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<publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
- <date class="publication"><year>2007</year><month>7</month><day>23</day></date>
+ <date class="publication"><year>2008</year><month>1</month><day>25</day></date>
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<p>You are the warrior, Lone Wolf, last of the Kai Masters of Sommerlund and sole survivor of the massacre that destroyed your kinsmen during a bitter war with your age-old enemies the Darklords of Helgedad. You have given your solemn pledge to restore the Kai to their former glory, ensuring the security of your land in the years to come.</p>
<p>Diligent study of the tome called <cite>The Book of the Magnakai</cite> has enabled you to master only three of the ten Magnakai Disciplines. Now, you must fulfil your pledge by completing the quest first undertaken by <cite>Sun Eagle</cite> over one thousand years ago.</p>
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<p>To your horror, you discover that the quiver is completely empty. Your <!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-->Arrows<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690--> have fallen out and lie buried in the nest of vegetation upon which you awoke (erase these <!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-->Arrows<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690--> from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>).</p>
- <p>With a cry of frustration, you discard your <!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-->Bow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899--> and unsheathe a hand weapon as the snake draws itself back in preparation to strike.</p>
+ <p>With a cry of frustration, you <!--ERRTAG-RE-56969-->shoulder your<!--/ERRTAG-RE-56969--> <!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-->Bow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899--> and unsheathe a hand weapon as the snake draws itself back in preparation to strike.</p>
<choice idref="sect301"><link-text>Turn to 301</link-text>.</choice>
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<meta><title>73</title></meta>
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- <p>Taking hold of a crate, you pull open the lid as easily as if you were tearing the peel from an overripe orange. The damp timber crumbles in your hands, falling on the tarnished pewter plates lying within. Your boot staves in the side of another crate, and you hear the dull crunch of shattered porcelain. This one is full of old Kakush vases, part of a cargo from a trading barge that sank on the reef over a decade ago.</p>
+ <p>Taking hold of a crate, you pull open the lid as easily as if you were tearing the peel from an overripe orange. The damp timber crumbles in your hands, falling on the tarnished pewter plates lying within. Your boot staves in the side of another crate, and you hear the dull crunch of shattered porcelain. This one is full of old <!--ERRTAG-RE-121131-->Kakushi<!--/ERRTAG-RE-121131--> vases, part of a cargo from a trading barge that sank on the reef over a decade ago.</p>
<p>You are about to leave when something unusual catches your eye: the tip of a cylindrical map case is jutting out from behind an empty cask. Unlike everything else in this foul room, it is both dry and quite new. Flipping the brass catch, you tip the contents into your palm: a small piece of parchment and a Diamond (you may keep this Special Item in your pocket). A snake with one large eye is drawn in red ink on the parchment. It is coiled around the number <strong>123</strong>. Make a note of this number in the margin of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a><ch.emdash/>it may be of use to you later in your adventure.</p>
<p>Satisfied that there is nothing else of use or interest in the room, you leave and press on towards the stairs.</p>
<choice idref="sect11"><link-text>Turn to 11</link-text>.</choice>
<meta><title>199</title></meta>
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- <p>You recognize the dead man<ch.apos/>s hauberk as that of a Kakush mercenary: the ten-pointed star of Nikesa, the symbol of that country<ch.apos/>s capital city, adorns each of the rusty buckles that fasten his chainmail armour. In a leather pouch hanging from his belt you discover 6 Gold Crowns, and inside the tattered remains of <!--ERRTAG-RE-245021-->his backpack<!--/ERRTAG-RE-245021-->, there is a Rope and a hooded Red Robe.</p>
+ <p>You recognize the dead man<ch.apos/>s hauberk as that of a <!--ERRTAG-RE-244788-->Kakushi<!--/ERRTAG-RE-244788--> mercenary: the ten-pointed star of Nikesa, the symbol of that country<ch.apos/>s capital city, adorns each of the rusty buckles that fasten his chainmail armour. In a leather pouch hanging from his belt you discover 6 Gold Crowns, and inside the tattered remains of <!--ERRTAG-RE-245021-->his backpack<!--/ERRTAG-RE-245021-->, there is a Rope and a hooded Red Robe.</p>
<p>A close examination of the weapons shows them both to be quite useless: the bone-handled dagger crumbles to dust when you try to dislodge it from the corpse<ch.apos/>s skull, and the blade of the sword is dull and eaten by rust.</p>
<choice idref="sect318">If you now wish to continue along the tunnel, <link-text>turn to 318</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect93">If you decide to climb the stairs and investigate the open trap door, <link-text>turn to 93</link-text>.</choice>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
