both occurrences of Sun-Crystal with Sun-crystal. Replaced the Gate with the Shadow Gate. Replaced Kai masteries warn with Kai Mastery warns. Replaced flight pass with flight passes.

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(292) Replaced salute, I with salute. I. Replaced The smooth dark hair and noble countenance of the Lord Constable is oddly with The smooth dark hair and noble countenance of the Lord Constable are oddly.

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(292) Replaced salute, I with salute. I. Replaced The smooth dark hair and noble countenance of the Lord Constable is oddly with The smooth dark hair and noble countenance of the Lord Constable are oddly. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(293) Replaced bow, and with Bow and. Replaced continues their charge with continues its charge.

(295) Replaced despatch with dispatch. Replaced out-distance with outdistance.

(297) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell. Replaced Grand Huntmastery with Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced all occurrences of arrow with Arrow.

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Lone Wolf has prepared you well for your mission, he says, as he secures the buckle. Im sure I have no need to remind you to keep this bag closed at all times. You are about to venture through dangerous territory, and there are many who would give anything to possess the contents of this satchel. You would be wise to trust only yourself, Grand Master. (If you have not already done so, record the Moonstone on your Action Chart as a Special Item. You carry it slung over your shoulder in its leather satchel.)

Rimoah escorts you to your room and tells you that he will call for you at an hour before dawn to take you to the quay. As he bids you goodnight, a doleful bell rings out in some distant part of the city. Rimoahs eyes fill with sadness.

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What does the bell mean, my Lord? you ask.

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What does the bell mean, my lord? you ask.

It signifies the passing of Lord Casis. He, too, is about to begin a journey. Alas, it will be his last. I must go nowI am being summoned to witness his departure.

As he leaves, Rimoah pauses for a moment and then glances back over his shoulder. You are welcome to accompany me if you wish, Grand Master. The passing of an Elder is a rare and special occasion. You may learn much from what you see.

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Only by virtue of your possession of the Moonstone can this voyage be undertaken with any hope of success, he says. I have been in mind-contact with the Shianti, and they are ready to receive you.

You sense that Zinair is proud of your successes and achievements during the quest so far, but you also sense that he is ill at ease and you ask him what is wrong.

The Moonstone will facilitate your passage through the Sea of Dreams to the Isle of Lorn, Grand Master. But you should know that this journey could still prove perilous. The Shianti no longer have control over the forces that exist within this enchanted region. Until you reach the shores of Lorn, your fate will be entirely in your own hands.

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It is a daunting message but you do not allow it to weaken your resolve. You stare Lord Zinair confidently in the eye as you reply: It need be no other way, my Lord. I am ready.

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It is a daunting message but you do not allow it to weaken your resolve. You stare Lord Zinair confidently in the eye as you reply: It need be no other way, my lord. I am ready.

Zinair smiles. So be it, Grand Master. But now you must sleep, for you sail at dawn.

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(New Order Wisdom) Replaced gods with Gods. Italicised Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced New Order adventure with New Order adventure.

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(1) Added a paragraph break between you ask. and It signifies. Replaced Korlinium with korlinium. Replaced well-treated with well treated. Replaced Record the Moonstone with If you have not already done so, record the Moonstone. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(2) Replaced by, then with by, and then. Removed quotation marks from around the thought-speech.

(3) Removed the dash preceding Gloar!. Replaced barge with charge. Replaced power word with power-word.

(5) Replaced metres with yards.

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(182) Replaced Grand Mastery skills with Grand Mastery. Replaced drawbolt with bolt.

(184) Replaced hustle and with hustle, and. Replaced fact it with fact, it. Replaced jade green with jade-green.

(185) Replaced rainswept with rain-swept.

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(186) Replaced enchantments and magical mists and winds with enchantments, magical mists, and mage winds as that is the phrase Joe originally wrote.

