From 57cb8bd5711254f3454dc632281a44c84437d3ef Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 07:50:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/1] typo in Bk 16 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2535 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/16tlov.xml | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/16tlov.xml b/en/xml/16tlov.xml index c421e13..f867322 100644 --- a/en/xml/16tlov.xml +++ b/en/xml/16tlov.xml @@ -2170,7 +2170,7 @@

You draw on your psychic defences to keep you hidden from this creature. You cannot see it in the dense fog but you can hear it swooping down, and you are nearly flattened by the draught of its mighty wings as it roars past close overhead.

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As first it seems to be going away into the distance, but then you sense it turn about and come gliding back for a second pass. Suddenly you realize that your psychic defences are not hiding you from this creature at all; it is locking on to your life-force, not your mind.

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At first it seems to be going away into the distance, but then you sense it turn about and come gliding back for a second pass. Suddenly you realize that your psychic defences are not hiding you from this creature at all; it is locking on to your life-force, not your mind.

If you have a Bow and wish to use it, turn to 254. If you do not possess this Weapon or do not wish to use it, turn to 152. @@ -5948,7 +5948,7 @@

(103) Replaced vortexi with Vortexi. Replaced add 5 to your ENDURANCE points score with restore 5 points to your ENDURANCE score in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(104) Replaced gulley with gully. Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery.

(105) Replaced Citystate with City-state. Replaced destoyed with destroyed. Replaced Casiorn, then with Casiorn, and then. Replaced give rise for with give cause for.

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(106) Replaced life force with life-force. Replaced weapon, or with Weapon or.

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(106) Replaced life force with life-force. Replaced weapon, or with Weapon or. Replaced As first with At first.

(107) Removed the quotation marks from Invisible Fist. Replaced battle spell with battle-spell. Replaced metres with yards as per Joe Devers original manuscript.

(108) Replaced hesitation he with hesitation, he.

(109) Replaced bow and draw an arrow with Bow and draw an Arrow. Replaced bow and the arrow with Bow and the Arrow. Replaced says, sneeringly with says, sneering.

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