From da8861d79ea4323ea57e181fcceec69ee3150c2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sat, 14 Dec 2019 16:16:10 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Fix issues reported by gblint --- common/scripts/gblint.pl | 2 +- en/xml/29tsoc.xml | 85 +++++++++++++++++++--------------------- 2 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-) diff --git a/common/scripts/gblint.pl b/common/scripts/gblint.pl index 827a561..afde47c 100755 --- a/common/scripts/gblint.pl +++ b/common/scripts/gblint.pl @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ while( my $line = <> ) { if( $line =~ /[^>](CLOSE\sCOMBAT\sSKILL)/ || $line =~ /(CLOSE\s+COMBAT\s+SKILL)[^<]/ ) { &printError( "ne", $currentSection, $lineNumber, "possible missing markup", "$1", "$1" ); } - if( $line =~ /[^>](ENDURANCE)/ || $line =~ /(ENDURANCE)[^<]/ ) { + if( $line =~ /[^>](ENDURANCE)/ || $line =~ /(ENDURANCE)(?! Points)[^<]/ ) { &printError( "ne", $currentSection, $lineNumber, "possible missing markup", "ENDURANCE", "ENDURANCE" ); } if( $line =~ /[^>](WILLPOWER)/ || $line =~ /(WILLPOWER)[^<]/ ) { diff --git a/en/xml/29tsoc.xml b/en/xml/29tsoc.xml index b889b4a..8152e21 100644 --- a/en/xml/29tsoc.xml +++ b/en/xml/29tsoc.xml @@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
MS 5090 Shadaki
Occasional border skirmishes between Shadaki and Korli persisted.
MS 5091 Siyen
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A large number of Agarashi creatures (estimated at between 8,000-12,000) emerged from the Darkwall Mountains and invaded the Lucien Plain of Siyen. The city of Varedo was overrun and destroyed. The Siyenese army swiftly counter-attacked and forced the ravening horde back into its hidden mountain lairs.
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A large number of Agarashi creatures (estimated at between 8,00012,000) emerged from the Darkwall Mountains and invaded the Lucien Plain of Siyen. The city of Varedo was overrun and destroyed. The Siyenese army swiftly counter-attacked and forced the ravening horde back into its hidden mountain lairs.
MS 5091 The Isle of Lorn
The Freelands Alliance provided 1,000 workers to help with the construction of the Kai Monastery of Lorn.
MS 5091 Shadaki
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MS 5091 Sommerlund
King Ulnar V of Sommerlund and his two daughters, Crown Princess Imelda and Princess Madelon, died in unexplained circumstances in the Kings Keep of Holmgard. Kai Grand Master Firestone was killed attempting to protect them. The party responsible for these tragic murders was never found but the fact someone could strike in the heart of Sommerlund greatly worried Supreme Master Lone Wolf. King Tor IV, son of Crown Princess Imelda, acceded to the throne of Sommerlund.
MS 5092 Lunarlia
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The town of Jaroc, in southern Lunarlia, was attacked and destroyed by a large force (estimated at between 7,000-10,000) of Agarashi from the Doomlands of Naaros.
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The town of Jaroc, in southern Lunarlia, was attacked and destroyed by a large force (estimated at between 7,00010,000) of Agarashi from the Doomlands of Naaros.
MS 5092 Stornlands
The War of the Warrens erupted between Eldenora and Delden following the assassination of Lord Vandyan of Eldenora.
MS 5093 Starn
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Mt. Vost was besieged by a large horde of unnamed creatures (estimated at between 12,000-15,000) from out of the Kraknalorg Chasm. The Giants of Starn received military aid from Boden which broke the siege and sent the horde fleeing back into the chasm. The southern borderlands of Starn (namely the Shadow Grails and the Tsuzeloi Hills) have since been heavily patrolled by the rangers of Boden and Starn.
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Mt. Vost was besieged by a large horde of unnamed creatures (estimated at between 12,00015,000) from out of the Kraknalorg Chasm. The Giants of Starn received military aid from Boden which broke the siege and sent the horde fleeing back into the chasm. The southern borderlands of Starn (namely the Shadow Grails and the Tsuzeloi Hills) have since been heavily patrolled by the rangers of Boden and Starn.
MS 5093 Stornlands
End of the War of the Warrens between Eldenora and Delden. Eldenora won the war, gaining territory and tribute from defeated King Loarn of Delden.
MS 5094 Kasland and Cincoria
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The first number that you pick from the Random Number Table in this way represents your COMBAT SKILL. Add 25 to the number you picked and write the total in the COMBAT SKILL section of your Action Chart (i.e. if your pencil fell on the number 7 in the Random Number Table you would write in a COMBAT SKILL of 32). When you fight, your COMBAT SKILL will be pitted against that of your enemy. A high score in this section is therefore desirable.

