Book 2: Two more Errata fixed.

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diff --git a/02fotw.xml b/02fotw.xml
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--- a/02fotw.xml
+++ b/02fotw.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
  </creator>
  <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
- <date class="publication"><year>2007</year><month>7</month><day>22</day></date>
+ <date class="publication"><year>2007</year><month>7</month><day>25</day></date>
  <description class="blurb">
   <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Last of the Kai Lords. Bitter war rages through your homeland as the evil Darklords of the west lay siege to the capital. The King has sent you on a desperate journey to retrieve the only power in Magnamund that can save your people: the Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Ahead of you lie terrible dangers<ch.emdash/>ferocious sea-storms, the tunnel of Tarnalin, and the ghostly death-hulks of Vonotar the Traitor. But only you can save your land from the devastation of the Darklords.</p>
  </description>
@@ -2615,8 +2615,8 @@
      <meta><title>163</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p><quote>We<ch.apos/>ve a full sail and a sharp prow. There<ch.apos/>s not a warship on the northern seas that<ch.apos/>ll catch the Green Sceptre,</quote> said the captain.</p>
-      <p>He is proved right, for the pirate ship soon disappears over the horizon. <quote>Twenty-five years at sea and I<ch.apos/>ve never known the Lakuri pirates to venture this far north to raid,</quote> he said, stroking his beard thoughtfully. <quote>They must be after a valuable cargo to sail so far from their tropical islands.</quote></p>
+      <p><quote>We<ch.apos/>ve a full sail and a sharp prow. There<ch.apos/>s not a warship on the northern seas that<ch.apos/>ll catch the Green Sceptre,</quote> says the captain.</p>
+      <p>He is proved right, for the pirate ship soon disappears over the horizon. <quote>Twenty-five years at sea and I<ch.apos/>ve never known the Lakuri pirates to venture this far north to raid,</quote> he says, stroking his beard thoughtfully. <quote>They must be after a valuable cargo to sail so far from their tropical islands.</quote></p>
       <p>As the captain descends below deck to his cabin, you get an uneasy feeling that the valuable cargo may be you.</p>
       <choice idref="sect240"><link-text>Turn to 240</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
@@ -5656,6 +5656,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect150">150</a>) Replaced <quote>marshbird</quote> with <quote>marsh-bird</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect151">151</a>) Replaced <quote>succesful</quote> with <quote>successful</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect152">152</a>) Replaced <quote>warfleet</quote> with <quote>war fleet</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect163">163</a>) Replaced both occurrences of <quote>said</quote> with <quote>says</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect164">164</a>) Replaced <quote>rockface</quote> with <quote>rock-face</quote>. Moved the Sixth Sense choice into the first position.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect166">166</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-190168-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-190168-ITEM--> Added a period to the end of the illustration<ch.apos/>s caption.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect169">169</a>) Replaced <quote>gaming house</quote> with <quote>gaming-house</quote>.</p>