Final (I mean it this time) changes prior to republication
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+Revision 1.13  2007/05/10 23:24:50  jonathan.blake
+Final (I mean it this time) changes prior to republication
+
+Revision 1.12  2007/05/07 22:53:43  jonathan.blake
+special thanks and fixing illustration dimensions
+
+Revision 1.11  2007/02/02 20:13:38  jonathan.blake
+Fixing a few more br elements
+
 Revision 1.10  2007/02/02 20:02:19  jonathan.blake
 Corrections for all pending errata, further updates to latest DTD
 
@@ -101,7 +110,7 @@ To do:
    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
  </creator>
  <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
- <date class="publication"><year>2007</year><month>2</month><day>2</day></date>
+ <date class="publication"><year>2007</year><month>5</month><day>10</day></date>
  <description class="blurb">
   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Last of the Kai Lords. Bitter war rages through your homeland as the evil Darklords of the west lay siege to the capital. The King has sent you on a desperate journey to retrieve the only power in Magnamund that can save your people: the Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Ahead of you lie terrible dangers<ch.emdash/>ferocious sea-storms, the tunnel of Tarnalin, and the ghostly death-hulks of Vonotar the Traitor. But only you can save your land from the devestation of the Darklords.</p>
  </description>
@@ -168,15 +177,36 @@ To do:
        <dt>Transcription</dt>
         <dd>Jason Gaerke</dd>
        <dt>Illustration Transcription</dt>
-        <dd>Jonathan Blake<br />Paul Haskell<br/>Simon Osborne</dd>
+        <dd>
+         <line>Jonathan Blake</line>
+         <line>Paul Haskell</line>
+         <line>Simon Osborne</line>
+        </dd>
        <dt>XML</dt>
-        <dd>Jonathan Blake<br />Jeff Dougan</dd>
+        <dd>
+         <line>Jonathan Blake</line>
+         <line>Jeff Dougan</line>
+        </dd>
        <dt>Alternate Illustrations</dt>
-        <dd>JC Alvarez (action charts)<br />Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables)<br />Michael Hahn (map)</dd>
+        <dd>
+         <line>JC Alvarez (action charts)</line>
+         <line>Jonathan Blake (extramatter charts and tables)</line>
+         <line>Michael Hahn (map)</line>
+        </dd>
        <dt>Proofreading</dt>
-        <dd>Simon Osborne (Sections 1<ch.endash/>210 and 246<ch.endash/>350)<br />Tony Wrigley (Sections 211<ch.endash/>245)</dd>
+        <dd>
+         <line>Simon Osborne (Sections 1<ch.endash/>210 and 246<ch.endash/>350)</line>
+         <line>Tony Wrigley (Sections 211<ch.endash/>245)</line>
+        </dd>
        <dt>Editing</dt>
-        <dd>Mike Feldman<br />Ingo Kl<ch.ouml/>cker<br />Mark Laird<br />LeRoy McSwain<br />Simon Osborne<br />Thomas Wolmer</dd>
+        <dd>
+         <line>Mike Feldman</line>
+         <line>Ingo Kl<ch.ouml/>cker</line>
+         <line>Mark Laird</line>
+         <line>LeRoy McSwain</line>
+         <line>Simon Osborne</line>
+         <line>Thomas Wolmer</line>
+        </dd>
        <dt>Coordination</dt>
         <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
        <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
@@ -219,7 +249,7 @@ To do:
     <p>During your training as a Kai Lord you have developed fighting prowess<ch.emdash/><typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> and physical stamina<ch.emdash/><typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>. Before you set off on your adventure you need to measure how effective your training has been. To do this take a pencil and, with your eyes closed, point with the blunt end of it <!--ERRTAG-RE-10688-->onto<!--/ERRTAG-RE-10688--> the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>. If you pick 0 it counts as zero.</p>
     <p>The first number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> in this way represents your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>. Add 10 to the number you picked and write the total in the <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. (i.e. if your pencil fell on 4 in the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> you would write in a <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> Of 14.) When you fight, your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> will be pitted against that of your enemy. A high score in this section is therefore very desirable.</p>
     <p>The second number that you pick from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> represents your powers of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ>. Add 20 to this number and write the total in the <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> section of your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. (i.e. if your pencil fell on the number 6 on the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> you would have 26 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.)</p>
-    <p>If you are wounded in combat you will lose <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If at any time your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points fall to zero, you are dead and the adventure is over. Lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can be regained during the course of the adventure, but your number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can never go above the number with which you start your adventure.</p>