The second number that you pick from the Random Number Table represents your powers of ENDURANCE. Add 30 to this number and write the total in the ENDURANCE section of your Action Chart (i.e. if your pencil fell on the number 8 on the Random Number Table you would have 38 ENDURANCE points).

If you are wounded in combat you will lose ENDURANCE points. If at any time your ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below, you are dead and the adventure is over. Lost ENDURANCE points can be regained during the course of the adventure, but your number of ENDURANCE points cannot rise above the number you have when you start an adventure.

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If you have successfully completed previous adventures in the Lone Wolf New Order series (Books 2128), you can carry your current scores of COMBAT SKILL and ENDURANCE points over to this adventure. You may also carry over any Special Items, Kai Weapon, normal Weapons, and Backpack Items you had in your possession at the end of your last adventure, and these should be entered on your new Action Chart. If you have completed the previous Lone Wolf New Order adventure, remember to choose an additional Grand Master discipline and add +1 to your basic COMBAT SKILL and +2 to your basic ENDURANCE.

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If you have successfully completed previous adventures in the Lone Wolf New Order series (Books 2128), you can carry your current scores of COMBAT SKILL and ENDURANCE points over to this adventure. You may also carry over any Special Items, Kai Weapon, normal Weapons, and Backpack Items you had in your possession at the end of your last adventure, and these should be entered on your new Action Chart. If you have completed the previous Lone Wolf New Order adventure, remember to choose an additional Grand Master discipline and add +1 to your basic COMBAT SKILL and +2 to your basic ENDURANCE.

Playing Tip: You may use a 10-sided die instead of the Random Number Table if you find it more convenient.

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If you successfully complete the mission as set in Book 29 of the Lone Wolf New Order series, you may add a further Grand Master Discipline of your choice to your Action Chart in the next. For every Grand Master Discipline you possess, in excess of the original five Disciplines you begin with, you may add 1 point to your basic COMBAT SKILL score and 2 points to your basic ENDURANCE points score. These bonus points, together with your extra Grand Master Discipline(s), your original five Grand Master Disciplines, your Kai Weapon, and any other Special Items and Backpack Items that you have found and been able to keep during your adventures, may then be carried over and used in the next New Order adventure, which is called:

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Dead in the Deep

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Kai-screen

Grand Thanes are able to absorb and transform hostile psychic energy into a positive physical effect. Using this powerful ability, a Grand Thane can restore lost ENDURANCE points while being subjected to psychic attack. The number and rate of ENDURANCE points regained in this way varies greatly, and is dependent upon the nature of the attack and the physical condition of the Grand Thane when the attack occurs.

Grand Nexus
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By uttering the Kai Word of Power (Kai!), a Grand Thane can repel and cause damage to creatures who devoutly follow any of the lesser gods and champions of Naar - the King of the Darkness. The Kai Word of Power has no effect when used against non-sentient creatures or persons who have neither sworn fealty to Naar, nor acknowledged Naar as their master.

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By uttering the Kai Word of Power (Kai!), a Grand Thane can repel and cause damage to creatures who devoutly follow any of the lesser gods and champions of Naarthe King of the Darkness. The Kai Word of Power has no effect when used against non-sentient creatures or persons who have neither sworn fealty to Naar, nor acknowledged Naar as their master.

Telegnosis

Grand Thanes are able to excavate earth by force of their will alone. The amount of earth, the depth of the excavation, and the speed at which the excavation occurs all increase as a Grand Thane advances in rank.

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Grand Master, you are about to embark upon a difficult and vital mission. Seventeen years have passed since you banished Autarch Sejanoz and saved Khea-khan Xo-lin from a certain death at the hands of the Bhanarians. The land of Chai is now ruled by Xo-lins grandson, Lao Tin. You are fated to return to this distant land and retrieve the Eye of Agarash from the Khea-khans throne in the Imperial Palace of Pensei. You once saved his grandfathers life; now the young Khea-khan is indebted to you, and he will willingly allow you to take possession of this accursed stone. As soon as it is in your possession, you must return with it at once to the Kai Monastery of Lorn.

During your mission you may encounter many hostile and wily adversaries. Your journey back from Pensei will be fraught with danger at every turn, so remain on your guard at all times.

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Some of the material items that you find will be of use to you, but others may be red herrings of no real value at all. If you discover items during your mission, be selective in what you choose to keep. Pick your initial five Grand Master Disciplines with care for a wise choice will enable anyone to complete the quest, no matter how weak their initial COMBAT SKILL and ENDURANCE scores may be. Completion of previous Lone Wolf adventures (Books 1-28) may be advantageous, but it is not essential for the successful completion of this New Order adventure.

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Some of the material items that you find will be of use to you, but others may be red herrings of no real value at all. If you discover items during your mission, be selective in what you choose to keep. Pick your initial five Grand Master Disciplines with care for a wise choice will enable anyone to complete the quest, no matter how weak their initial COMBAT SKILL and ENDURANCE scores may be. Completion of previous Lone Wolf adventures (Books 128) may be advantageous, but it is not essential for the successful completion of this New Order adventure.