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<p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>stormclouds</quote> with <quote>storm clouds</quote>, <quote>transluscent</quote> with <quote>translucent</quote>, <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>, <quote>Canal, and</quote> with <quote>Canal and</quote>, <quote>connversation and</quote> with <quote>conversation, and</quote>, <quote>powerful and</quote> with <quote>powerful, and</quote>, <quote>landing and, within</quote> with <quote>landing, and within</quote>, <quote>visible covering</quote> with <quote>visible, covering</quote>, <quote>shimmering green</quote> with <quote>shimmering, green</quote> and <quote>goodbyes and</quote> with <quote>goodbyes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>Carcos range</quote> with <quote>Carcos Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of Gorgoron</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Gorgoron</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>, <quote>tap it and</quote> with <quote>tap it, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>persistance</quote> with <quote>persistence</quote> and <quote>to bursting</quote> with <quote>to the bursting</quote>.</p>
-<p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--></p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-56969-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>discard your</quote> with <quote>shoulder your</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-56969-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>view and, for</quote> with <quote>view, and for</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-61381-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>black, iron portcullis</quote> with <quote>black iron portcullis</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-61381-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote> and <quote>Lipo</quote> with <quote>Lio</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-63215-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>its entrance is partially</quote> with <quote>its entrance partially</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-63215-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect70">70</a>) Replaced <quote>beach turn</quote> with <quote>beach, turn</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect71">71</a>) Replaced <quote>ceiling and</quote> with <quote>ceiling, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect72">72</a>) Replaced <quote>tunic but</quote> with <quote>tunic, but</quote>. Also deleted the <quote>(lose 2 <typ class="attributes">ENDURANCE</typ> points)</quote> since Nexus is supposed to prevent or reduce <typ class="attributes">ENDURANCE</typ> loss<ch.emdash/>not induce it. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect73">73</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-121131-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Kakush</quote> with <quote>Kakushi</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-121131-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect74">74</a>) Replaced <quote>Kazan-Oud, they</quote> with <quote>Kazan-Oud; they</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect75">75</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-119301-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-119301-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect76">76</a>) Replaced <quote>dagger and</quote> with <quote>dagger, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect196">196</a>) Replaced <quote>lake and</quote> with <quote>lake, and</quote> and <quote>weapon, as</quote> with <quote>weapon as</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-236386-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-236386-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RA-236718-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-236718-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect197">197</a>) Replaced <quote>helmet, and</quote> with <quote>helmet and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RA-237280-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-237280-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect198">198</a>) Replaced <quote>more you</quote> with <quote>more, you</quote>. Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Replaced <quote>chain-mail</quote> with <quote>chainmail</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-245021-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>his Backpack</quote> with <quote>his backpack</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-245021-ITEM--></p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect199">199</a>) Replaced <quote>chain-mail</quote> with <quote>chainmail</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-245021-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>his Backpack</quote> with <quote>his backpack</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-245021-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-244788-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Kakush</quote> with <quote>Kakushi</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-244788-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect200">200</a>) Replaced <quote>crumbling and</quote> with <quote>crumbling, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect201">201</a>) Replaced <quote>wall but</quote> with <quote>wall, but</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect202">202</a>) Replaced <quote>crow and</quote> with <quote>crow, and</quote>.</p>
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