From cc77241283ad1e9c5631156fd56f4bd0b9a4d6ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Mon, 2 Dec 2019 14:29:34 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Add missing "to" in "turn XXX" choices --- en/xml/29tsoc.xml | 21 ++++++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/29tsoc.xml b/en/xml/29tsoc.xml index 277435e..3609ae9 100644 --- a/en/xml/29tsoc.xml +++ b/en/xml/29tsoc.xml @@ -1659,7 +1659,7 @@

The Doomwolf gnaws at your right foot and desperately you kick free from its fang-filled jaws. It yelps with frustration and launches itself at your back as your terrified horse starts to pull ahead. Its sharp claws, now fully extended, rip through your oilskin cape and slice through the side of your backpack. You lose two Backpack Items (the second and third items recorded on your list). Steadily, your horse pulls away from this howling creature, leaving it trailing in your wake.

- Turn 181. + Turn to 181. @@ -1746,7 +1746,7 @@

There is no chance the gruff driver will allow you to board his wagon unless you pay him and so you step away and release your mental hold over the horse team. He whips the reins once more and this time the horse team respond and the wagon sets off along the highway without you.

Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you trudge along the rutted highway to Dwalas south gate. Upon arriving at the gate, a guard steps from his sentry post and demands you pay the night toll. Passage in and out of the city is free during the hours of daylight, but after dark a toll of 20 Ren (2 Gold Crowns) is imposed on all non-residents seeking to enter, and 10 Ren (1 Gold Crown) on those wishing to leave.

If you choose to pay the night toll, turn to 156. - If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn 94. + If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn to 94. @@ -3626,7 +3626,7 @@

Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you trudge the final mile to Dwalas south gate. Upon arriving at the gate, a guard steps from his sentry post and demands you pay the night entry toll. Passage in and out of the city is free during the hours of daylight, but after dark a toll of 20 Ren (2 Gold Crowns) is imposed on all non-residents wishing to enter, and 10 Ren (1 Gold Crown) on all those wanting to leave.

If you choose to pay the entry toll, deduct 2 Gold Crowns from Belt Pouch and then turn to 156. - If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn 94. + If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn to 94. @@ -3935,7 +3935,7 @@

Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you travel the short distance to Dwalas south gate. The driver pulls his team to a halt a hundred yards short of the gate and you climb down onto the rutted highway. The instant you are off the wagon, he whips the reins and urges his horses forward.

As you walk towards the gate in the pouring rain, you observe a guard step out of his sentry post and talk briefly with the driver before allowing his wagon to enter. When you reach the gate shortly after the wagon has passed through, the guard steps forward and demands that you pay the night entry toll. Passage in and out of the city is free during the hours of daylight, but after dark a toll of 20 Ren (2 Gold Crowns) is imposed on all non-residents wishing to enter, and 10 Ren (1 Gold Crown) on all those wanting to leave.

If you choose to pay the entry toll, turn to 156. - If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn 94. + If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn to 94. @@ -5040,7 +5040,7 @@

Lord Honos excuses himself and leaves the chamber to fetch his Speaking Stone. While you wait for him to return, Zautro and Song Tao offer to help you to recover from the rigours of your perilous journey to Dwala.

If you wish to accept Zautros offer to use his herbcraft skills to restore to you lost ENDURANCE points, turn to 186. If you choose to accept Priestess Song Taos offer to invoke Goddess Ishirs blessing upon you, turn to 288. - If you decide to decline their kind offers and rest in an armchair until Lord Honos returns to the chamber, turn 338. + If you decide to decline their kind offers and rest in an armchair until Lord Honos returns to the chamber, turn to 338. @@ -5117,7 +5117,7 @@

The Doomwolf gnaws at your right foot and desperately you kick free from its fang-filled jaws. It yelps with frustration and launches itself at your back as your terrified horse starts to pull ahead. Its sharp claws, now fully extended, rip through your oilskin cape and slice through the side of your backpack. You lose two Backpack Items (the first and the last items recorded on your list). Steadily, your horse pulls away from this howling creature, leaving it trailing in your wake.

- Turn 264. + Turn to 264. @@ -5489,7 +5489,7 @@

You wave farewell to the old man, then you set out across the marshy grassland and soon reach the highway beyond. This road connects Dwala with the coastal port of Czantai to the south. Its surface is deeply rutted, a consequence of the heavy wagons that travel this trade road every day. Frequent bolts of lightning illuminate the muddy highway as you trudge the final mile to Dwalas south gate.

Upon arriving at the gate, a guard steps from his sentry post and demands you pay the night toll. Passage in and out of the city is free during the hours of daylight, but after dark a toll of 20 Ren (2 Gold Crowns) is imposed on all non-residents seeking to enter, and 10 Ren (1 Gold Crown) on those wishing to leave.

If you choose to pay the night toll, turn to 156. - If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn 94. + If you do not, or if you do not have sufficient Gold Crowns to do so, turn to 94. @@ -6148,8 +6148,10 @@

(29) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

(30) Replaced woodmans with woodsmans. Replaced pole arm with polearm.

(31) Replaced gulley with gully. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(32) Replaced Turn 181 with Turn to 181.

(33) Changed 1/6th to and multiple occurrences of 5/6ths to .

(35) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

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(39) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(45) Replaced 50ft with 50 ft..

(46) Replaced it is has been with it has been. Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

(47) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline. Replaced Grand Master disciplines with Grand Master Disciplines.

@@ -6230,6 +6232,7 @@

(181) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced gulley with gully. Replaced all instances of Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(188) Replaced discipline of Mind over Matter with Discipline of Mind Over Matter.

(189) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(191) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(192) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(194) Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE.

(196) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

@@ -6238,6 +6241,7 @@

(207) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(208) Changed Weaponshop to Weapon Shop (cf. Section 221).

(210) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(215) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(220) Replaced treeline with tree-line.

(222) Replaced both instances of Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(223) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

@@ -6281,9 +6285,11 @@

(303) Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline.

(304) Replaced Youi with You. Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(307) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2) with 2 Chagarashi Scouts.

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(309) Replaced turn 338 with turn to 338.

(310) Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline.

(313) Replaced Angseng with Anseng. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline.

(314) Added a quotation mark at the end of the paragraph starting with When he was a young boy,.

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(315) Replaced Turn 264 with Turn to 264.

(316) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

(317) Replaced Zhou-Yin with Zhou-yin.

(318) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

@@ -6295,6 +6301,7 @@

(333) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(334) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(337) Replaced worshipers with worshippers.

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(345) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(347) Replaced Kai hunting discipline with Kai Hunting Discipline. Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(348) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

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