May the Gods Kai and Ishir guide and protect you during your vital mission.

For Sommerlund and the Kai!

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Quickly you unshoulder your Bow then retrieve, string, and draw an Arrow to your lips. You take swift aim at the Claw of Naar. The deck is swaying and this shot will not be an easy one.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table. If you possess Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, add 3 (instead of 5) to the number you have chosen.

If your total is now 6 or lower, turn to 235. If it is 7 or higher, turn to 219. @@ -2117,7 +2117,7 @@

You ask him if he is prepared to accept something else of value instead of money. At first he is unwilling, but then he changes his mind when he realises that he might acquire something worth a lot more than 10 Ren.

What have you got to offer? he growls.

You take off your backpack, open the flap and invite him to choose any item he wishes.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table (0 = 10). The items on your Backpack list are numbered 1-10. The guard will accept the item that is the same as the random number you have picked (erase the item now). If the random number matches an empty slot, he will accept the first item on your list instead and you must erase it.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table (0 = 10). The items on your Backpack list are numbered 110. The guard will accept the item that is the same as the random number you have picked (erase the item now). If the random number matches an empty slot, he will accept the first item on your list instead and you must erase it.

Satisfied that he has got the better part of the bargain, he steps aside and allows you to pass through the south gate.

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Deng looks down at the decapitated head of the Nagah Ghoul in shocked disbelief. He has heard of these evil undead but he has never before seen one with his own eyes. As he struggles to retain his breakfast and regain his composure, cautiously you enter an open doorway to your left. This is the tavern owners living and sleeping quarters, a large room that extends the length of the building. On the floor near the open window overlooking the street is Kenga. The old man has had his throat slashed and he is lying dead in a pool of blood. On the middle finger of his right hand you see a gold signet ring and immediately your Sixth Sense detects that this is no ordinary ring.

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Kengas Ring endows it wearer with a limited protection from evil. If you wish to take this ring and wear it, record it on your Action Chart. If you possess the maximum number of Special Items permissible (12) you must now discard one in its favour but you cannot discard the Eye of Agarash. Whenever the Eye causes you an energy drain, pick a number from the Random Number Table. If the number you choose is 0-5, the ring has no effect. If the number chosen is 6-9, you may reduce the effect of the energy drain by 1 ENDURANCE point.

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Kengas Ring endows it wearer with a limited protection from evil. If you wish to take this ring and wear it, record it on your Action Chart. If you possess the maximum number of Special Items permissible (12) you must now discard one in its favour but you cannot discard the Eye of Agarash. Whenever the Eye causes you an energy drain, pick a number from the Random Number Table. If the number you choose is 05, the ring has no effect. If the number chosen is 69, you may reduce the effect of the energy drain by 1 ENDURANCE point.

Deng has now recovered from shock and he is standing by a window at the far end of the room. He shouts for you to come and join him. Down in the rear garden of the tavern you see Quang, Bai, and Chao locked in a desperate fight with five Nagah Ghouls. They are faring badly and are in desperate need of help.

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Take off your backpack, demands the guard. Show me the contents, and be quick about it!

You take off your backpack, open the flap and invite him to inspect what you are carrying.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table (0 = 10). The items on your Backpack list are numbered 1-10. The guard will confiscate the item that is the same as the random number you have picked (erase the item now). If the random number matches an empty slot, he will confiscate the first item on your list instead and you must erase it.

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Pick a number from the Random Number Table (0 = 10). The items on your Backpack list are numbered 110. The guard will confiscate the item that is the same as the random number you have picked (erase the item now). If the random number matches an empty slot, he will confiscate the first item on your list instead and you must erase it.

Finally, he is satisfied that you can enter Dwala. You close your backpack and put it back on, then he steps aside and allows you to pass through the south gate.

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I will pray to Ishir to grant us a break in the storm so that Lord Rimoah shall be able to land in safety tomorrow, she adds, and calls forward Jia Zhai to escort you to your room. You bid good night to the others and follow the Moon Maiden as she leads you out of the chamber and down the spiral staircase to the alcove behind the chapels altar. She beckons you to follow her to another alcove and she opens a secret door to a comfortably appointed room with a bed and a narrow stained glass window. She wishes you a peaceful nights sleep before leaving.

You remove your oilskin cloak, your boots, and your backpack and place them beside the bed. You are feeling weary and it does not take long for you to drift off into a deep sleep.

Pick a number from the Random Number Table.

- If the number you have chosen is 0-2, turn to 37. - If it is 3-6, turn to 81. - If it is 7-9, turn to 117. + If the number you have chosen is 02, turn to 37. + If it is 36, turn to 81. + If it is 79, turn to 117. @@ -5711,7 +5711,7 @@

My apologies, Chao. I should not have been so sharp with you. It is a good plan. I approve of it. What say you, Bai and Deng?

