From 228d468c108da7af6db7ca7450d5a91fee16cea0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Sat, 22 Feb 2014 11:23:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Book 28: Foothills -> foothills [as per jb, Feb 21 2014] git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2325 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/28thos.xml | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/28thos.xml b/en/xml/28thos.xml index 7026812..2fe280f 100644 --- a/en/xml/28thos.xml +++ b/en/xml/28thos.xml @@ -1378,7 +1378,7 @@ 9 -

The fight comes to an abrupt end when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have also survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain beasts and quickly determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for the corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.

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The fight comes to an abrupt end when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have also survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain beasts and quickly determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for the corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.

Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other creatures like these in this vicinity. Only then do you and the troopers remount your horses and continue along the highway towards the Javai Forest. A few miles short of the forest you discover a freshwater spring which is forded by the highway. It is an ideal site for a night camp, and so you send one of Yengs men back to the caravan to tell them that you shall await their arrival here.

During your wait for the caravan, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points.

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The fight ends abruptly when you deal your enemy a mighty blow to the base of its deformed neck. As it crumples lifelessly to the ground, you join with Sergeant Yeng and rush to aid the trooper who is caught in the strands of your sticky net. One well-aimed blow puts paid to the creature that is ensnared in the net with him, and then you quickly recite the words to counter the spell and the thankful trooper is soon released.

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Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses show signs of starvation. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by the Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of those beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They rarely attack travellers on the trade road, unless driven by disease or extreme hunger.

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Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses show signs of starvation. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by the Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of those beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They rarely attack travellers on the trade road, unless driven by disease or extreme hunger.

Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other creatures like these in this vicinity. Only then do you and the troopers remount your horses and continue along the highway towards the Javai Forest. A few miles short of the forest you discover a freshwater spring which is forded by the highway. It is an ideal site for a night camp, and so you send one of Yengs men back to the caravan to tell them that you shall await their arrival here.

During your wait for the caravan, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points.

To continue, turn to 45. @@ -4620,7 +4620,7 @@

The threat to the caravan ends abruptly when you deal the last monster a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls from the carriage, you grab the reins and bring the wagon smoothly to a halt. Captain Chan tries to calm the alarmed members of the Khea-khans entourage by telling them that the threat has now passed. As their panic subsides, he and his men report to the Khea-khans carriage and tell Kau-Doshin that order has been restored. He is greatly reassured to hear that his Imperial Majesty is no longer in any immediate danger.

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You walk back cautiously along the highway and inspect the bodies of the slain enemy. You are quickly able to determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for their corpses are badly emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng rides up and confirms your belief. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, forests, and caves.

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You walk back cautiously along the highway and inspect the bodies of the slain enemy. You are quickly able to determine that all three are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for their corpses are badly emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng rides up and confirms your belief. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, forests, and caves.

They do not usually attack travellers, says Chan, unless driven to do so by diseaseor hunger.

Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other Agarashi like these in this vicinity. Only then do you remount your horse and ride with Chan to the head of the column. As you pass by the Khea-khans carriage, Kau-Doshin calls you to halt. With a respectful bow of his greying head, he praises you for the skill and bravery you displayed while countering the unexpected attack.

The Khea-khan and I will not forget your act of courage, my lord, he says. We shall ensure that you are duly rewarded upon our safe arrival in Tazhan.

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The fight ends abruptly when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and quickly determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei Foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.

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The fight ends abruptly when you deal the last living creature a mighty blow to the base of its deformed head. As it falls lifelessly to the ground, Sergeant Yeng rushes to check that his men have survived intact. Cautiously you inspect the bodies of the slain enemy and quickly determine that they are of Agarashi descent. They have probably come down from the Hyunsei foothills in a desperate search for prey, for all three corpses are emaciated by hunger. Sergeant Yeng confirms your suspicions. He tells you that long ago, during the Age of Eternal Night, this land was stalked by Agarashithe hellish creations of Agarash the Damned. When Agarash was destroyed by the Elder Magi, his creations were scattered across the wilderness and plains of Chai. The descendants of these beasts are still alive today, hiding in hills, burrows, and caves. They do not usually attack travellers unless driven by disease or famine.

