From ea770dfafcd9a85d3bc71f7956248e78b15565ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:41:27 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] correcting issues reported by gblint.pl git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2676 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/23mh.xml | 29 ++++++++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/23mh.xml b/en/xml/23mh.xml index 4f2c6a9..2b11e5c 100644 --- a/en/xml/23mh.xml +++ b/en/xml/23mh.xml @@ -2917,7 +2917,7 @@
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    You also discover an iron key that bears an inscription on its shank. Your Magnakai Pathsmanship skills enable you to decipher its meaning: THIS KEY IS THE PROPERTY OF THE TEHDA STABLES.

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    You also discover an iron key that bears an inscription on its shank. Your Magnakai Pathsmanship skills enable you to decipher its meaning: This key is the property of the Tehda Stables.

    If you wish to keep this Tehda Key, record it on your Action Chart as a Special Item which you carry in the pocket of your tunic. You need not discard another item in its favour if you are already carrying the maximum number of Special Items permissible.)

    Stealthily you climb the steps to a flagstoned loading area that is crowded with soldiers and wagons. By keeping low and moving from one wagon to the next, you and Karvas are able to cross this concourse undetected. On the far side you discover a stone bridge that traverses the River Tehda. You hurry across it and enter a wide avenue which leads to the citys east quarter. Grimy two-storey houses of carved hardwood pass by on either side, silent behind their bolts and shutters. At the end of the avenue you almost collide with a patrol of armed guards which is marching towards the river, and hurriedly you are forced to take cover in a timber yard to avoid being seen. You watch the ten-strong patrol as it marches past, and note that these men are clad in black quilted tunics with wide silk leggings, and they are armed with curved swords and hand-axes. They are almond-eyed and they all have shiny black hair tied in a knot at the nape of their necks. Their leader, a stocky bull-necked sergeant, wears the emblem of Sejanoz emblazoned upon a scarlet armband. Patiently you wait for them to reach the river but, when they do, you see another patrol come marching along the avenue from the opposite direction. The east quarter of Bakhasa is a busy place, even at this late hour. Rather than risk being seen and captured, you decide to remain hidden here in the timber yard and attempt to get a few hours sleep before dawn.

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    You take the key from your tunic pocket and read the inscription on its shank: THIS KEY IS THE PROPERTY OF THE TEHDA STABLES.

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    You take the key from your tunic pocket and read the inscription on its shank: This key is the property of the Tehda Stables.

    With luck this scrap of iron will net us two horses, you say, clasping it tightly. Karvas smiles and gets ready to move from behind the cart, but you tell him to stay here and wait for your signal. Better I should go alone, my lord, you say. It will halve the risk of being seen by the guards at the main gate. Wait here for my signal and be ready to act quickly when you see it. The Prince nods his agreement and he wishes you good luck before you go.

    Aided by your Magnakai Discipline of Invisibility, you leave the cart and scurry across the square to the unguarded stables door. When you are sure that you have not been seen, you pull back the bolts and insert the key into the lock. With a prayer to Ishir on your lips that this is the correct key, you turn it in the keyhole. Your prayer is answered: the key unlocks the door. You push open the heavy portal and hurry through it into a courtyard beyond.

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    You call upon your Magnakai Discipline of Animal Control to calm the horse as you creep towards her. Taking care to keep the mare between yourself and her rider, in case he should happen to glance in your direction, you quickly unbuckle the saddlebag and peer inside. It contains mostly personal itemsa Blanket, enough food for 2 Meals, a Dagger, and a Tinderbox.

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    You are about to return to your hiding place when you chance upon a concealed pocket at the base of the bag. It contains an iron key that bears an inscription on its shank, and your Magnakai Pathsmanship skills enable you to decipher its meaning: THIS KEY IS THE PROPERTY OF THE TEHDA STABLES. You slip the key into your pocket and rebuckle the saddlebag before you take cover.

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    You are about to return to your hiding place when you chance upon a concealed pocket at the base of the bag. It contains an iron key that bears an inscription on its shank, and your Magnakai Pathsmanship skills enable you to decipher its meaning: This key is the property of the Tehda Stables. You slip the key into your pocket and rebuckle the saddlebag before you take cover.

    (Remember to record this Tehda Key on your Action Chart. It is a Special Item which you carry in the pocket of your tunic. You need not discard another item in its favour if you are already carrying the maximum number of Special Items permissible.)