The other Watchers are heartened by Chaos proposal. It offers them the chance to keep the solemn vow they made to Lao Tin. Deng is especially pleased for his home and family are in Valus and it raises his hopes of seeing them again.

So be it, says Quang. We shall turn towards the Tviloi Forest and make our way to Dwala from there.

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You are relieved that your mission may yet be completed and you agree to Chaos plan of action. But your sense of relief rapidly evaporates when you look towards the distant enemy. While you have been listening intently to Chao, you have failed to notice that several dark shapes are loping across the open plain towards you. Swiftly you magnify your vision and your heart skips a beat. At once you recognise the approaching creatures and you can hardly believe what you see. doomwolves!

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You are relieved that your mission may yet be completed and you agree to Chaos plan of action. But your sense of relief rapidly evaporates when you look towards the distant enemy. While you have been listening intently to Chao, you have failed to notice that several dark shapes are loping across the open plain towards you. Swiftly you magnify your vision and your heart skips a beat. At once you recognise the approaching creatures and you can hardly believe what you see: doomwolves!

Hurry, hurry, you cry, we must go now, and quickly!

If you wish to turn around and gallop back along the highway towards Vabou, turn to 3. If you wish to speed south-eastwards towards the Tviloi Forest, turn to 56. @@ -5739,14 +5739,12 @@

Retire to your quarters and rest well, my Lords. I shall summon each of you tomorrow morning. Lord Rimoah and I shall decide the locations you shall be sent to complete the missions that remain unaccomplished.

You leave the Grand Hall with Blazer and Star Lynx and retire to your private chamber. The loss of your brother Grand Masters is a bitter blow, but you try to put your grief to the back of your mind and concentrate on the mission that awaits you tomorrow.

Congratulations, Grand Master. You have achieved a great victory over the forces of darkness and saved Chai from certain destruction at the hands of Nadziran Zashnor and his fell minions. Soon your new mission will be revealed. You will discover the nature of the task that awaits you in the next exciting New Order adventure entitled:

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(Timeline of Notable Events in Magnamund) Changed Zha-zing to Zha-zhing. Changed Shararak to Shasarak. Changed MS 5101 Kalte, Sommerlund and Durenor to MS 5101 Kalte, Sommerlund, and Durenor. Changed leveled to levelled. Replaced Xo-Lins great-great-grandson with Xo-lins great-great-grandson. Replaced MS 5088 Vaduzhan, Bhanar and Chai with MS 5088 Vaduzhan, Bhanar, and Chai. Replaced formerly with formally. Replaced MS 5098 Lencia, Nyras and Nyvoz with MS 5098 Lencia, Nyras and, Nyvoz. Replaced Eru, Lencia, Kasland, Boden and Bor with Eru, Lencia, Kasland, Boden, and Bor. Replaced from the ruins of Cragmantle on the Skaror border, all the way to with from the ruins of Cragmantle on the Skaror border all the way to. Replaced Port of Suhn with the Port of Suhn.

(The Story So Far) Replaced Spring with spring. Replaced elite with lite. Replaced battlements, towers and gleaming porticos with battlements, towers, and gleaming porticos. Replaced Your pride is tinged with apprehension for you with Your pride is tinged with apprehension, for you. Replaced more-psychically with more psychically. Replaced is readiness with in readiness. Replaced decent towards with descent towards. Replaced powered-down with powered down. Replaced Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand and Swift Sword with Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand, and Swift Sword. Replaced The Maakengorge, the Kraknalorg Chasm, The Dark Realm of Ruel, the ruins of Cragmantle, Ljuk, The Danarg, the city of Shadaki and the Doomlands of Naaros with The Maakengorge, the Kraknalorg Chasm, the Dark Realm of Ruel, the ruins of Cragmantle, Ljuk, the Danarg, the city of Shadaki, and the Doomlands of Naaros. Replaced Naaros. All of these places with Naaros: All of these places. Replaced forces hungry with forces, hungry. Replaced young Khea-Khans with young Khea-khans. Replaced that destroys them utterly leaving no trace with that destroys them, utterly leaving no trace. Replaced southeast with south-east.

(The Game Rules) Removed that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages. Removed on the last page of this book. Replaced each occurrence of ie with i.e.. Replaced fall to zero with fall to zero or below. Replaced on to with onto. Replaced weapons and with weapons, and. Replaced normal weapons with normal Weapons. Replaced Lone Wolf New Order series with Lone Wolf New Order series. Replaced New Order adventure with New Order adventure.

(Your Kai Name) Replaced elite with lite. Removed You can record your personal Kai name on the book plate which appears on the inside front cover of this book..

