From 0fe4105650841bd7c919094c9c6a720189059f82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Thu, 14 Jul 2005 17:36:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Fixed issues from Editor and Simon's reports about captions. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@76 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- xml/02tfc.xml | 15 ++++++++++----- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/xml/02tfc.xml b/xml/02tfc.xml index 0173abe..20b93eb 100755 --- a/xml/02tfc.xml +++ b/xml/02tfc.xml @@ -20,6 +20,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.7 2005/07/14 17:36:39 jonathan.blake +Fixed issues from Editor and Simon's reports about captions. + Revision 1.6 2005/07/13 03:47:27 jonathan.blake Added illustrations for Powers section. @@ -715,7 +718,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield Paul Bonner - A mass of slime and mud rises up out of the quagmire, it is a Swamp Giant + A mass of slime and mud rises up out of the quagmire; it is a Swamp Giant @@ -2252,7 +2255,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield

There is only one known pass, Sado continues, but it holds the greatest peril of all&emdash;Gyanima, the Forbidden City&ellips; the City of the Dead! He shakes his head solemnly. Will you not turn away from this reckless course?

You shrug. There is no other way. Urik's vision leads to Desolation Valley and my quest takes me there.

Sado falls silent and an uncomfortable quiet follows. Finally, you rise and bid Sado goodnight, for you intend to leave Karnali the following morning. I had hoped you would remain, Grey Star, he says. You are a powerful ally and I have great need of strength. Soon, the Wytch-king will seek to destroy our freedom. Without your help, our liberty may prove short-lived. Moreover, you choose a path of doom, heedless of my words of warning.

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Fear not, Sado of the Long Knife, you reply. If l achieve my goal, there will be freedom for all ensnared by the cruel grasp of the Wytch-king. I do not intend to fail.

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Fear not, Sado of the Long Knife, you reply. If I achieve my goal, there will be freedom for all ensnared by the cruel grasp of the Wytch-king. I do not intend to fail.

You leave the chamber, and close the door behind you. Despite your courageous words, a creeping uncertainty is stirring in your heart. Hmph! snorts Urik. Him brave man&ellips; but have small mind. He places a finger to his nose. Him see only this far. Young Wizard learn quickly&ellips; carry blessing of wise Shianti. You will not fail. You pray that the old Kundi man is right.

You rise the following morning and prepare to leave. Your sleep has restored to you 1 ENDURANCE point and 1 WILLPOWER point. Sado enters your chamber to bid you farewell. I have come to apologize for my harsh words last night, he says. It is not for me to question the way of Wizards. I am but a simple soldier. I have brought gifts by way of recompense. He lays before you the following items:

@@ -2402,7 +2405,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield Paul Bonner - The Deathgaunts come no further but remain outside the reach of the spell whispering + The Deathgaunts come no further but remain outside the reach of the spell, whispering @@ -2804,7 +2807,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield Paul Bonner - Samu, lost in a berserk fury, battles wit the Scree Wyrm + Samu, lost in a berserk fury, battles with the Scree Wyrm @@ -4178,7 +4181,7 @@ small11: sword, axe, & shield 299 -

If you use a leaf from a Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves, the Bundle now has two leaves left.

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If you use a leaf from a Bundle of dried Azawood Leaves, the Bundle now has three leaves left.

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(Rules for Combat) Removed on the inside back cover of the book. Replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book.

(Sage Advice) Removed at the front of this book.

(1) Replaced &lsquot; Stand back! with &lsquot;Stand back!. Replaced rain-water with rainwater. Replaced ahead, You with ahead. You.

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(4) Replaced quagmire, it with quagmire; it in the caption of the illustration.

(6) Replaced special Item with Special Item.

(7) Replaced elementals with Elementals. Replaced elemental with Elemental.

(11) Replaced battle cry with battle-cry.

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(135) Replaced exhausted you with exhausted, you.

(140) Replaced asks with asks.. Replaced out-sized with outsized.

(141) Switched the section numbers given for the two choices, to avoid unreasonable consequences of high ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER scores.

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(145) Replaced spell whispering with spell, whisperingin the caption for the illustration.

(146) Replaced 7&endash;12 with 6&endash;12.

(149) Replaced Kiro will with Kiro, will. Replaced eyebow with eyebrow.

(151) Replaced and as with and, as.

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