    Once you are hidden from view, you watch as the horseman stops to stare out across endless rows of tree stumps. Slowly he shakes his head, and then he looks up at the darkening sky and you hear him curse the failing light. In the distance, one of his comrades shouts his name and beckons him to rejoin the wagons. Begrudgingly he acknowledges the call. He slams his sabre back into its steel scabbard and returns to his horse. Patiently you watch him climb into the saddle and ride away before you rise from your hiding place and call for Prince Karvas to show himself.

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    You take it in turns to keep watch throughout the night in case a pursuit party is sent from Cavalia to track you down. Fortunately, the night passes peacefully and you leave the wood shortly before dawn. As the sun crests the eastern horizon, you see a signpost at the roadside which says: VAREDO150 miles.

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    You take it in turns to keep watch throughout the night in case a pursuit party is sent from Cavalia to track you down. Fortunately, the night passes peacefully and you leave the wood shortly before dawn. As the sun crests the eastern horizon, you see a signpost at the roadside which says: Varedo150 miles.

    Normally one could expect to reach Varedo in three days by horse, says Karvas, but if we use every hour of daylight and rest our mounts briefly, every hour, we may be able to cover the distance in half the time. Mindful that you now have only nine days in which to reach Seroa to be in time for the crowning, and wary that a pursuit party could still be sent from Cavalia to hunt you down, you spend this day in the saddle riding as far and as fast as your horses are able. By nightfall, you have made excellent progress and you are confident that the threat from Cavalia is no more. You camp for the night beside a stream and, before you sleep, you use your Magnakai skills to assist the horses to recover fully from their hard days ride.

    The following day is spent crossing the seemingly endless Lucien Plain, the monotony of the grasslands broken only occasionally by an isolated hamlet or farmstead. You have no need to approach these settlements for the rich prairie yields enough game to keep you well fed while you are on the move. It also provides surplus food equivalent to 2 Meals (adjust your Action Chart accordingly if you wish to keep one or both of these Meals).

    During the afternoon, you see a group of riders approaching from the north, from out of the wooded foothills of the Ioma Range. You magnify your vision and your stomach churns when you see that they are carrying spears which display the black eagles-head pennant of Baron Sadanzo. You focus your Kai senses upon this distant group of riders and detect that they are not soldiers. They are a hunting party seeking wild deer. The open plain offers no place to hide from these approaching horsemen and the lack of cover makes you feel especially vulnerable. You remain stationary for a few minutes while you watch them draw closer. You are hoping that they are too preoccupied with their hunt to pay you any attention. However, you soon realize that they have lost the trail of their wild deer and have decided to track new quarryyou and Karvas.

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    Word of the shrines destruction spreads quickly. Within minutes of your escape, the sleeping city is rudely awakened by a cacophony of alarm bells and discordant horns. Search parties are mustered and soon the major avenues of the city echo to a new soundthe tramp of vengeful patrols dispatched to track you down. By using your advanced Kai tracking skills and taking care to avoid the main thoroughfares, at length you are able to reach the stables that you saw from the top of the temple bell-tower. From the cover of a cart parked across a square from its double-gated entrance, you observe the building and the passing patrols and wait patiently for the commotion to die down.

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    The stables are surrounded by a high brick wall topped by a row of foot-long spikes embedded in mortar. A sign hangs above the main entrance that reads TEHDA STABLES. The tolling bells have roused the stable guards and this entrance is now heavily guarded, as are three smaller entrances set at intervals along its perimeter wall. Only one door has no armed guard posted before it, but when you magnify your vision you quickly see why this is so. It is secured by three steel bolts and a heavy iron lock.

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    The stables are surrounded by a high brick wall topped by a row of foot-long spikes embedded in mortar. A sign hangs above the main entrance that reads Tehda Stables. The tolling bells have roused the stable guards and this entrance is now heavily guarded, as are three smaller entrances set at intervals along its perimeter wall. Only one door has no armed guard posted before it, but when you magnify your vision you quickly see why this is so. It is secured by three steel bolts and a heavy iron lock.

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    (128) Replaced add 5 to with add 5 points to. Replaced combat skill with COMBAT SKILL. Replaced Cavalian bandits with Cavalian Bandits. Replaced six (or more) rounds with six rounds or more.

    (130) Replaced exclaims, he with exclaims. He. Added a paragraph break between Crown Prince Karvas! and Instantly the. Replaced weapons with Weapons. Replaced each occurrence of prince with Prince. Replaced princes with Princes.