(New Order Kai Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced Elementalism and Bardsmanship with Elementalism, and Bardsmanship. Replaced Bautar and Dessi with Bautar, and Dessi. Replaced Magi Magic with Magi-magic. Replaced remove or with remove, or. Replaced dialect and with dialect, and. Replaced Weapon and with Weapon, and. Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced 1 to 3 with one to three. Replaced For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. with For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.. Replaced Fire and with Fire, and. Replaced battle wounds with battle-wounds. Added If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat. to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced fortresses increases with fortresses increase. Replaced Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases with Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase. Replaced predictions increases with predictions increase. Replaced will be of use with may be of use. Added If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow. from the Equipment section. Replaced Lone Wolf (New Order) series with Lone Wolf New Order series. Replaced each occurrence of New Order series with New Order series. Replaced New Order adventure with New Order adventure. Replaced any other Special Items that with any other Special Items and Backpack Items that.

(Equipment) Replaced each occurrence of Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf when referring to the series. Replaced eg, with e.g.. Replaced combat, therefore with combat; therefore. Replaced each occurrence of arrow with Arrow. Replaced each occurrence of bow with Bow. Replaced each occurrence of quiver with Quiver. Replaced each occurrence of arrows with Arrows. Removed (see the inside front cover of this book). Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section EquipmentHow to use it. Replaced Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. Replaced a sword or an axe with a Sword or an Axe. Replaced weapons with Weapons. Replaced weapon with Weapon. Removed If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow.. Replaced record these on your Weapons List with record these on your Action Chart for clarity. Replaced the total sum of with the number of. Replaced Disciplines then with Disciplines, then. Replaced normal weapons with normal Weapons. Replaced New Order adventures with New Order adventures. Replaced each occurrence of weapon with Weapon in the EquipmentHow to Use It section. Added You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat. in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Added It cannot be used to increase ENDURANCE points immediately prior to a combat. in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Replaced four with five in line with the Collectors Edition. Added the section How Much Can You Carry?.

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(Kai Weapons) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced new-found with newfound. Removed at the front of the book. Replaced magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword with magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword. Replaced axe Alema with Axe Alema. Added (these bonuses are not cumulative) in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Replaced when used versus magicians with when used against magicians or creatures born of magic in harmony with the Collectors Edition.

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(Kai Weapons) Replaced elite with lite. Replaced new-found with newfound. Removed at the front of the book. Replaced magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword with magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword. Replaced axe Alema with Axe Alema. Added (these bonuses are not cumulative) in harmony with the Collectors Edition. Replaced when used versus magicians with when used against magicians or creatures born of magic in harmony with the Collectors Edition.

(Rules for Combat) Removed on the inside back cover of this book. Replaced on the page after the Random Number Table with in the back of this book. Replaced points reduced with points possibly reduced. Replaced to zero with to zero or below. Replaced at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead with at which point that combatant is declared dead. Replaced only you with only you.

(Levels of New Order Grand Mastership) Removed parentheses from around You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Kai Grand Mastery. Replaced rank and titles with ranks and titles. Replaced New Order series with New Order series. Replaced New Order adventures with New Order adventures.

(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced Improved Grand Master Disciplines with Improved Grand Master Disciplines. Replaced ie, with i.e.. Replaced Mindfort with Mindfort. Replaced Brotherhood spells with Brotherhood Spells. Replaced 1 metre with three feet. Replaced Lone Wolf New Order series with Lone Wolf New Order series. Replaced affected, and the duration of the effect, increases with affectedand the duration of the effectincreases. Replaced affected, and the duration of effect, both increase with affected and the duration of effect both increase. Replaced Lone Wolf New Order books with Lone Wolf New Order books. Replaced Speedby casting with SpeedBy casting. Replaced Power Strikecan be cast with Power StrikeCan be cast. Replaced Illuminationcreates with IlluminationCreates. Replaced Bridgecreates with BridgeCreates. Replaced Sun Knights who possess Mastery with Sun Knights who possess mastery. Replaced boulders etc. with boulders, etc.. Replaced mid air with mid-air.

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(3) Replaced potholed with pot-holed. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced both instances of Doomwolf with doomwolf. Replaced three instances of Doomwolves with doomwolves.

(8) Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced Hail Chengu! with Hail, Chengu!. Replaced you bring your horse to a halt behind the wagon, dismount and tether its reins with you bring your horse to a halt behind the wagon, dismount, and tether its reins.

(9) Replaced you know who this is; Nadziran Zashor! with you know who this is: Nadziran Zashor!.

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(10) Replaced eat, rest and recover with eat, rest, and recover. Replaced Well camp here for the night says Quang with Well camp here for the night, says Quang. Replaced roots, fungi and berries with roots, fungi, and berries.

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(10) Replaced eat, rest and recover with eat, rest, and recover. Replaced Well camp here for the night says Quang with Well camp here for the night, says Quang. Replaced roots, fungi and berries with roots, fungi, and berries.

(11) Replaced strength as you can muster with strength you can muster.

(13) Changed 50ft to 50 ft.. Changed Weaponshop to Weapon Shop (cf. Section 221). Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items.