Using your tracking skills, you quickly determine that there are no other creatures like these in this vicinity. Only then do you and the troopers remount your horses and continue along the highway towards the Javai Forest. A few miles short of the forest you discover a freshwater spring which is forded by the highway. It is an ideal site for a night camp, and so you send one of Yengs men back to the caravan to tell them you shall await their arrival here.

During your wait for the caravan, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 ENDURANCE points.

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(6) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow of Atonement. Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon.

(7) Replaced everyone except the sentries are asleep with everyone is asleep except the sentries. Replaced rest, and unless with rest, unless.

(8) Replaced belt pouch with Belt Pouch. Replaced half of your coins with half of your coins. Replaced total of Gold Coins by half with total of coins by half because not all currency units are made of gold, and the loss is due to the Belt Pouch being eaten through rather than the gold coins being damaged.

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(9) Replaced burrows and with burrows, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced fresh water spring with freshwater spring.

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(9) Replaced burrows and with burrows, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced fresh water spring with freshwater spring. Replaced Hyunsei Foothills with Hyunsei foothills.

(10) Replaced on to with onto.

(11) Replaced to Khea-khans with to the Khea-khans. Replaced agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced western rim with eastern rim as Sections 2 and 130 indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning. Replaced Some descend with Some of the fissures descend.

(12) Replaced Special Items list with list of Special Items.

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(94) Replaced gases and with gases, and.

(95) Replaced Crack!; the with Crack! The. Replaced ribcage with rib cage. Replaced Knight, or with Knight or. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

(96) Replaced throght with throughout. Replaced distant corridor with distant corridors.

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(97) Replaced him, then with him, and then. Replaced burrows and with burrows, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced fresh water spring with freshwater spring.

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(97) Replaced him, then with him, and then. Replaced burrows and with burrows, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced fresh water spring with freshwater spring. Replaced Hyunsei Foothills with Hyunsei foothills.

(99) Replaced icy-fiends with ice-fiends.

(100) Replaced imperial family with Imperial Family.

(101) Replaced interpretation of the signs indicate with interpretation of the signs indicates. Replaced advise that with advise her that. Replaced imperial family with Imperial Family.

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(277) Replaced hesitates, then with hesitates, and then. Replaced counter threat with counter-threat. Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 5 or lower now leads to Section 201 which has the larger ENDURANCE penalty, whereas a score of 6 or more now leads to Section 29.

(278) Replaced your surprise you with your surprise, you. Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon. Replaced metres with yards. Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon and 50 metres with 50 yards in the illustrations caption.

(279) Added a paragraph break between the touch. and What killed. Added a paragraph break between asks Chan. and You wont. Replaced icy cold with ice cold.

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(280) Replaced forests and with forests, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced each occurrence of Kau Doshin with Kau-Doshin.

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(280) Replaced forests and with forests, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced each occurrence of Kau Doshin with Kau-Doshin. Replaced Hyunsei Foothills with Hyunsei foothills.

(282) Replaced densely packed with densely-packed.

(284) Replaced cavalry, then with cavalry, and then. Added a paragraph break between says Chan. and Kasarian nods.

(286) Replaced imperial family with Imperial Family.

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(290) Replaced gases and with gases, and.

(292) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced battle cry with battle-cry. Replaced southern Magnamund with Southern Magnamund. Replaced Between their with From between their.

(293) Replaced picks and with picks, and.

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(295) Replaced burrows and with burrows, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced fresh water spring with freshwater spring.

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(295) Replaced burrows and with burrows, and. Replaced each occurrence of agarashi with Agarashi. Replaced fresh water spring with freshwater spring. Replaced Hyunsei Foothills with Hyunsei foothills.

(296) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Added a paragraph break between innocence. and What. Added a paragraph break between you ask. and Chan explains. Added a paragraph break between his cot. and He is. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Kai-surge, and with Kai-surge and.

(297) Replaced Shavane, hell with Shavane. Hell. Replaced your backpack with your Backpack.

(298) Replaced sunbreak with daybreak.

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