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(186) Replaced enchantments and magical mists and winds with enchantments, magical mists, and mage winds as that is the phrase Joe originally wrote. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(187) Replaced each occurrence of jailers with gaolers. Altered the links to read Turn to 314 since it is impossible to arrive in this section carrying an Iron Key. They originally read:

If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 125.

If you do not possess this item, turn to 314.

diff --git a/en/xml/27v.xml b/en/xml/27v.xml index 9b7f239..4a4ef5f 100644 --- a/en/xml/27v.xml +++ b/en/xml/27v.xml @@ -177,7 +177,7 @@

Lone Wolf slowly turned to face you. I am tempted to accept this challenge myself, Grand Master, he said, as he held you with his unblinking gaze. But, alas, I must attend a War Council tomorrow at the Kings Court in Holmgard. Will you journey to Bhanar in my stead and help Lord Rimoah to capture the Claw of Naar?

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Yes, my Lord, you replied, without hesitation. For the greater glory of Sommerlund and the Kai, I am proud to accept this task.

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Yes, my lord, you replied, without hesitation. For the greater glory of Sommerlund and the Kai, I am proud to accept this task.

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(Title Page) Replaced VAMPIRIUM with Vampirium.

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(The Story so Far) Replaced 5084 with 5085. Replaced both occurrences of elite with lite. Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced Free Alliance with Freeland Alliance. Replaced monastery of the Kai with Monastery of the Kai. Replaced the Monastery with the monastery. Replaced autocracy of Bhanar with Autocracy of Bhanar. Replaced Southern Dammerdon mountains with Southern Dammerdon Mountains. Replaced despatched with dispatched. Replaced Darklord armies with Darkland armies. Replaced the First Order of the Kai were with the First Order of the Kai was. Replaced Spring with spring.

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(The Story so Far) Replaced 5084 with 5085. Replaced both occurrences of elite with lite. Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced Free Alliance with Freeland Alliance. Replaced monastery of the Kai with Monastery of the Kai. Replaced the Monastery with the monastery. Replaced autocracy of Bhanar with Autocracy of Bhanar. Replaced Southern Dammerdon mountains with Southern Dammerdon Mountains. Replaced despatched with dispatched. Replaced Darklord armies with Darkland armies. Replaced the First Order of the Kai were with the First Order of the Kai was. Replaced Spring with spring. Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(The Game Rules) Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages. Removed on the last page of this book. Replaced each occurrence of ie with i.e.. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced weapons and with weapons, and. Replaced normal weapons with normal Weapons. Replaced Lone Wolf New Order series with Lone Wolf New Order series. Replaced New Order adventure with New Order adventure.

diff --git a/en/xml/28thos.xml b/en/xml/28thos.xml index 860f5e3..f22d5e9 100644 --- a/en/xml/28thos.xml +++ b/en/xml/28thos.xml @@ -4446,7 +4446,7 @@ 267 -

I intend to make a gift of it to you, my Lord. It is fitting that a Kai should possess this weapon. I pray that one day you shall be able to put it to its proper purposeto use this missile to slay the tyrant lord of Bhanar.

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I intend to make a gift of it to you, my lord. It is fitting that a Kai should possess this weapon. I pray that one day you shall be able to put it to its proper purposeto use this missile to slay the tyrant lord of Bhanar.

Reverently he hands the arrow to you and you accept it gratefully.

Record this Arrow of Atonement as a Special Item. You must discard another item if you already carry the maximum number permissible.

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(262) Replaced Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Healing with Magnakai Disciplines of Nexus and Curing.

(265) Replaced as a Special Item which you store in your backpack with as a Special Item.

(266) Replaced each occurrence of flagtower with flag-tower.

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(267) Replaced my Lord with my lord.

(270) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced each occurrence of metres with yards. Replaced well-founded with well founded. Replaced the Captain with the captain. Replaced The Captain with The captain.

(271) Replaced life and your mission ends with life and your mission end. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(272) Replaced gutteral with guttural. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and. Replaced Bow, and with Bow and.

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