(14) Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

(15) Changed 1/6th to and multiple occurrences of 5/6ths to .

(16) Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

(17) Replaced both occurrences of treeline with tree-line.

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(18) Replaced retrieve, string and draw and arrow with retrieve, string, and draw an Arrow. Replaced both instances of bow with bow.

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(18) Replaced retrieve, string and draw and arrow with retrieve, string, and draw an Arrow. Replaced both instances of bow with bow. Replaced chosen with chosen..

(19) Replaced woodmans with woodsmans. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(20) Replaced boots, backpack and cape with boots, backpack and cape.

(20) Replaced Jian Tzu, Herbwarden Zautro and Lord Honos with Jian Tzu, Herbwarden Zautro, and Lord Honos.

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(38) Replaced Backpack items with Backpack items.

(39) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(40) Replaced a bunk, chart table, swivel-backed captains chair and mahogany cabinets with a bunk, chart table, swivel-backed captains chair, and mahogany cabinets.

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(42) Replaced We cannot go on in this direction, my Lord with We cannot go on in this direction, my Lord,.

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(43) Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge, by adding with Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge by adding. Replaced Ferry House Inn with Ferry House Inn..

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(42) Replaced We cannot go on in this direction, my Lord with We cannot go on in this direction, my Lord,.

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(43) Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge, by adding with Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge by adding. Replaced Ferry House Inn with Ferry House Inn..

(45) Replaced 50ft with 50 ft.. Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items. Added Restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat..

(46) Replaced it is has been with it has been. Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

(47) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline. Replaced Grand Master disciplines with Grand Master Disciplines. Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

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(73) Replaced 50ft length with 50 ft. length. Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced arrows with Arrows. Added Restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat..

(74) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline. Replaced bow with bow. Replaced all instances of arrow with Arrow.

(76) Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items.

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(77) Replaced HiJoi with Hijoi. Replaced One moment, my Lord, he says with One moment, my Lord, he says. Replaced Come a little closer with Come a little closer,. Replaced Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun with Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun.

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(77) Replaced HiJoi with Hijoi. Replaced One moment, my Lord, he says with One moment, my Lord, he says. Replaced Come a little closer with Come a little closer,. Replaced Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun with Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun.

(78) Replaced Old Kingdom spell with Old Kingdom Spell.

(79) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase Steady, my Lord,. Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced Backpack Items with Backpack Items. Replaced the teeming rain, the howling winds and the rolling thunder with the teeming rain, the howling winds, and the rolling thunder.

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(80) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced Kai! with Kai!.

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(80) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced Kai! with Kai!.

(81) Replaced ENDURANCE points you lose with ENDURANCE points (if any) you lose.

(82) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

(83) Replaced both instances of arrows with Arrows.

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(92) Replaced gulley with gully. Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

(93) Replaced woodmans with woodsmans.

(96) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell.

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(97) Replaced steamed rice, fresh vegetables and diced lamb with steamed rice, fresh vegetables, and diced lamb. Replaced says Tzu, after all with says Tzu, after all .

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(97) Replaced steamed rice, fresh vegetables and diced lamb with steamed rice, fresh vegetables, and diced lamb. Replaced says Tzu, after all with says Tzu, after all.

(98) Replaced traveling with travelling.

(99) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced bow with Bow.

(100) Replaced 7th round with seventh round. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(103) Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced bow with Bow.

(104) Replaced both instances of bow with Bow.

(105) Replaced buys, sells and prepares with buys, sells and prepares. Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced Increases the effect of Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge, by adding with Increases the effect of Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge by adding.

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(106) Replaced My compliments, Grand Master with My compliments, Grand Master,. Replaced Greetings Grand Master with Greetings, Grand Master. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow.

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(106) Replaced My compliments, Grand Master with My compliments, Grand Master,. Replaced Greetings Grand Master with Greetings, Grand Master. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow.

(107) Replaced Khea-Khan with Khea-khan. Replaced the Captain, Lord Honos and Herbwarden Zautro with the Captain, Lord Honos, and Herbwarden Zautro. Replaced They have gone but they will never be forgotten. with They have gone, but they will never be forgotten..

(108) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced What is it, my Lord with What is it, my Lord?.

(109) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow.

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(110) Replaced This is a valuable item, and therefore I must request that you wager a minimum of 100 Ren (10 Gold Crowns). with This is a valuable item, and therefore I must request that you wager a minimum of 100 Ren... Replaced If you have 10 Gold Crowns with If you have 100 Ren (10 Gold Crowns).

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(110) Replaced This is a valuable item, and therefore I must request that you wager a minimum of 100 Ren (10 Gold Crowns). with This is a valuable item, and therefore I must request that you wager a minimum of 100 Ren... Replaced If you have 10 Gold Crowns with If you have 100 Ren (10 Gold Crowns).

