From 47d033187abf0e5ccfaca9857d61ab9b7801fc4c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Fri, 6 Mar 2015 13:23:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Couple more 02smr fixes git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2426 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/02smr.xml | 9 +++++---- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/02smr.xml b/en/xml/02smr.xml index 9e2175b..e4964fb 100644 --- a/en/xml/02smr.xml +++ b/en/xml/02smr.xml @@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ 50 -

Sergeant Haskell is only too willing to speak to his command unit at El Paso. He gives his call sign Palmito Four Zeroand as soon as it is confirmed as valid, the El Paso garrison relays news of what is happening in their area. Parts of the city and the military reserve are under siege from HAVOC-led Mexican clansmen. They warn that Fabens is a Mexican base, and that they have barricaded the east freeway approach to that town. In closing, they tell you to contact them again if you make it through Fabens. They do not sound very optimistic.

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Sergeant Haskell is only too willing to speak to his command unit at El Paso. He gives his call signPalmito Four Zeroand as soon as it is confirmed as valid, the El Paso garrison relays news of what is happening in their area. Parts of the city and the military reserve are under siege from HAVOC-led Mexican clansmen. They warn that Fabens is a Mexican base, and that they have barricaded the east freeway approach to that town. In closing, they tell you to contact them again if you make it through Fabens. They do not sound very optimistic.

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Drawing on your reserves of nervous energy, you race up the last few steps and lash out at the door with the sole of your boot. The door flies wide open and slams against the wall, sending the red-headed clansman who was about to investigate the noise, sprawling flat on his back.

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Drawing on your reserves of nervous energy, you race up the last few steps and lash out at the door with the sole of your boot. The door flies wide open and slams against the wall, sending the red-headed clansman who was about to investigate the noise sprawling flat on his back.

Inside the observation room you see two menone dressed in a flamboyant mix of bright colours and the other attired in sombre blackseated at a table with a map of the United States spread before them. A muscular clansman, his chest criss-crossed with cartridge belts, stands behind the man in black and beyond him, huddled in the corner of the room, is Kate. Clearly she has suffered at the hands of Mad Dog Michigan and the sight of her bruised face and her pained, despairing expression stirs you to a fit of rage.

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You tell Uncle Jonas and the others to watch for your flare. You will fire it as soon as a breach has been made in the barricade. When they see it, they are to start their engines, drive through the barricade in break-out formation and stop for nothing until they reach El Paso.

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You tell Uncle Jonas and the others to watch for your flare. You will fire it as soon as a breach has been made in the barricade. When they see it, they are to start their engines, drive through the barricade in break-out formation, and stop for nothing until they reach El Paso.

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(262) Replaced newly elected with newly-elected.

(264) Replaced new-found with newfound. Replaced hesitates, then with hesitates, and then. Replaced on to with onto.

(266) Replaced Dagger [2] with Dagger (2). Added (Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

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(268) Replaced dispairing with despairing. Replaced quiet, then with quiet, and then. Replaced If you do not possess a missile weapon, or do not have sufficient ammunition to use it with If you do not possess a missile weapon, do not have sufficient ammunition to use it, or do not wish to use it.

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(268) Replaced dispairing with despairing. Replaced quiet, then with quiet, and then. Replaced If you do not possess a missile weapon, or do not have sufficient ammunition to use it with If you do not possess a missile weapon, do not have sufficient ammunition to use it, or do not wish to use it. Replaced noise, sprawling with noise sprawling.

(270) Replaced sulphonamide with sulfonamide. Replaced at who with at whom. Replaced bang with bang.

(271) Added Remember to deduct six rounds of 9mm ammunition from your Ammo Pouch..

(275) Replaced bang with bang. Replaced wheels and then with wheels, and then.

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(290) Replaced Sterling county line with Sterling County line.

(292) Replaced gun fire with gunfire. Added Remember to deduct the relevant number of rounds from your Ammo Pouch.).

(293) Replaced sky, then with sky, and then. Replaced Freeway 2010 with Interstate 20 for accuracy and consistency with later books.

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(294) Replaced formation and with formation, and.

(295) Replaced Half-way with Halfway.

(296) Replaced camp fire with campfire.

(297) Replaced focus, then with focus, and then.

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