From bf6968e6c28550fd4e52d560ff5d2b4c0339d8cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Wed, 12 Aug 2015 08:47:53 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Remove superfluous space; errata 81: "at Ciudad" -> "at Juarez" as per common parlance [bz]. git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2471 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/03toz.xml | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/03toz.xml b/en/xml/03toz.xml index 625434f..43d95f9 100644 --- a/en/xml/03toz.xml +++ b/en/xml/03toz.xml @@ -1422,7 +1422,7 @@

I think they were waiting to hear some good news from an agent they sent after us, you reply, as you walk together towards the place where Kate has parked your roadster. Theyve a long wait if theyre still expecting him to call.

Kate looks at you with a puzzled expression, and you recount in detail the events that befell the team during the escape from Ciudad Juarez. As you drive out of Benson, you tell her how Frankland, Haskell, and Knott met their deaths, and how you avenged them in your showdown with their murderer, Helmut Varken, at the Tombstone courthouse.

What dyou thinks gonna happen when Mad Dog finds out that youve killed Varken? she asks, nervously.

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Well, he aint gonna be happy, thats fsure, especially after what we did at Ciudad. I dont know what hell do. I guess well just have to wait an see.

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Well, he aint gonna be happy, thats fsure, especially after what we did at Juarez. I dont know what hell do. I guess well just have to wait an see.

Unfortunately, you do not have to wait long.

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After ten hours deep, uninterrupted sleep, you wake feeling thoroughly refreshed: restore 4 ENDURANCE points. The barricade is still intact and, once it is dismantled, you arm yourself before investigating the six other buildings that comprise the town. All of them are empty and show no signs of having been entered during the night, prompting you to believe that you may, at least for the time being , have given the assassin the slip.

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After ten hours deep, uninterrupted sleep, you wake feeling thoroughly refreshed: restore 4 ENDURANCE points. The barricade is still intact and, once it is dismantled, you arm yourself before investigating the six other buildings that comprise the town. All of them are empty and show no signs of having been entered during the night, prompting you to believe that you may, at least for the time being, have given the assassin the slip.

In a shack behind the diner you discover a motorcycle that is in a serviceable condition. The tyres are sound and the gas tank is over half full with gasolene, but its oil level is very low. As you kick start the engine you can only hope that it will get you as far as Tucson before breaking down.

After studying the map you mount your new vehicle and set off, heading north along Highway 666. You have ridden only seven miles when a collapsed bridge forces you to change direction and travel west along an unmarked mountain road. You enjoy the cool breeze whipping through your hair as you ride at speed along this empty trail, and you cover more than twenty miles before coming to a small town where a sign proclaims:

GLEESON WELCOMES CAREFUL DRIVERS @@ -5314,7 +5314,7 @@

(72) Replaced clear, then with clear, and then.

(79) Replaced days or with days, or.

(80) Replaced limbs, then with limbs, and then. Replaced If you possess a pair of Binoculars with If you possess a pair of Binoculars or a Telescope. Replaced If you do not possess this Backpack item with If you possess neither of these Backpack Items.

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(81) Replaced Haskell and with Haskell, and.

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(81) Replaced Haskell and with Haskell, and. Replaced at Ciudad with at Juarez to reflect common parlance.

(82) Replaced silently and with silently, and. Replaced Bowie Knife [3] with Bowie Knife (3).

(85) Replaced sideways, then with sideways, and then.

(86) Replaced brighter, then with brighter, and then. Replaced three, then with three, and then.

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