(111) Replaced camp fire with campfire. Replaced Queng with Quang. Replaced woodmans with woodsmans. Replaced berries, nuts and edible flora with berries, nuts, and edible flora.

(112) Replaced Port of Suhn with the Port of Suhn.

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(113) Replaced Please, gentlemen, introduce yourselves to our famous guest with Please, gentlemen, introduce yourselves to our famous guest,.

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(113) Replaced Please, gentlemen, introduce yourselves to our famous guest with Please, gentlemen, introduce yourselves to our famous guest,.

(114) Placed Madam Dai-zias speech inside a block quote element and removed the quotation mark at the beginning of the first paragraph and at the end of the last. Added an apostrophe to the phrase three minutes time. Added a period to the end of the last paragraph. Replaced You take their seats, remove your backpacks and stow them with You take their seats, remove your backpacks, and stow them. Replaced both instances of sand timer with hourglass. Added periods to end of the three sentences describing the inscriptions on the boxes.

(115) Replaced Doomwolf with doomwolf. Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves. Replaced both instances of bow with Bow. Replaced both instances of arrow with Arrow. Replaced quiver with Quiver.

(116) Replaced Weapomnmastery with Weaponmastery. Replaced all instances of discipline with Discipline.

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(149) Replaced Magnakai disciplines with Magnakai Disciplines. Replaced turn to 180 with turn to 98. Replaced clothing, furniture and fruit with clothing, furniture, and fruit.

(151) Replaced actives with activates. Replaced Anseng, Chao and Lieutenant Quang with Anseng, Chao, and Lieutenant Quang.

(153) Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced both instances of bow with Bow.

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(154) Replaced Come a little closer, with Come a little closer,. Replaced Come a little closer, he says with Come a little closer, he says. Replaced Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun with Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun.

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(154) Replaced Come a little closer, with Come a little closer,. Replaced Come a little closer, he says with Come a little closer, he says. Replaced Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun with Of course, my Lord, replies Shousun.

(156) Replaced both instances of Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(157) Replaced If you do not kill the Chagarashi outright with your single blow with If you do not kill the Chagarashi outright with your single blow and lose the same or fewer ENDURANCE points than the Chagarashi. Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE.

(159) Replaced bow with Bow.

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(179) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(181) Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced gulley with gully. Replaced all instances of Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline. Replaced three instances of Doomwolves with doomwolves. Replaced Doomwolf with doomwolf.

(182) Replaced bow with Bow.

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(183) Replaced As I thought, he says with As I thought, he says.

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(183) Replaced As I thought, he says with As I thought, he says.

(184) Replaced both instances of Quang, Bai and Deng with Quang, Bai, and Deng. Replaced With a wave, Shen-yin with With a wave, Shen-Yin.

(185) Replaced backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge with Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge.

(188) Replaced the first two instances of kirusami with Kirusami. Replaced discipline of Mind over Matter with Discipline of Mind Over Matter.

(189) Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced bow with Bow.

(191) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(192) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

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(194) Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE.

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(194) Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE.

(194) Replaced four instances of Doomwolf with doomwolf.

(196) Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(197) Replaced pole arm with polearm.

(198) Replaced both occurrences of treeline with tree-line. Replaced arrows with Arrows.

(199) Replaced both instances of backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge with Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge.

(200) Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items.

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(202) Replaced Hail, sir says Quang with Hail, sir, says Quang.

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(202) Replaced Hail, sir says Quang with Hail, sir, says Quang.

(203) Replaced Both of them turn their heads, recognise the familiar face of Lieutenant Quang and immediately stand up and salute him. with Both of them turn their heads, recognise the familiar face of Lieutenant Quang, and immediately stand up and salute him..

(207) Split the paragraph beginning You may add 6 points in two. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(208) Changed Weaponshop to Weapon Shop (cf. Section 221).

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(222) Replaced both instances of Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(223) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

(224) Replaced forcing them run with forcing to them run. Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

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(225) Replaced It can be yours for only 200 Ren (20 Gold Crowns) with It can be yours for only 200 Ren.. Replaced If you wish to buy this Wardstone with If you wish to buy this Wardstone for 200 Ren (20 Gold Crowns).

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(225) Replaced It can be yours for only 200 Ren (20 Gold Crowns) with It can be yours for only 200 Ren.. Replaced If you wish to buy this Wardstone with If you wish to buy this Wardstone for 200 Ren (20 Gold Crowns).

(228) Replaced on the edge of walkway with on the edge of the walkway. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced If you total is now 4 or lower with If your total is now 4 or lower.

(230) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline. Replaced reach to your weapon with reach for your weapon.

(233) Replaced as it head sinks with as its head sinks. Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced Doomwolf with doomwolf. Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

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(235) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced ships with ships.

(236) Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

(237) Replaced both instances of Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

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(238) Replaced both instances Port of Suhn with the Port of Suhn. Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase Grand Master,. Replaced Silver Virixe with Silver Virixe. Replaced Grand Master disciplines with Grand Master Disciplines. Replaced Silver Virixe with Silver Virixe.

