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<p>You raise the hood of your cloak and hurry through the open doors into the dark, cool hall. The people are kneeling in front of a pulpit where a holy man, dressed in flowing robes of black and gold, reads aloud from a gem-encrusted book. Behind him, the face of the late Zakhan, immortalized in a tapestry suspended from the roof by huge silken cords, looks down on the mourners.</p>
- <p>The congregation is wrapped in prayer, and nobody sees you enter. The ceremony soon comes to an end, and you are able to slip past Maouk<ch.apos/>s men as the mourners flood into the streets.</p>
+ <p>The congregation is rapt in prayer, and nobody sees you enter. The ceremony soon comes to an end, and you are able to slip past Maouk<ch.apos/>s men as the mourners flood into the streets.</p>
<choice idref="sect169"><link-text>Turn to 169</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>You twist the handle but the gate is locked. You are about to turn and run when suddenly the gate flies open: a man stands in the doorway. <quote><!--ERRTAG-RE-111078-->Quickly, Northlander. I<!--/ERRTAG-RE-111078--> will hide you!</quote> The man steps back to allow you to enter.</p>
<choice idref="sect24">If you wish to enter, <link-text>turn to 24</link-text>.</choice>
- <choice idref="sect169">If you wish to refuse in climb the path towards the archway, <link-text>turn to 169</link-text>.</choice>
+ <choice idref="sect169">If you wish to refuse and climb the path towards the archway, <link-text>turn to 169</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect117">If you wish to enter the alley, <link-text>turn to 117</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>The <cite>Book of the Magnakai</cite> is one of the oldest legends of Sommerlund. With the wisdom of the Magnakai, Sun Eagle, the first Kai Grand Master, instilled the disciplines into the warriors of the House of Ulnar, the bloodline of your king, that were to save your land from devastation at the hands of the Darklords. The <cite>Book of the Magnakai</cite> was lost hundreds of years ago, but its wisdom was kept alive, handed down through generations of Sommlending warriors so that they could share the strength to resist their eternal enemies, the Darklords of Helgedad.</p>
<p>If the Darklords discover and destroy the <cite>Book of the Magnakai</cite>, the secrets will be lost forever, and when you die, the Kai will become extinct. However, if you discover the <cite>Book of the Magnakai</cite> first and deny the Darklords their prize, all the wisdom of the Magnakai will be revealed to you. Through its wisdom you will become strong, strong enough to reach the ultimate achievement for a Sommlending warrior<ch.emdash/>to become a Kai Grand Master.</p>
<p>However, the peril and the glory of the quest that lies ahead is distracting you from more immediate danger. To discover this danger and to begin the quest for the <cite>Book of the Magnakai</cite>, turn to Part Two of <cite>Shadow on the Sand</cite>.</p>
- <choice idref="sect201"><link-text>Begin your adventure at 201.</link-text></choice>
+ <choice idref="sect201"><link-text>Begin your adventure at 201</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>oil</quote> with <quote>Oil</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>joint and</quote> with <quote>joint, and</quote>, <quote>water, and</quote> with <quote>water and</quote>, and <quote>bar and</quote> with <quote>bar, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>wall, and</quote> with <quote>wall and</quote>, <quote>action, when</quote> with <quote>action when (awkward)</quote>, and <quote>narrow and</quote> with <quote>narrow, and</quote>. Moved the Guardian choice into the first position.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>prayer and</quote> with <quote>prayer, and</quote> and <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>prayer and</quote> with <quote>prayer, and</quote> and <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wrapped in</quote> with <quote>rapt in</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>corroded but</quote> with <quote>corroded, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>disgusting and</quote> with <quote>disgusting, and</quote>, <quote>six, silver-handled</quote> with <quote>six silver-handled</quote>, and <quote>tunic, and</quote> with <quote>tunic and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-69812-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>emeralds and pearls</quote> with <quote>emeralds, and pearls</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-69812-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>Half-way</quote> with <quote>Halfway</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-71865-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-71865-ITEM--></p>
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