From a742f1e87916ff1c6de1c1afcbde3e597b0751c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Thomas Wolmer Date: Sun, 22 May 2005 21:50:52 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] *** empty log message *** git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@64 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- changes/04wotw-changes.html | 36 ++++++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/changes/04wotw-changes.html b/changes/04wotw-changes.html index a65d295..6fe72a1 100644 --- a/changes/04wotw-changes.html +++ b/changes/04wotw-changes.html @@ -2,6 +2,9 @@ $Id$ $Log$ +Revision 1.5 2005/05/22 21:50:52 angantyr +*** empty log message *** + Revision 1.4 2005/05/06 18:46:55 angantyr Updated with implemented/commented/new issues in conjunction with new book upload. @@ -66,6 +69,7 @@ upload. -->
Jonathan Blake
Justin Parks
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Jennifer Sigman
David Davis
Ingo Klöcker
Simon Osborne
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6 #1: satety -> safety
sect7
sect8
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8 #1: empty vial -> empty Vial
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8 #1: empty vial -> empty Vial
sect9
9 #1: If you have versed -> If you are versed
Errata - surprisingly.
9 #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick
as in the PAMoS
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sect26
sect27
sect28
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28 #1: evade combat turn -> evade combat, turn
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28 #1: evade combat turn -> evade combat, turn
sect29
29 #1: Item-slung -> Item&emdash;slung
29 #2: Item-hung -> Item&emdash;hung
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38 #6: Wytchking -> Wytch-king
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39 #1: lIke -> like
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39 #2: The first choice requires you to spend 1 WP. Shall we add a footnote there, or change the choice here to include "if you have 1 WP..."?
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39 #3: Demon Lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash
With or without comma?
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39 #2: The first choice requires you to spend 1 WP. Shall we add a footnote there, or change the choice here to include "if you have 1 WP..."?
I'd opt to change the link text accordingly.
Let's go for changing the text for the choice.
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39 #3: Demon Lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash
With or without comma?
I think 'without comma', but not 100% sure ;)
without
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47 #3: The term <cite>Agarashi</cite> is not used in any other place in the <cite>Worls of Lone Wolf</cite> books, but it is used elsewhere for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.
That footnote really sucks. Better ideas anyone?
How about: "The term Agarashi is not found elsewhere in the World of Lone Wolf series. However, in the more recent Lone Wolf books, Dever has used the term to denote any monstrous servant of Agarash the Damned." Still not that great, though.
Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used in anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used elsewhere as the collective name for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.
I meant: Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used in other books as the collective term for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.
Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.
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49 #1: empty vials -> empty Vials
I think...?
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49 #2: a Special Item, which may -> an item on your Action Chart. It may
Argh, another of these "Special Item in your Backpack" confusionisms.
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49 #3: or your Herb Pouch -> or in your Herb Pouch
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49 #1: empty vials -> empty Vials
I think...?
second occurrence only needs changing, you mean?
Technically maybe only the second, but I think it would look very odd, so I'm for changing both.
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49 #2: a Special Item, which may -> an item on your Action Chart. It may
Argh, another of these "Special Item in your Backpack" confusionisms.
LOL! The rules are just a mess, aren't they?
I say lose the bit about making it a Special Item (if this doesn't create any continuity problems).
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49 #3: or your Herb Pouch -> or in your Herb Pouch
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50 #1: Intinctively -> Instinctively
50 #2: this power -> this Power
Errata
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sect104
104 #1: crowd of demons are -> crowd of demons is
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104 #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
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104 #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention
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112 #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
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112 #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention
sect113
113 #1: magical Power -> Magical Power
Errata
sect114
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139 #1: Move illustration 8 here, and give it the new caption "Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appears within the flames of the portal."
Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.
139 #2: The horde stop -> The horde stops
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139 #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
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139 #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention
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sect141
141 #1: large, reptilian -> large reptilian
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145 #1: You are never asked to deduct the 1 WP that section 92 required of you to have to get here. Footnote?
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145 #1: You are never asked to deduct the 1 WP that section 92 required of you to have to get here. Footnote?
footnote it
sect146
sect147
147 #1: small, black -> small black
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158 #1: Who? &ellips; Who? &ellips; -> Who?&ellips; Who?&ellips;
Or... shall the spaces remain there?
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158 #1: Who? &ellips; Who? &ellips; -> Who?&ellips; Who?&ellips;
Or... shall the spaces remain there?
spaces should go away
sect159
159 #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick
as in the PAMoS
159 #2: these powers -> these Powers
Errata
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191 #2: long &ellips; -> long&ellips;
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193 #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
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193 #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here?
Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?
Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention
sect194
194 #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick
as in the PAMoS
194 #2: these powers -> these Powers
Errata
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sect229
229 #1: Half-way -> Halfway
sect230
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230 #1: Pin-points -> Pinpoints
as per PAMoS
Wait a minute... Is the PAMoS entry valid for the noun as well as for the verb?
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230 #1: Pin-points -> Pinpoints
as per PAMoS
Wait a minute... Is the PAMoS entry valid for the noun as well as for the verb?
Both noun and verb
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331 #1: six items -> eight items
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331 #2: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?
sect332
332 #1: tree-tops -> treetops
as in gs02, gs03, lw11, lw15 (2x)
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353 #5: time &ellips; no -> time&ellips; no
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355 #1: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?
Assuming we're talking about the Alether, we can add a "for the duration of the combat".
Oops, that should have been for section 355
I always assumed that it was a permanent change. Yes, we probably need a footnote for this, but we don't have any solid evidence to back us up. Are there any other opinions on how this bonus should work?
I second the assumption of a permanent change... that's how I always handled it, anyways.
What about "It appears that for every Phinomel pod that you possess and wish to throw into the Leafwater pool, you may permanently raise your COMBAT SKILL by 1 when using your Wixard's Staff. Remember to delete these Phinomel pods from your Action Chart."
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356 #1: not &ellips; -> not&ellips;
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passing
The Passing of the Shianti #1: Wytch-Queen -> Wytch-queen
just like Wytch-king
(Wytch-Queen -> Wytch-queen) This is Errata.
Approved. I think this can be considered "ne".
The Passing of the Shianti #2: artifacts -> artefacts
Except it was in the Newsletter, so I don't think it counts as Errata.
erratum
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The Passing of the Shianti #3: This epilogue to the <cite>Grey Star</cite> series was included in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 7</cite>.
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The Passing of the Shianti #3: This epilogue to the <cite>Grey Star</cite> series was included in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 7</cite>.
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