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(238) Replaced both instances Port of Suhn with the Port of Suhn. Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase Grand Master,. Replaced Silver Virixe with Silver Virixe. Replaced Grand Master disciplines with Grand Master Disciplines. Replaced Silver Virixe with Silver Virixe.

(239) Replaced You are little than a mile with You are little more than a mile.

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(240) Replaced ENDURANE with ENDURANCE.

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(240) Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE.

(241) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase Thank you very much,. Replaced she a lot prettier with shes a lot prettier.

(242) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2) with 2 Chagarashi Scouts.

(243) Replaced creature chest with creatures chest. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline. Replaced arrow with Arrow. Replaced you flick the reins and the team set off with you flick the reins, and the team sets off.

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(280) Replaced envelopes, slips of paper and sticks of charcoal with envelopes, slips of paper, and sticks of charcoal.

(282) Replaced make direct mind contact him with make direct mind contact with him. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline.

(283) Replaced Doomwolf with doomwolf.

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(284) Replaced What is it, my Lord he says with What is it, my Lord? he says.

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(284) Replaced What is it, my Lord he says with What is it, my Lord? he says.

(285) Replaced a bunk, an oak table, an ornately carved high-backed Mythenian chair and a toa wood chest of drawers with a bunk, an oak table, an ornately carved high-backed Mythenian chair, and a toa wood chest of drawers. Replaced discipline of Mind over Matter with Discipline of Mind Over Matter.

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(286) Replaced says Tzu, after all the help with says Tzu, after all the help .

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(286) Replaced says Tzu, after all the help with says Tzu, after all the help.

(287) Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves.

(288) Replaced restores to you 5 ENDURANCE points with restores 5 ENDURANCE points.

(290) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline. Replaced 129 with turn to 129.

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(308) Replaced with kitchen knife with with a kitchen knife.

(301) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced three instances of arrow with Arrow. Replaced quiver with Quiver.

(302) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

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(303) Replaced 10 Ren he says with 10 Ren, he says. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline.

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(303) Replaced 10 Ren he says with 10 Ren, he says. Replaced both instances of discipline with Discipline.

(304) Replaced Youi with You. Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(307) Replaced Chagarashi Scouts (x2) with 2 Chagarashi Scouts. Replaced arrow with Arrow.

(309) Replaced turn 338 with turn to 338.

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(318) Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf.

(319) Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced reach to your weapon with reach to your weapon.

(322) Replaced worshipers with worshippers. Replaced discipline with Discipline. Replaced turn to 126 with turn to 185. Replaced warmth and calmness following through you with warmth and calmness flowing through you.

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(324) Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

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(324) Replaced ENDRANCE with ENDURANCE. Replaced discipline with Discipline.

(325) Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrows with Arrows. Replaced quiver with Quiver. Replaced General Store the opposite side with General Store on the opposite side.

(326) Replaced Grand Master Discipline of Pathsmanship with Discipline of Grand Pathsmanship.

(328) Replaced both instances of arrows with Arrows.

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(334) Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline. Added and restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat..

(335) Replaced all three instances of kirusami with Kirusami.

(337) Replaced warmth and calmness following through you with warmth and calmness flowing through you. Replaced worshipers with worshippers. Replaced turn to 126 with turn to 185.

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(338) Replaced There is a knock on the chamber door and Song Tao says Enter. with There is a knock on the chamber door, and Song Tao says Enter.. Replaced grilled fish, boiled rice and steamed vegetables with grilled fish, boiled rice, and steamed vegetables. Replaced stunk by a bee with stung by a bee.

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(338) Replaced There is a knock on the chamber door and Song Tao says Enter. with There is a knock on the chamber door, and Song Tao says Enter.. Replaced grilled fish, boiled rice and steamed vegetables with grilled fish, boiled rice, and steamed vegetables. Replaced stunk by a bee with stung by a bee.

(339) Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items.

(344) Replaced arrows with Arrows. Replaced Turn to 135 with Turn to 297. Replaced quiver with Quiver.

(345) Replaced turn 94 with turn to 94.

(347) Replaced from taverns stable with from the taverns stable. Replaced Kai hunting discipline with Kai Hunting Discipline. Replaced Grand Master discipline with Grand Master Discipline.

(348) Replaced Magnakai discipline with Magnakai Discipline.

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(349) Replaced Doomwolves with doomwolves. Replaced southeast with south-east. Replaced their faces taught with frustration with their faces taut with frustration. Replaced they are wont to give up now with they are loath to give up now.

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(349) Replaced see. Doomwolves with see: doomwolves. Replaced southeast with south-east. Replaced their faces taught with frustration with their faces taut with frustration. Replaced they are wont to give up now with they are loath to give up now.

(350) Replaced Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand and Swift Sword with Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand, and Swift Sword.

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