Fixed a few errata:

[project-aon.git] / 17tdoi.xml

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       <meta><title>132</title></meta>
 
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-       <p>You hurtle through the smoke towards the harbour wall, but unfortunately you have mistimed your leap and you miss the quayside by just a few feet. You glance off the wall and tumble head first into the sea: lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>You hurtle through the smoke towards the harbour wall, but unfortunately you have mistimed your leap and you miss the quayside by just a few feet. You glance off the wall and tumble head-first into the sea: lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
        <p>The frigid water is shockingly cold, but at least your Magnakai Discipline of Nexus protects you from its numbing chill and you are able to surface quickly. Burning chunks of timber and sailcloth rain down all around as you strike out towards a flight of stone steps that rise out of the sea to the top of the quay. However, upon reaching the steps you are met by a dozen skeletal warriors who are determined to slay you before you can haul yourself out of the icy water.</p>
-       <combat><enemy><!--ERRTAG-RE-210597-->Ixian Undead<!--/ERRTAG-RE-210597--></enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">41</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">46</enemy-attribute></combat>
+       <combat><enemy>Ixian Undead</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">41</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">46</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>These beings are immune to all forms of psychic attack, except Kai-surge and Kai-blast. Also, because you are still in the icy water, you must reduce your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> by 5 for the duration of this combat.</p>
        <choice idref="sect109">If you win this fight, <link-text>turn to 109</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5792,7 +5792,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect128">128</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-206415-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>place it into your belt</quote> with <quote>stow it in your belt</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-206415-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-206849-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>in Magnamund</quote> with <quote>on Magnamund</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-206849-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect130">130</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-210163-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Mindblast and Kai-surge</quote> with <quote>Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-210163-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect131">131</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-208843-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-208843-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-210597-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-210597-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect132">132</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote> and <quote>Ixian undead</quote> with <quote>Ixian Undead</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect133">133</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-209083-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/><spell>Breathe Water</spell></quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Breathe Water</spell></quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-209083-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>sea water</quote> with <quote>seawater</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect135">135</a>)Replaced <quote>tip; the</quote> with <quote>tip<ch.emdash/>the</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect136">136</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-212449-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell<ch.emdash/>Levitation</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell <spell>Levitation</spell></quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-212449-ITEM--></p>