From 6fe0651546c98e63471e510f0fb41fe5f0bb8800 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 00:07:16 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2663 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/06tkot.xml | 49 ++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------- 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/06tkot.xml b/en/xml/06tkot.xml index 5bb42b4..4a1efd0 100644 --- a/en/xml/06tkot.xml +++ b/en/xml/06tkot.xml @@ -787,9 +787,9 @@

It is mid-afternoon when you catch sight of a small village on the road ahead. There are many wagons parked at the side of the highway, and a crowd has gathered in a field nearby. As you ride past, you notice a large placard nailed to one of the wagons:

- ARCHERY TOURNAMENT - ENTRANCE FEE: 2 GOLD CROWNS - FIRST PRIZE: THE SILVER BOW OF DUADON + Archery Tournament + Entrance Fee: 2 Gold Crowns + First Prize: The Silver Bow of Duadon If you wish to enter the tournament, turn to 141. If you do not wish to or cannot afford to enter, continue on your way and turn to 210. @@ -987,9 +987,9 @@

You walk to the bar and arrange a room for the night. There are many rooms, each of a different standard and price. A blackboard suspended from the ceiling shows the tariffs:

You may choose to stay in any of the above rooms, but remember to erase the relevant number of Gold Crowns from your Action Chart before turning to your chosen number.

If you decide to stay in the dormitory, turn to 144. @@ -2146,17 +2146,17 @@

The smell of dust and rusty metal wafts in your face as you enter the cluttered weapons shop. All manner of arms are stacked in racks that rise precariously to the ceiling. Their prices are chalked on a circular slate that hangs above the counter.

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  • BROADSWORDS7 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • DAGGERS2 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • SHORT SWORDS3 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • WARHAMMERS6 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • SPEARS5 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • MACES4 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • AXES3 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • BOWS7 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • QUARTERSTAVES3 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • SWORDS4 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • ARROWS2 for 1 Gold Crown
    • +
  • Broadswords7 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Daggers2 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Short Swords3 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Warhammers6 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Spears5 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Maces4 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Axes3 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Bows7 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Quarterstaves3 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Swords4 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Arrows2 for 1 Gold Crown

You may purchase any of the above weapons if you have enough money to do so. The shop owner will also buy any weapons that you may already have for 1 Gold Crown less than the price shown on the slate. Mark any changes on your Action Chart before you leave.

Turn to 275. @@ -2222,9 +2222,9 @@

Night has fallen by the time you reach the river town of Soren, and the sky is clear and full of stars that sparkle with icy splendour. You ride the main street towards the quay where a score of river ships lie docked at the town. Their signal lamps, shimmering red and green from the mast-tops, reflect upon the cold, dark waters of the River Storn.

A board standing beside the gangplank to a large transport caravel catches your eye. On it are chalked the prices of passage to three destinations.

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  • LUYEN10 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • RHEM15 Gold Crowns
    • -
  • EULA20 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Luyen10 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Rhem15 Gold Crowns
    • +
  • Eula20 Gold Crowns

A fourth destinationTekarohas been crossed out and scribbled beside it is: Cancelled due to war.

If you wish to buy a ticket to one of the destinations, turn to 10. @@ -3029,7 +3029,7 @@

To break open the door, you should follow the normal combat rules. Any ENDURANCE points that you lose during this combat represent the fatigue you suffer as you hack and batter the door.

If you wish to cease combat at any time and continue along the sewer, turn to 339. - If you reduce the doors RESISTANCE (ENDURANCE) to 0, turn to 200. + If you reduce the doors RESISTANCE (ENDURANCE) to 0, turn to 200. @@ -6365,7 +6365,7 @@

(1) Replaced death cry with death-cry. Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position. Replaced Kai monastery with Kai Monastery. Replaced Fryelund forest with Fryelund Forest. Replaced all occurrences of chasm of doom with Chasm of Doom.

(3) Replaced Durncrag mountains with Durncrag Mountains.

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(5) Replaced mist but with mist, but. Replaced highway and with highway, and. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced Salony and Salony with Salony, and Salony.

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(5) Replaced mist but with mist, but. Replaced highway and with highway, and. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced Salony and Salony with Salony, and Salony. Replaced ARCHERY TOURNAMENT with Archery Tournament. Replaced ENTRANCE FEE: 2 GOLD CROWNS with Entrance Fee: 2 Gold Crowns. Replaced FIRST PRIZE: THE SILVER BOW OF DUADON with First Prize: The Silver Bow of Duadon.

(6) Replaced table, and with table and. Replaced pulled and with pulled, and.

(8) Reworded the sentence (Mark this as a Special Item) to match the wording from section 16. The original wording is misleading. Replaced you but with you, but. Replaced points) and with points), and.

(10) Capitalized each occurrence of the item Ticket. Replaced river boat with riverboat. Replaced on to with onto.

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(13) Replaced body and, as with body, and as. Replaced presence and with presence, and. Replaced you and with you, and. Replaced If you do not have a bow and wish to flee with If you wish to flee and moved this option to the last position. Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced spreadeagled with spread-eagled.

(14) Replaced invocation and with invocation, and. Replaced northlander with Northlander. Replaced men but, as with men, but as.

(15) Replaced manouevre with manoeuvre.

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(17) Replaced DORMITORY with Dormitory. Replaced both occurrences of SINGLE ROOM with Single Room.

(18) Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position. Replaced neither warped, split nor unstrung with not warped, split, or unstrung.

(19) Replaced provisions and, as with provisions, and as. Replaced houses and fortified perimeter walls with houses, and fortified perimeter walls. Replaced powders and forests of roots with powders, and forests of roots.

(20) Replaced Cyriluss with Cyrilus. Replaced arrow with Arrow. Added (Remember to deduct an Arrow from your Action Chart.).

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(94) Replaced annex but with annex, but.

(95) Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced bow with Bow.

(96) Replaced chainmail, strides with chainmail strides.

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(98) Replaced QUARTERSTAFFS with QUARTERSTAVES.

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(98) Replaced BROADSWORDS with Broadswords. Replaced DAGGERS with Daggers. Replaced SHORT SWORDS with Short Swords. Replaced WARHAMMERS with Warhammers. Replaced SPEARS with Spears. Replaced MACES with Maces. Replaced AXES with Axes. Replaced BOWS with Bows. Replaced QUARTERSTAFFS with Quarterstaves. Replaced SWORDS with Swords. Replaced ARROWS with Arrows.

(99) Replaced shock and with shock, and. Replaced pikeheads with pike heads. Replaced breath but with breath, but.

(100) Replaced challenge and with challenge, and. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption.

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(102) Replaced Soren and with Soren, and.

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(102) Replaced Soren and with Soren, and. Replaced LUYEN with Luyen. Replaced RHEM with Rhem. Replaced EULA with Eula.

(104) Replaced Cyriluss with Cyrilus.

(106) Replaced cracked and with cracked, and.

(111) Replaced now, or with now or.

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