From 88afb9c469a2b949d5059224a799d6d43447c613 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 18:47:49 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2666 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/10tdot.xml | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/10tdot.xml b/en/xml/10tdot.xml index 5159766..1bc6b1f 100644 --- a/en/xml/10tdot.xml +++ b/en/xml/10tdot.xml @@ -1551,7 +1551,7 @@

The road beyond the river takes you into thick forest and a dense canopy of branches arches overhead. A dazzling mosaic of light and shade blankets the trail as it winds like a tunnel through the tall, grey-green trees. Gradually the trail becomes rougher: new saplings have speared through the stony surface and foliage spills out from the forest on either side. The tunnel ends abruptly at the edge of a steep valley, although the trail itself continues, winding its way down towards a fast-flowing stream.

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Cautiously you urge your horse down the twisting path to arrive at a cluster of dilapidated log huts. Rust and rot have taken their toll but you can still discern the remains of what was once a mining settlement where men panned for gold. A wooden sign hangs lopsided above an open door, swinging slightly in the breeze. Its paint is cracked and the panel bears fresh sword scars, but you can still make out the words: it reads, KAIG SETTLEMENT.

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Cautiously you urge your horse down the twisting path to arrive at a cluster of dilapidated log huts. Rust and rot have taken their toll but you can still discern the remains of what was once a mining settlement where men panned for gold. A wooden sign hangs lopsided above an open door, swinging slightly in the breeze. Its paint is cracked and the panel bears fresh sword scars, but you can still make out the words: it reads, Kaig Settlement.

Two trails lead away from this abandoned mining village. One climbs out of the valley and disappears into the forest; the other follows the stream towards its source among the snow-capped mountains of the Eru Range.

If you have the Magnakai Discipline of Pathsmanship, turn to 102. If you wish to take the trail that climbs out of the valley, turn to 313. @@ -5461,7 +5461,7 @@

(70) Replaced each occurrence of arrow with Arrow.

(72) Replaced rope and wind with rope, and wind.

(73) Replaced battle smoke with battle-smoke.

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(75) Placed the choice leading to Section 102 first in the list.

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(75) Replaced KAIG SETTLEMENT with Kaig Settlement. Placed the choice leading to Section 102 first in the list.

(76) Replaced arrow with Arrow.

(77) Replaced Kai mastery with Kai Mastery. Added a period to the end of the illustrations caption. Replaced about and with about, and.

(78) Placed the choice leading to Section 14 first in the list.

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