From 228e3f693b537fadd0965df603045263e1099913 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Thu, 5 Jun 2014 10:37:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Book 28 Errata decisions June 4/5 2014 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2362 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/28thos.xml | 29 ++++++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/28thos.xml b/en/xml/28thos.xml index ea9d132..ba9a235 100644 --- a/en/xml/28thos.xml +++ b/en/xml/28thos.xml @@ -2921,7 +2921,7 @@

With a cruel laugh Autarch Sejanoz bids you farewell and turns to make his escape along an adjoining tunnel, the young Kamada held captive under his arm.

Save him! pleads Mitzu. Please save my son!

If you wish to chase after the Autarch, turn to 208. - If you wish to attempt to stop him with your Bow, turn to 65. + If you wish to attempt to stop him with a Bow, turn to 65. @@ -3000,7 +3000,7 @@ 144 -

You use your improved weapon skill to detect the location of your missing blade. After several minutes of meditation you determine that it lies somewhere at the end of the passageway to your left.

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You use your Weaponmastery to detect the location of your missing blade. After several minutes of meditation you determine that it lies somewhere at the end of the passageway to your left.

Turn to 94. @@ -3058,14 +3058,14 @@ Brian Williams - A Javain bandit swipes at you with his double-edged axe. + A Javaian bandit swipes at you with his double-edged axe. - Javain Bandit2828 + Javaian Bandit2828 If you win this combat, turn to 25. @@ -3336,7 +3336,7 @@ 172 -

You draw your Kai Weapon and, as you raise it in readiness to strike the first blow, a heavy silver orb comes hurtling through the crypt door and cracks your forearm. Numbed by the unexpected force of its impact, you drop your weapon and cradle your aching limb to your chest. Seconds later, a group of swarthy-faced tomb robbers come running up the crypt steps and barge you aside. You grapple with one of them and wrest a dagger from his hand, but in the blink of an eye he draws another from his boot and attempts to stab you through the heart.

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You draw your Kai Weapon and, as you raise it in readiness to strike the first blow, a heavy silver orb comes hurtling through the crypt door and cracks your forearm. Numbed by the unexpected force of its impact, you drop your Kai Weapon and cradle your aching limb to your chest. Seconds later, a group of swarthy-faced tomb robbers come running up the crypt steps and barge you aside. You grapple with one of them and wrest a dagger from his hand, but in the blink of an eye he draws another from his boot and attempts to stab you through the heart.

Tomb Robber3035 If you win this combat, turn to 139. @@ -3350,7 +3350,7 @@

With a cruel laugh Autarch Sejanoz bids you farewell and turns to make his escape along an adjoining tunnel, the young Kamada held captive under his arm.

Save him! pleads Mitzu. Please save my son!

If you wish to chase after the Autarch, turn to 208. - If you wish to attempt to stop him with your Bow, turn to 65. + If you wish to attempt to stop him with a Bow, turn to 65. @@ -3503,7 +3503,7 @@

Very well, Grand Master, says Chan, a little disappointedly. As you wish. But please excuse me while I go to the armoury myself. The Imperial Caravan will leave shortly from the palace courtyard. I shall meet you there in twenty minutes time.

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After bowing respectfully to the Khea-khan, Chan strides out of the throne room and disappears along the corridor beyond. Nearby, a group of silk-robed courtiers are gathering up hundreds of Chai court scrolls and other Papers of State. You volunteer to help them place these valuable manuscripts into wickerwork baskets, and then carry them outside to the Imperial Caravan in readiness for the long journey east.

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After bowing respectfully to the Khea-khan, Chan strides out of the throne room and disappears along the corridor beyond. Nearby, a group of silk-robed courtiers are gathering up hundreds of Chai court scrolls and other papers of state. You volunteer to help them place these valuable manuscripts into wickerwork baskets, and then carry them outside to the Imperial Caravan in readiness for the long journey east.

The caravan consists of three large carriages, each drawn by a team of eight horses, plus an escort of twenty Imperial Cavalry troopers clad in plain crimson tunics. The golden ornamentation that once embellished the state carriages has been stripped away, and their fine lacquered sides have been painted a dun brown to camouflage their true origins. You approve of their ordinary appearance for it will be far less likely to attract unwanted attention on the long road ahead.

You are helping to load the baskets of papers into the last of the carriages when Captain Chan arrives, fresh from his visit to the armoury. You notice that he is now wearing a waistcoat of golden mail, called an angsei, and he is carrying a halberd-like spear called a kirusami. With a deft flick of this fine weapon he motions to a stable guard to bring him his horsea proud stable stallion. The young guardsman also brings an additional mount, a dappled chestnut mare, and he hands the reins of this horse to you.

Well ride together, my lord, says Chan, as he settles himself into the saddle. You mount your horse, and then together you watch in silence as the aged Khea-khan and his family arrive in the courtyard. Devoted attendants usher them into the middle carriage, and as soon as the doors are closed, Chan gives the signal for the column to move off. Slowly the carriages trundle through the gates of the Imperial Palace and out into the city beyond. You and Chan follow behind the third carriage, and as you ride through the gates, the last sound you hear is the gentle sobbing of the Khea-khans palace servants, those he has had to leave behind.

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You draw your Kai Weapon but, as you raise it in readiness to defend yourself, a heavy silver orb comes hurtling through the air and strikes your forearm. Numbed by the unexpected force of its impact, you drop your weapon and cradle your aching limb to your chest. Seconds later, one of the tomb robbers comes leaping over the gravestone and drags you to the ground. You grapple with him and wrest a dagger from his hand, but in the blink of an eye he draws another from his boot and attempts to stab you through the heart.