    (131) Replaced confiscated weapons with confiscated Weapons. Replaced each occurrence of prince with Prince. Replaced each occurrence of Lodamoss with Lodamos.

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    (132) Replaced Kai weapon with Kai Weapon. Replaced two-storeyed with two-storey. Replaced pathsmanship with Pathsmanship. Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced 44 Ren with 30 Ren. Replaced arm band with armband. Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced a patrol of armed guards who are marching with a patrol of armed guards which is marching. Replaced darkness, and your innate Kai camouflage skills have with darkness and your innate Kai camouflage skills have.

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    (132) Replaced Kai weapon with Kai Weapon. Replaced two-storeyed with two-storey. Replaced pathsmanship with Pathsmanship. Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced 44 Ren with 30 Ren. Replaced arm band with armband. Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced a patrol of armed guards who are marching with a patrol of armed guards which is marching. Replaced darkness, and your innate Kai camouflage skills have with darkness and your innate Kai camouflage skills have. Replaced THIS KEY IS THE PROPERTY OF THE TEHDA STABLES with This key is the property of the Tehda Stables.

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    (134) Replaced Kai weapon with Kai Weapon.

    (135) Replaced bow shot with bowshot. Replaced each occurrence of arrow with Arrow.

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    (136) Replaced TEHDA STABLES with THIS KEY IS THE PROPERTY OF THE TEHDA STABLES in line with Section 132. Replaced drawbolts with bolts. Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced stables door with stables door.

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    (136) Replaced TEHDA STABLES with This key is the property of the Tehda Stables in line with Section 132. Replaced drawbolts with bolts. Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced stables door with stables door.

    (137) Replaced lancers horses with lancers horses. Replaced nerves break with nerve breaks.

    (139) Added the illustration caption You see a herd of migrating fanji. that was missing from the first printing of the book. Replaced horizon, then with horizon; then.

    (140) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced prince with Prince.

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    (142) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced Karvass with Karvas. Replaced Cavalians, here with Cavalians here.

    (143) Replaced Kai weapon with Kai Weapon. Replaced prince with Prince.

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    (145) Replaced pathsmanship with Pathsmanship. Replaced head, then with head, and then. Replaced THIS KEY IS THE PROPERTY OF THE TEHDA STABLES with This key is the property of the Tehda Stables.

    (147) Replaced Dammerdon mountains with Dammerdon Mountains.

    (148) Replaced despatched with dispatched. Replaced king of Siyen with King of Siyen. Replaced city and with city, and. Added the illustration caption Arise, Sir Kai, for I proclaim that you are now a Knight of Siyen. that was missing from the first printing of the book. Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced princes with Princes. Replaced their cheer are with their cheers are. Replaced Karvass with Karvas.

    (149) Replaced shockwave with shock wave. Replaced mainmastlose with mainmast: lose as elsewhere in this adventure.

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    (167) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced belt pouch with Belt Pouch. Replaced princes with Princes.

    (169) Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and.

    (170) Replaced each occurrence of prince with Prince. Replaced princes with Princes.

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    (171) Replaced you ee a with you see a. Replaced white eagles-head pennant with black eagles-head pennant.

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    (171) Replaced you ee a with you see a. Replaced white eagles-head pennant with black eagles-head pennant. Replaced VAREDO150 miles with Varedo150 miles.

    (172) Replaced prince with Prince.

    (173) Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense. Replaced prince with Prince. Replaced princes with Princes.

    (174) Replaced double-backed with doubled-back. Replaced Lucien hills with Lucien Hills. Replaced Huntmstery you with Huntmastery, you.

    (177) Replaced 30 metres with 100 feet. Replaced 5 metres with 15 feet. Added the illustration caption Prince Karvas is hanging by one hand to an outcrop of jagged rock. that was missing from the first printing of the book. Replaced princes with Princes. Replaced Kai-alchemy, and with Kai-alchemy and. Replaced Rope, and with Rope and.

    (178) Replaced combat skill with COMBAT SKILL. Replaced compliment with complement. Replaced scrolls and with scrolls, and. Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

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    (180) Replaced drawbolts with bolts. Replaced 30cm-long with foot-long. Replaced TEHDA STABLES with Tehda Stables.

    (181) Replaced prince with Prince.

    (184) Replaced tunnel that give with tunnel that gives. Replaced Weaponmastery, and with Weaponmastery and.

    (185) Replaced Kai weapon with Kai Weapon. Removed which you carry in your backpack. Replaced sixth sense with Sixth Sense.

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