FW 1-4 updated to remove ambiguous 'through your lenses' and similar; to add in the...

[project-aon.git] / en / xml / 01hh.xml

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@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@
      <meta><title>34</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-      <p>The scratches that cover the walls of the trench indicate that it was excavated entirely by hand. You scan the surrounding landscape through your lenses, hoping to find some clue as to the identity of the person who dug the trench. Almost immediately you notice a group advancing towards you from the north. Slowly you increase the magnification until the figures become clear: two scrawny-looking men are leading a pack of five Alsatian hounds in your direction.</p>
+      <p>The scratches that cover the walls of the trench indicate that it was excavated entirely by hand. You scan the surrounding landscape, hoping to find some clue as to the identity of the person who dug the trench. Almost immediately you notice a group advancing towards you from the north. Slowly you increase the magnification until the figures become clear: two scrawny-looking men are leading a pack of five Alsatian hounds in your direction.</p>
       <p>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a> (0 equals zero).</p>
       <choice idref="sect232">If the number you have picked is less than or equal to your current Perception skill level, <link-text>turn to 232</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect309">If it is greater than your current Perception skill level, <link-text>turn to 309</link-text>.</choice>
@@ -5798,7 +5798,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>indian</quote> with <quote>Indian</quote>. Replaced <quote>give, then</quote> with <quote>give; then</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect31">31</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>the fight lasts</quote> with <quote>you win the fight in</quote>.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>alsatian hounds</quote> with <quote>Alsatian hounds</quote>. Replaced <quote>equal to, or less than, your</quote> with <quote>less than or equal to your</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect34">34</a>) Replaced <quote>alsatian hounds</quote> with <quote>Alsatian hounds</quote>. Replaced <quote>equal to, or less than, your</quote> with <quote>less than or equal to your</quote>. Replaced <quote>landscape through your lenses</quote> with <quote>landscape</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect36">36</a>) Replaced <quote>under way</quote> with <quote>underway</quote>. Replaced <quote>Freeway 20</quote> with <quote>Interstate 20</quote> for accuracy and consistency with later books.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect37">37</a>) Replaced <quote>Every little helps</quote> with <quote>Every little bit helps</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>indian</quote> with <quote>Indian</quote>.</p>