From 237b170e7b31061e606247fe59e07c06d98b562c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Wed, 13 Nov 2019 18:57:36 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Standardize markup for multiple enemies --- en/xml/22tbos.xml | 8 ++++---- en/xml/23mh.xml | 8 ++++---- en/xml/29tsoc.xml | 9 ++++++--- 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/22tbos.xml b/en/xml/22tbos.xml index 2f4b49d..48dce0b 100644 --- a/en/xml/22tbos.xml +++ b/en/xml/22tbos.xml @@ -2465,7 +2465,7 @@

On entering the racetrack you and your companion make your way through the crowds to the parade enclosures. Melchar is keen to bet on the favouriteForlu-zhanbut he wants to view the other runners before placing his wager with Wrok the Bookmaker. Having satisfied himself that the favourite will win, he goes off to the betting ring while you stay at the enclosure and watch the guanza lope past. As Forlu-zhan passes by, your Magnakai Discipline of Animal Control tells you that something is wrong. You sense that the favourite has been drugged with a mild tincture of graveweed and that he will be incapable of winning the race. Quickly you hurry to the betting ring to stop Melchar placing his wager. He is about to hand over his money when you catch up with him and tell him what you know. Melchar cancels his bet and Wrok the Bookmaker glares at you with undisguised hatred. He signals to a group of his henchmen and swiftly they surround you both. The moment the race begins you and Melchar are grabbed from behind and manhandled out of the betting ring. Wroks henchmen bundle you into a tack room below the public stands, but before they can lock the door, you draw your weapon and attack them.

- Wroks Henchmen (6)3836 + 6 Wroks Henchmen3836 If you win this combat, turn to 206. @@ -5338,7 +5338,7 @@ - Masama Street-thugs (6)3836 + 6 Masama Street-thugs3836 If you win this combat, turn to 7. @@ -6106,7 +6106,7 @@

(107) Replaced by, then with by, and then. Removed quotation marks from around the thought-speech.

(108) Replaced belt pouch with Belt Pouch. Replaced voice, Let me with voice. Let me.

(109) Replaced on to with onto. Replaced dismal mood of its natives and the large number of street beggars leaves with dismal mood of its natives and the large number of street beggars leave. Replaced the Captain with the captain.

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(110) Replaced Nobels with Nobles.

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(110) Replaced Nobels with Nobles. Replaced Wroks Henchmen (6) with 6 Wroks Henchmen.

(111) Replaced parallel with with parallel to. Replaced the Captain with the captain.

(112) Replaced try and with try to. Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

(114) Replaced Nobels with Nobles.

@@ -6284,7 +6284,7 @@

(336) Replaced on to with onto. Removed the dashes around Levitation.

(337) Replaced jailers with gaolers. Replaced jailer with gaoler. Replaced suddenly appear with suddenly appears.

(339) Replaced jade green with jade-green. Replaced each occurrence of Lourdanian with Lourdenian. Replaced emporiums with emporia.

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(340) Replaced drunk or with drunk, or.

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(340) Replaced drunk or with drunk, or. Replaced Masama Street-thugs (6) with 6 Masama Street-thugs.

(341) Replaced each occurrence of Nobels with Nobles.

(342) Replaced tavernkeeper with tavern-keeper. Replaced The Captain with The captain. Replaced the Captain with the captain.

(343) Replaced arrow with Arrow.

diff --git a/en/xml/23mh.xml b/en/xml/23mh.xml index 764d333..2994960 100644 --- a/en/xml/23mh.xml +++ b/en/xml/23mh.xml @@ -3836,7 +3836,7 @@

Welcome to your royal apartment, he says, in a sneering tone. Ive had the cook prepare you some food after your long journey home, Prince Karvas. I do hope it meets with your approval. Its a meal fit for a king who will never be.

Karvas is angered by the knights insolence and he slaps the bowl of gruel out of his hand. The arrogant knight laughs, but before he can step away and leave the cell, you spring forward like a pouncing tiger and attempt to grab the sword from his hand.

Slay him! screeches the knight, as he struggles to free himself from your grasp. Instantly the guards rush at you with their weapons raised in eager readiness to carry out his order.

- Knight Bachelor Citadel Gaolers (6)4338 + Knight Bachelor 6 Citadel Gaolers4338

Prince Karvas is unarmed and unable to assist you during this combat.

If you win this fight, turn to 324. @@ -4715,7 +4715,7 @@

Welcome to your royal apartment, he says, in a sneering tone. Ive had the cook prepare you some food after your long journey home, Prince Karvas. I do hope you enjoy it. Its a meal fit for a king who will never be.

Karvas is angered by the knights insolence and he slaps the bowl of gruel out of his hand. The arrogant knight laughs, but before he can step away and leave the cell, you spring forward like a pouncing tiger and attempt to grab the sword from his hand.

Slay him! screeches the knight, as he struggles to free himself. Instantly the guards rush at you with their weapons raised in eager readiness to carry out his order.

- Knight Bachelor Citadel Gaolers (6)4338 + Knight Bachelor 6 Citadel Gaolers4338 Prince Karvas is unarmed and unable to assist you during this combat. If you win this fight, turn to 39. @@ -6425,7 +6425,7 @@

(199) Replaced crack with crack.

