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            <p>During your adventure there will be opportunities to use a Bow and Arrow. If you equip yourself with this weapon, and you possess at least one Arrow, you may use it when the text of a particular section allows you to do so. The Bow is a useful weapon, for it enables you to hit an enemy at a distance. However, a Bow cannot be used in hand-to-hand combat; therefore it is strongly recommended that you also equip yourself with a close combat weapon, such as a sword or axe.</p>
            <p>In order to use a Bow you must possess a Quiver and at least one Arrow. Each time the Bow is used, erase an Arrow from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. A Bow cannot, of course, be used if you exhaust your supply of Arrows, but the opportunity may arise during your adventure for you to replenish your stock of Arrows.</p>
-           <p>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</p>
+           <p>If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>, when using the Bow.</p>
           </dd>
          <dt>Backpack Items</dt>
           <dd><p>These must be stored in your Backpack. Because space is limited, you may keep a maximum of ten articles, including Meals, in your Backpack at any one time. You may only carry one Backpack at a time. During your travels you will discover various useful items which you may decide to keep. You may exchange or discard them at any point when you are not involved in combat.</p></dd>
      <data>
       <p>There will be occasions during your adventure when you have to fight an enemy. The enemy<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points are given in the text. Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s aim in the combat is to kill the enemy by reducing his <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to zero while losing as few <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points as possible himself.</p>
       <p>At the start of a combat, enter Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s and the enemy<ch.apos/>s <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points in the appropriate boxes on the Combat Record section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. The sequence for combat is as follows:</p>
-      <ol class="paragraphed"> 
+      <ol class="paragraphed">
        <li><p>Add any extra points gained through your Grand Master Disciplines and Special Items to your current <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> total.</p></li>
        <li>
         <p>Subtract the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> of your enemy from this total. The result is your Combat Ratio. Enter it on the <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>.</p>
      <meta><title>223</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <choice idref="sect127">If you have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian, or higher, <link-text>turn to 127</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect127">If you have reached the rank of Kai Grand Guardian or higher, <link-text>turn to 127</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect204">If you have yet to reach this level of Kai Grand Mastership, <link-text>turn to 204</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
 
       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Grand Master Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Magi-Magic</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic</quote>, <quote>gods</quote> with <quote>Gods</quote>, and <quote>listed overleaf</quote> with <quote>listed below</quote>. Replaced <quote><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> with <quote><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> is reduced to 8 points or less</quote> as clarified in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24</cite>. Replaced <quote>battle magic</quote> with <quote>battle-magic</quote>. Replaced <quote>venoms and</quote> with <quote>venoms, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>artifacts</quote> with <quote>artefacts</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>fortresses increases</quote> with <quote>fortresses increase</quote>. Replaced <quote>body, increases</quote> with <quote>body, increase</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-29109-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Grand Master weapons</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery weapons</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-29109-ITEM--> Added <quote>These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as <spell>Shield</spell>, <spell>Power Word</spell>, and <spell>Invisible Fist</spell>.</quote> as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added <quote>These spells include <spell>Lightning Hand</spell>, <spell>Levitation</spell>, and <spell>Mind Charm</spell>.</quote> as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20.</p>
 
-      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>, <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>, five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>, and eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>safe-keeping</quote> with <quote>safekeeping</quote>, <quote>(eg,</quote> with <quote>(e.g.</quote>, five occurrences of <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>, two occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>, and eight occurrences of <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Inserted the explanation of how to use Gold Crowns. Removed <quote> (see the inside front cover of this book)</quote>. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced <quote>quiver</quote> with <quote>Quiver</quote>. Replaced <quote>combat, therefore</quote> with <quote>combat; therefore</quote>. Replaced each occurrence of <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>Grand Waponmastery with a Bow</quote> with <quote>Grand Weaponmastery with Bow</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of this book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf<ch.apos/>s initial <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> to 27 and corrected the Kai Surge bonus to +8 <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Replaced <quote>reduced to zero</quote> with <quote>reduced to zero or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>points reduced</quote> with <quote>points possibly reduced</quote>. Replaced <quote>at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.</quote> with <quote>at which point that combatant is declared dead.</quote>.</p>
 
       <p>(<a idref="sect123">123</a>) Replaced <quote>footsteps, then</quote> with <quote>footsteps; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect125">125</a>) Replaced <quote>gates, then</quote> with <quote>gates; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>slayed</quote> with <quote>slew</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect126">126</a>) Replaced <quote>Its ends</quote> with <quote>It ends</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>response, then</quote> with <quote>response; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nyras Timberwolves</quote> with <quote>Nyras timber wolves</quote></p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect129">129</a>) Replaced <quote>response, then</quote> with <quote>response; then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Nyras Timberwolves</quote> with <quote>Nyras timber wolves</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>curing</quote> with <quote>Curing</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect134">134</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-shield</quote> with <quote>Kai-screen</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>) Replaced <quote>much-needed</quote> with <quote>much needed</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>needs, then</quote> with <quote>needs; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>mindforce</quote> with <quote>Mindforce</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect222">222</a>) Replaced <quote>halt, then</quote> with <quote>halt; then</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote> and <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect223">223</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote> and <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Grand Guardian, or higher</quote> with <quote>Kai Grand Guardian or higher</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect225">225</a>) Replaced <quote>still and</quote> with <quote>still, and</quote>, <quote>upon an upright</quote> with <quote>up onto</quote> and <quote>yet, as</quote> with <quote>yet as</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect226">226</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow but, fortunately</quote> with <quote>arrow, but fortunately</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect227">227</a>) Replaced <quote>Tozaz forest</quote> with <quote>Tozaz Forest</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>it antlered</quote> with <quote>its antlered</quote>. Replaced <quote>through forest</quote> with <quote>through the forest</quote>. Replaced <quote>tree-line, then</quote> with <quote>tree-line; then</quote>.</p>