+    <p>If you are wounded in combat you will lose <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If at any time your <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points <!--ERRTAG-RE-12811-->fall to zero or below<!--/ERRTAG-RE-12811-->, you are dead and the adventure is over. Lost <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can be regained during the course of the adventure, but your number of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points can never go above the number with which you start your adventure.</p>
     <p><strong>If you have successfully completed Book 1 of the Lone Wolf series</strong>, you will already have your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ>, <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points and <a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a> which you can now carry over with you to Book 2. You may also carry over any Weapons and Special Items that you held at the end of Book 1 and these should be entered on your new <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> (you are still limited to two weapons and eight Backpack Items).</p>
     <p>Through your experiences in <bookref series="lw" book="01fftd">Book 1</bookref> you have learned new skills, and you may choose one extra <a idref="discplnz">Kai Discipline</a> to add to your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>. Now read the <a idref="equipmnt">section on equipment</a> for Book 2 carefully.</p>
 
@@ -289,8 +319,8 @@ To do:
          <meta>
           <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
          </meta>
-         <instance class="html" src="weapons.gif" width="386" height="276" />
-         <instance class="pdf" src="weapons.pdf" width="386" height="276" />
+         <instance class="html" src="weapons.gif" width="386" height="278" />
+         <instance class="pdf" src="weapons.pdf" width="386" height="278" />
          <instance class="text" src="none" width="none" height="none">
           <ul class="unbulleted">
            <li>0 = Dagger</li>
@@ -370,8 +400,8 @@ To do:
          <meta>
           <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
          </meta>
-         <instance class="html" src="food.gif" width="190" height="52" />
-         <instance class="pdf" src="food.pdf" width="190" height="52" />
+         <instance class="html" src="food.gif" width="386" height="150" />
+         <instance class="pdf" src="food.pdf" width="386" height="150" />
         </illustration>
        </li>
        <li>
@@ -380,8 +410,8 @@ To do:
          <meta>
           <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
          </meta>
-         <instance class="html" src="mail.gif" width="190" height="154" />
-         <instance class="pdf" src="mail.pdf" width="190" height="154" />
+         <instance class="html" src="mail.gif" width="386" height="150" />
+         <instance class="pdf" src="mail.pdf" width="386" height="150" />
         </illustration>
        </li>
        <li><p>Mace (Weapons)</p></li>
@@ -391,8 +421,8 @@ To do:
          <meta>
           <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
          </meta>
-         <instance class="html" src="potion.gif" width="190" height="73" />
-         <instance class="pdf" src="potion.pdf" width="190" height="73" />
+         <instance class="html" src="potion.gif" width="386" height="150" />
+         <instance class="pdf" src="potion.pdf" width="386" height="150" />
         </illustration>
        </li>
        <li><p>Quarterstaff (Weapons)</p></li>
@@ -403,8 +433,8 @@ To do:
          <meta>
           <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
          </meta>
-         <instance class="html" src="shield.gif" width="158" height="85" />
-         <instance class="pdf" src="shield.pdf" width="158" height="85" />
+         <instance class="html" src="shield.gif" width="386" height="150" />
+         <instance class="pdf" src="shield.pdf" width="386" height="150" />
         </illustration>
        </li>
        <li><p>Broadsword (Weapons)</p></li>
@@ -691,7 +721,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The King<ch.apos/>s Tower, a magnificent<br />structure of glass and stone</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The King<ch.apos/>s Tower, a magnificent</line>
+         <line>structure of glass and stone</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill1.gif" width="386" height="690" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill1.pdf" width="386" height="690" />
@@ -906,7 +939,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>Twisted and disfigured though he is,<br />you recognize Captain Kelman</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>Twisted and disfigured though he is,</line>
+         <line>you recognize Captain Kelman</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -1426,7 +1462,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>One of the cloaked strangers holds aloft a black staff<br />and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>One of the cloaked strangers holds aloft a black staff</line>
+         <line>and a blue flame ignites at the twisted iron tip</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill4.gif" width="386" height="655" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill4.pdf" width="386" height="655" />