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You draw your Kai Weapon but, as you raise it in readiness to defend yourself, a heavy silver orb comes hurtling through the air and strikes your forearm. Numbed by the unexpected force of its impact, you drop your Kai Weapon and cradle your aching limb to your chest. Seconds later, one of the tomb robbers comes leaping over the gravestone and drags you to the ground. You grapple with him and wrest a dagger from his hand, but in the blink of an eye he draws another from his boot and attempts to stab you through the heart.

Tomb Robber3035 If you win this combat, turn to 139. @@ -5568,16 +5568,17 @@

(132) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell. Replaced on to with onto.

(133) Replaced Go Captain with Go, Captain.

(135) Replaced Kai weapon with Kai Weapon. Replaced gutteral with guttural.

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(137) Replaced Mitzu, please with Mitzu. Please.

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(137) Replaced Mitzu, please with Mitzu. Please. Replaced with your Bow with with a Bow since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.

(139) Replaced Special Items list with list of Special Items.

(140) Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon. Replaced each occurrence of metres with yards. Replaced the imperial family of Chai are hiding here with the Imperial Family of Chai is hiding here.

(141) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced on to with onto.

(142) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell.

(143) Replaced battle cry with battle-cry.

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(144) Replaced improved weapon skill with Weaponmastery to avoid confusion with the Kai Weaponskill Discipline.

(145) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced 15 minutes with fifteen minutes. Replaced the Captain with the captain. Replaced The Captain with The captain. Replaced the Sergeant with the sergeant.

(146) Replaced agarashi with Agarashi.

(147) Replaced Superior with Superior or higher. Replaced skills, or with skills, if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, or. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Magi-magic, and with Magi-magic and. Replaced Kai-surge, and with Kai-surge and. Replaced Elementalism, and with Elementalism and.

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(148) Replaced its cawing and the flapping of its wings startles with its cawing and the flapping of its wings startle.

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(148) Replaced its cawing and the flapping of its wings startles with its cawing and the flapping of its wings startle. Replaced Javain Bandit with Javaian Bandit. Replaced Javain bandit with Javaian bandit in the illustrations caption.

(149) Replaced hard pressed with hard-pressed. Replaced manouvering with manoeuvring.

(150) Replaced each occurrence of flagtower with flag-tower.

(151) Replaced western rim with eastern rim as Sections 2 and 130 indicate a speedy exit from the vale early the following morning.

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(168) Replaced none of these skills or rank, or the Backpack Item with neither of these skills, nor the Backpack Item, or have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Nexus, and with Nexus and.

(170) Swapped the destination of the links, so that now a score of 6 or lower now leads to Section 55 which has the larger ENDURANCE penalty, whereas a score of 7 or more now leads to Section 285.

(171) Replaced imperial family with Imperial Family.

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(173) Replaced Mitzu, please with Mitzu. Please.

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(172) Replaced weapon with Kai Weapon.

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(173) Replaced Mitzu, please with Mitzu. Please. Replaced with your Bow with with a Bow since you may not necessarily be carrying a Bow.

(174) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced add +1 to with add 1 to. Replaced rib-cage with rib cage. Replaced combat skill with COMBAT SKILL.

(175) Replaced power word with power-word.

(178) Replaced Deliverance, and with Deliverance and.

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(184) Replaced steam cannon with steam-cannon.

(185) Replaced each occurrence of Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced half ie, with half, i.e..

(186) Replaced pain, then with pain; then. Replaced both occurrences of arrow with Arrow. Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell.

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(187) Replaced horse, then with horse, and then. Replaced Angsei with angsei. Replaced 20 Imperial Cavalry with twenty Imperial Cavalry. Replaced Kirusami with kirusami.

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(187) Replaced horse, then with horse, and then. Replaced Angsei with angsei. Replaced 20 Imperial Cavalry with twenty Imperial Cavalry. Replaced Kirusami with kirusami. Replaced Papers of State with papers of state.

(189) Replaced therain-bow with the rainbow. Replaced milleniums with millennia.

(190) Replaced special item with Special Item. Replaced each occurrence of the die with the dice.

(192) Replaced apporpriate with appropriate. Replaced Gold crowns with Gold Crowns.

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(220) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced you look at each of the people who are gathered here with you look at each of the persons gathered here.

(222) Replaced Between these with From between their. Replaced metres with yards.

(224) Replaced add +1 to with add 1 to.

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(225) Replaced weapon with Kai Weapon.

(226) Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.

(228) Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

(229) Replaced dwarves and with dwarves, and. Replaced The Captain with The captain. Replaced Astrology, and with Astrology and. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

(233) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced Kirusami with Kirusami. Replaced Spear), and with Spear) and.

(235) Replaced icy breath that freezes everything it touches with icy breath that freeze everything they touch. Replaced Kirusami with kirusami.

(236) Replaced each occurrence of flagtower with flag-tower. Replaced plans meets with plan meets.

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(237) Replaced add +1 to with add 1 to. Replaced Angsei with angsei. Replaced Angsei with Angsei. Replaced Kirusami with Kirusami. Replaced naginata with naginata in the illustrations caption.

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(237) Replaced add +1 to with add 1 to. Replaced Angsei with angsei. Replaced Angsei with Angsei. Replaced Kirusami with Kirusami. Replaced naginata with naginata in the illustrations caption.

(238) Replaced arrow with Arrow of Atonement.

(240) Replaced candle-lit with candlelit. Replaced cuthroats with cut-throats.

(241) Replaced sure of though with sure of, though.

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