(200) Replaced market place with marketplace. Replaced Herbmastery, and with Herbmastery and.

(202) Replaced princes with Princes. Replaced money, in with money in.

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(203) Replaced Citadel gaolers with Citadel Gaolers. Added the illustration caption The Knight holds a short-bladed sword in one hand and a wooden bowl in the other. that was missing from the first printing of the book. Replaced The Knight with The knight in the illustrations caption.

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(203) Replaced Citadel gaolers with Citadel Gaolers. Added the illustration caption The Knight holds a short-bladed sword in one hand and a wooden bowl in the other. that was missing from the first printing of the book. Replaced The Knight with The knight in the illustrations caption. Replaced Knight Bachelor Citadel Gaolers (6) with Knight Bachelor 6 Citadel Gaolers.

(205) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell. Removed the dashes around Invisible Fist.

(208) Replaced at all; they are with at all: they are.

(210) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced ribcage with rib cage. Removed the dashes around Lightning Hand. Replaced sharp, popping with sharp popping.

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(270) Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced Karvass with Karvas.

(271) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced line of black-clad figures, mostly soldiers, come with line of black-clad figures, mostly soldiers, comes.

(274) Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced the number of passing soldiers are with the number of passing soldiers is.

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(275) Replaced Citadel goalers with Citadel Gaolers.

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(275) Replaced Citadel goalers (6) with 6 Citadel Gaolers.

(276) Replaced prince with Prince.

(277) Replaced 100 metres with 100 yards. Replaced this Special Item with this item for consistency with changes made to Section 288.

(278) Replaced quiver with Quiver. Replaced horsess reins with horses reins. Replaced arrow with Arrow.

diff --git a/en/xml/29tsoc.xml b/en/xml/29tsoc.xml index 7bf162d..73cf4d4 100644 --- a/en/xml/29tsoc.xml +++ b/en/xml/29tsoc.xml @@ -4249,7 +4249,7 @@

Mount up! Lets get out of here!

Quang and the Watchers leave their locations and race to their horses. Rapidly, you mount your horse and spur him towards the open doors. You are halfway across the barn when two Chagarashi appear in the open doorway and throw their arms wide. They spread their sinewy fingers and their razor-sharp talons glint in the dull light. They are attempting to block your escape.

You are almost upon them when your horse rears up in alarm. The Chagarashi seize this opportunity and leap forward to attack.

- Chagarashi Scouts (x2)4545 + 2 Chagarashi Scouts4545

You struggle to control your frightened horse throughout this combat. Its wild and erratic movement makes it hard for you to strike these enemies with precision. Deduct 4 points from your Combat Skill for the duration of this fight.

If you win the combat, turn to 224 @@ -4565,7 +4565,7 @@

Lets get out of here!

Quang and the Watchers rush to their horses. Rapidly, you mount your horse and spur him towards the open doors. You are halfway across the barn when two Chagarashi appear in the open doorway and throw their arms wide. They spread their sinewy fingers and their razor-sharp talons glint in the dull light. They are attempting to block your escape.

You are almost upon them when your horse rears up in fright. The Chagarashi seize this opportunity and leap forward to attack.

- Chagarashi Scouts (x2)4545 + 2 Chagarashi Scouts4545

You struggle to control your terrified horse throughout this combat. Its wild and erratic movement makes it hard for you to strike these enemies with precision. Deduct 4 points from your Combat Skill for the duration of this fight.

If you win the combat, turn to 224 @@ -5013,7 +5013,7 @@

Mount up! Lets get out of here!

Quang and the Watchers leave their locations and race to their horses. Rapidly, you mount your horse and spur him towards the open doors. You are halfway across the barn when two Chagarashi appear in the open doorway and throw their arms wide. They spread their sinewy fingers and their razor-sharp talons glint in the dull light. They are attempting to block your escape.

You are almost upon them when your horse rears up in alarm. The Chagarashi seize this opportunity and leap forward to attack.

- Chagarashi Scouts (x2)4545 + 2 Chagarashi Scouts4545

You struggle to control your frightened horse throughout this combat. Its wild and erratic movement makes it hard for you to strike these enemies with precision. Deduct 4 points from your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of this fight.

If you win the combat, turn to 224 @@ -6180,17 +6180,20 @@

(220) Replaced treeline with tree-line.

(238) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase Grand Master,. Replaced Silver Virixe with Silver Virixe.

(240) Replaced ENDURANE with ENDURANCE.

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(242) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2) with 2 Chagarashi Scouts.

(241) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase Thank you very much,.

(245) Replaced Sheni with Shen.

(252) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell. Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced gulley with gully.

(264) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced gulley with gully.

(267) Replaced treeline with tree-line.

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(268) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2) with 2 Chagarashi Scouts.

(270) Replaced Zasnhor with Zashnor.

(271) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell.

(273) Replaced fulfill with fulfil.

(275) Replaced it is has been with it has been.

(299) Replaced Meal.)You with Meal.) You. Replaced Shousan with Shousun. Replaced Soushan with Shousun.

(304) Replaced Youi with You.

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(307) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2) with 2 Chagarashi Scouts.

(314) Added a quotation mark at the end of the paragraph starting with When he was a young boy,.

(318) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(322) Replaced worshipers with worshippers.

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