@@ -1571,7 +1610,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>At that moment the true power of the<br />Sommerswerd is revealed to you</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>At that moment the true power of the</line>
+         <line>Sommerswerd is revealed to you</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill5.gif" width="386" height="689" />
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@@ -1839,7 +1881,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>Their sinister flagship swiftly sails towards you,<br />a huge ram protruding from its black prow</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>Their sinister flagship swiftly sails towards you,</line>
+         <line>a huge ram protruding from its black prow</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -2079,7 +2124,11 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The strange creature is wearing a splendid<br />jacket of patched leather and carrying<br />what appears to be a spear</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The strange creature is wearing a splendid</line>
+         <line>jacket of patched leather and carrying</line>
+         <line>what appears to be a spear</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -2268,7 +2317,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>You find yourself staring into the<br />glowing eyes of a Helghast</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>You find yourself staring into the</line>
+         <line>glowing eyes of a Helghast</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -2390,7 +2442,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The large Noodnic, wearing a brightly coloured<br />cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The large Noodnic, wearing a brightly coloured</line>
+         <line>cloak of patchwork silks, addresses you</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill9.gif" width="386" height="676" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill9.pdf" width="386" height="676" />
@@ -2682,7 +2737,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>Soldiers leap from the deck, their<br />clothes and hair in flames</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>Soldiers leap from the deck, their</line>
+         <line>clothes and hair in flames</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill10.gif" width="386" height="666" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill10.pdf" width="386" height="666" />
@@ -2814,7 +2872,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>Lord-lieutenant Rhygar demands that they<br />let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>Lord-lieutenant Rhygar demands that they</line>
+         <line>let you pass as you bear a royal dispatch</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -3131,7 +3192,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The others are all seated at a large table<br />awaiting your appearance</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The others are all seated at a large table</line>
+         <line>awaiting your appearance</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill12.gif" width="679" height="550" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill12.pdf" width="679" height="550" />
@@ -3394,7 +3458,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>Captain Kelman opens the mysterious bundle and<br />a large charred earthenware jug drops out</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>Captain Kelman opens the mysterious bundle and</line>
+         <line>a large charred earthenware jug drops out</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -3613,7 +3680,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>An attractive young woman spins a black dish<br />divided into ten sections marked 0<ch.endash/>9</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>An attractive young woman spins a black dish</line>
+         <line>divided into ten sections marked 0<ch.endash/>9</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -3763,7 +3833,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>You chat with your fellow travellers<br />and learn about their backgrounds</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>You chat with your fellow travellers</line>
+         <line>and learn about their backgrounds</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -4012,7 +4085,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>You turn to see three harbour thugs<br />advancing towards you</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>You turn to see three harbour thugs</line>
+         <line>advancing towards you</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -4217,7 +4293,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The knight is Lord Axim of Ryme, commander<br />of King Alin<ch.apos/>s personal bodyguard</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The knight is Lord Axim of Ryme, commander</line>
+         <line>of King Alin<ch.apos/>s personal bodyguard</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
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@@ -4606,7 +4685,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The innkeeper, a thin old man with only<br />one eye, is carrying a tray of hot food</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The innkeeper, a thin old man with only</line>
