From d9988f07f916286c867dcb54c135944f4d23aa71 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Thu, 10 Apr 2014 18:02:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Clarify second option in 16tlov Section 47 git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2339 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/16tlov.xml | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/en/xml/16tlov.xml b/en/xml/16tlov.xml index b3757ee..ee72bad 100644 --- a/en/xml/16tlov.xml +++ b/en/xml/16tlov.xml @@ -1406,7 +1406,7 @@

In the far corner of this hovel are a man and a woman. They are huddled close together, wide-eyed and shivering with fear. Their once-fine clothes are tattered and caked with mud, and in their midst you see that they are cradling an infant who is clearly sick with fever. You lower your weapon and offer them an assurance that you mean them no harm but, even though you can tell that they understand your words, they still look at you with terror in their eyes.

If you possess some food and wish to offer it to them, turn to 122. - If you do not have any food, turn to 217. + If you do not have any food or do not wish to offer it, turn to 217. @@ -5903,6 +5903,7 @@

(44) Replaced dim blue with dim, blue. Replaced streches with stretches. Replaced light and in its dim glow you with light, and in its dim glow, you.

(45) Removed the superfluous semicolon in region; hasthe original print has a suspicious looking smudge that makes no sense in this context. Replaced says, as with says as.

(46) Replaced vortexi with Vortexi.

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(47) Added or do not wish to offer it to the second option to clarify that it is not compulsory to give them food.

(48) Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced Black corvayl with Black Corvayl.

(50) Replaced them they with them, they.

(51) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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