From 9a28f18098e0dee0f81ba212d7b9b56d5fe2ec08 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Osborne Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2016 09:43:00 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Minor fixes (Bk 18) git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2537 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- en/xml/18dotd.xml | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/xml/18dotd.xml b/en/xml/18dotd.xml index 1da30ef..c77d344 100644 --- a/en/xml/18dotd.xml +++ b/en/xml/18dotd.xml @@ -1882,7 +1882,7 @@

Using the Brotherhood Spell Mind Charm, you command the prisoner to reveal the identity of the person who sent him here to Garthen to murder you. At first you are unable to penetrate the mans mindhis memory is protected by a magical shield. Then you draw on your psychic Kai skills to boost the Mind Charm spell and suddenly you feel the mans magical shield begin to crack and disintegrate.

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The man shrieks with fear as his body is racked by convulsions. A mass of images swirls and solidify in your minds eyethey are images of a past meeting in a far-off place which you recognize to be Duadon, the capital city of Eldenora. You see a shadowy figure, sheathed in ornate chainmail, handing a bulging pouch of gold to the prisoner in a dimly lit alleyway. The figure speaks your name before melting away into the shadows.

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The man shrieks with fear as his body is racked by convulsions. A mass of images swirls and solidifies in your minds eyethey are images of a past meeting in a far-off place which you recognize to be Duadon, the capital city of Eldenora. You see a shadowy figure, sheathed in ornate chainmail, handing a bulging pouch of gold to the prisoner in a dimly lit alleyway. The figure speaks your name before melting away into the shadows.

Who is this person? you say, commanding the trembling prisoner to answer. He parts his bruised lips and tries to utter a name but no sound emerges. You sense that he is fighting to overcome the remnants of the shielding spell placed upon his mind. Moving closer, you try to make out the name he is struggling hard to whisper.

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As the last of your attackers collapses at your feet, you turn and run headlong down the steep hill track. Arrows and spears whistle past on all sides as you endeavour to outrun the remaining ambushers. By dint of luck and speed, Nathor and his troop of Court Cavalry have survived the Eldenoran ambush with little injury and no loss of life. You see them in the distance, gathered in a group on the valley floor, and you wave to them to show that you are still alive. Immediately Nathor gallops away from the troop and comes speeding up the track to your rescue. As he gets nearer he slows his horse to allow you to leap astride its rump. Once aboard, he pulls his steed about and descends once more towards the valley floor, cheered on by his anxious men.

Follow me! commands the Lord Constable as he gallops past his troop without slowing. You glance over your shoulder and see them spur their steeds forward, their faces set in expressions of grim determination. Upon entering the village, you note a number of frightened women and children who are huddled beside stone walls or lying beneath hay carts. Some are cradling the bodies of their dead menfolk who lie scattered in the fields nearby. Then you catch sight of a group of Eldenorans in the grounds of the abbey. All are laden with loot, yet even so there are some who are squabbling amongst themselves in an effort to grab an even bigger share of the booty.

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Nathor brings his steed to a halt and you both quickly dismount. As your feet touch the ground, you notice a drunken Eldenoran come lurching out of the doorway of a nearby cottage. He has a flagon of ale in one hand and a young woman, with a crying baby in the other. He sees you and, in a moment of drunken panic, he drops the flagon and unsheathes a dagger from his belt. It is clear from his actions that he intends to stab the screaming child.

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Nathor brings his steed to a halt and you both quickly dismount. As your feet touch the ground, you notice a drunken Eldenoran come lurching out of the doorway of a nearby cottage. He has a flagon of ale in one hand, and a young woman with a crying baby in the other. He sees you and, in a moment of drunken panic, he drops the flagon and unsheathes a dagger from his belt. It is clear from his actions that he intends to stab the screaming child.

If you possess Magi-magic and have reached the Kai rank of Grand Thane, turn to 82. If you possess the Grand Master Discipline of Kai-surge, turn to 225. If you possess a Bow and wish to use it, turn to 243. @@ -6051,7 +6051,7 @@

(75) Replaced say, can with say. Can.

(76) Replaced discard with shoulder. Replaced bow with Bow. Replaced arrow with Arrow.

(78) Replaced all occurrences of lavas with Lavas.

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(79) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced dimly-lit with dimly lit. Replaced A mass of images swirl with A mass of images swirls.

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(79) Replaced Brotherhood spell with Brotherhood Spell. Replaced dimly-lit with dimly lit. Replaced A mass of images swirl and solidify with A mass of images swirls and solidifies.

(80) Replaced doormouse with dormouse. Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced herd of coppery-red dragons continue their with herd of coppery-red dragons continues its.

(81) Replaced legs, With with legs. With. Replaced grasssnake with grass snake.

(82) Replaced Old Kingdom battle-spell with Old Kingdom Battle-spell.

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(279) Replaced lording with lordling.

(280) Replaced Alema trail with Alema Trail. Replaced treeline with tree-line. Replaced Lone Wolf with Lone Wolf. Replaced Ixia, or with Ixia or. Replaced Vorndarol, in with Vorndarol in.

(282) Replaced Sun-Crystal with Sun-crystal. Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced Ravens Eerie with Ravens Eyrie.

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(285) Replaced skills, (or with skills (or. Replaced bow, and with Bow and. Replaced bow, nor with Bow nor. Replaced Grand Thane, or higher with Grand Thane because that is the highest rank possible in this book. Replaced court cavalry with Court Cavalry.

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(285) Replaced skills, (or with skills (or. Replaced bow, and with Bow and. Replaced bow, nor with Bow nor. Replaced Grand Thane, or higher with Grand Thane because that is the highest rank possible in this book. Replaced court cavalry with Court Cavalry. Replaced one hand and a young woman, with with one hand, and a young woman with.

(286) Replaced mindforce with Mindforce. Replaced if he was to do so with if he were to do so.

(288) Replaced lavas with Lavas. Replaced the Gate with the Shadow Gate.

(289) Replaced Captain with captain. Replaced Deliverance, and with Deliverance and.

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