+         <line>one eye, is carrying a tray of hot food</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill18.gif" width="386" height="661" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill18.pdf" width="386" height="661" />
@@ -4745,7 +4827,11 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>The black-clad shape of a Drakkarim warrior<br />is advancing towards you, a large<br />broadsword raised</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>The black-clad shape of a Drakkarim warrior</line>
+         <line>is advancing towards you, a large</line>
+         <line>broadsword raised</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill19.gif" width="386" height="627" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill19.pdf" width="386" height="627" />
@@ -5056,7 +5142,10 @@ To do:
       <illustration class="float">
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
-        <description>There is a mighty roar as the power of the sun-sword<br />is unleashed in a searing white beam</description>
+        <description>
+         <line>There is a mighty roar as the power of the sun-sword</line>
+         <line>is unleashed in a searing white beam</line>
+        </description>
        </meta>
        <instance class="html" src="ill20.gif" width="705" height="555" />
        <instance class="pdf" src="ill20.pdf" width="705" height="555" />
@@ -5201,7 +5290,7 @@ To do:
      <li>Pick number from <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</li>
      <li>Turn to <a idref="crtable">Combat Results Table</a>.</li>
      <li>Find your Combat Ratio on the top of chart and cross-reference to random number you have picked. (E indicates loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to Enemy. LW indicates loss of <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points to Lone Wolf.)</li>
-     <li>Continue the combat from Stage 3 until one character is dead. This is when <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points of either character fall to 0.</li>
+     <li>Continue the combat from Stage 3 until one character is dead. This is when <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points of either character <!--ERRTAG-RE-373801-->fall to 0 or below<!--/ERRTAG-RE-373801-->.</li>
     </ol>
 
     <section class="backmatter" id="smevazn">
@@ -5600,7 +5689,7 @@ To do:
 
      <data>
       <p>(<a idref="title">Title Page</a>) Replaced <quote>seastorms</quote> with <quote>sea-storms</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced all occurrences of  <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied.</quote> Split the last paragraph into two starting with <quote>Through your experiences</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-10688-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-10688-ITEM--></p>
+      <p>(<a idref="gamerulz">The Game Rules</a>) Replaced all occurrences of  <quote>ie</quote> with <quote>i.e.</quote>. Removed <quote> that you will find in the front of this book. For further adventuring you can copy out the chart yourself or get it photocopied.</quote> Split the last paragraph into two starting with <quote>Through your experiences</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-10688-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-10688-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-12811-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>fall to zero</quote> with <quote>fall to zero or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-12811-ITEM--></p>
       <p>(<a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai Discipline section</quote> with <quote>Kai Disciplines section</quote>. Capitalized all occurrences of <quote>discipline</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a>) Removed the <quote>1=, 2=,<ch.ellips/></quote> in the <quote>How to carry your equipment</quote> section. These were obviously carried over from <bookref series="lw" book="01fftd">Flight from the Dark</bookref><ch.apos/>s random number equipment assignment, which is now obsolete.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="cmbtrulz">Rules for Combat</a>) Removed <quote> on the inside back cover of the book</quote>. Removed <quote> on the last page of the book</quote>. Replaced <quote>on the page after the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a></quote> with <quote>in the back of this book</quote>.</p>
@@ -5703,7 +5792,7 @@ To do:
       <p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-358734-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-358734-ITEM--></p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-364171-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>air, continually</quote> with <quote>air continually</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-364171-ITEM--></p>
-      <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-373801-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>fall to 0 or below</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-373801-ITEM--></p>
      </data>
     </section>
    </data>
@@ -5758,6 +5847,8 @@ To do:
      <data>
       <p>Only the first occurrence of each secondary illustration is cited.</p>
       <ul class="unbulleted">
+       <li><a idref="equipmnt">Equipment</a></li>
+       <li><a idref="discplnz">Kai Disciplines</a></li>
        <li><a idref="sect1">Section 1</a></li>
        <li><a idref="sect4">Section 4</a></li>
        <li><a idref="sect12">Section 12</a></li>