From e7349234dcb2afdb1aa2caf18005b80556867a45 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonathan Blake Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2008 00:08:47 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] a few errata git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@619 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11 --- 01hh.xml | 18 ++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/01hh.xml b/01hh.xml index 239344b..d786e0d 100644 --- a/01hh.xml +++ b/01hh.xml @@ -3510,7 +3510,7 @@

Despite your anxiety you manage to get a few hours sleep before dawn. As the sky brightens, Uncle Jonas voices his fear that the vehicles are far too exposed out on the highway, where they can easily be spotted and will be sure to attract another raid like the one you endured last night at Santo. Cutter agrees, so before you set off for Strawn he fixes a line to the back of the tanker and tows the bus into a nearby gully.

There, Uncle Jonas and the others set to work dismantling the broken steering linkage, while Mountain Goat draws a map of Strawn, showing the location of the truck depot. He hands the sketch to Cutter, and you and he check your equipment and bid farewell to the others before setting off.

Two hours later you catch sight of the fortified town. It is perched on a ridge of high ground and enjoys an unobstructed view over the surrounding land. You note its perimeter wall, constructed of rubble and old cars, and the crudely built watchtowers that command its freeway approaches. It seems to you that it would be impossible for a large group, or even a single vehicle to approach this town undetected, yet the rocky terrain that surrounds it enables you and Cutter to crawl to within a few hundred yards of the perimeter wall without being seen.

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Patiently you observe the inhabitants of Strawn while waiting for night to fall. During your long vigil you must eat a Meal (or lose 3 ENDURANCE points) and take two Drinks (or lose 6 ENDURANCE points). You identify two weak links in the defensive wall: one is an alley that services an old shopping mall; the other is a chain-link fence that surrounds a derelict amusement park at the edge of town. Cutter suggests that you enter Strawn separately in order to minimize the risk of being seen, then meet at the depot itself. He offers you first choice of approach.

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Patiently you observe the inhabitants of Strawn while waiting for night to fall. During your long vigil you must eat a Meal (or lose 3 ENDURANCE points) and take two Drinks (or lose 3 ENDURANCE points per drink missed). You identify two weak links in the defensive wall: one is an alley that services an old shopping mall; the other is a chain-link fence that surrounds a derelict amusement park at the edge of town. Cutter suggests that you enter Strawn separately in order to minimize the risk of being seen, then meet at the depot itself. He offers you first choice of approach.

If you wish to enter Strawn via the alley, turn to 103. If you decide to enter the town via the amusement park, turn to 60. @@ -3602,7 +3602,7 @@

You fire and immediately the sniper clutches his chest. He gives a loud scream and then tumbles over the parapet, landing with a thud on the sidewalk below. With grim satisfaction you stare at his body, but your gaze is distracted when a column of motorcyclesthe main body of the clanrides into view. They are now less than a mile from the bridge. Cmon you two! shouts Cutter. Its time to go.

The tanker has made it across the platform and is now parked with the other vehicles on the far side of the river. You leave the factory and run back towards the bridge. When you reach the position that Kate is defending, you say breathlessly: Set the bomb Ill stay here and cover you!

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Tensely you watch the clansmen as they gun their bikes along the freeway, and you glance repeatedly over your shoulder, praying for Kate to signal that the bomb is ready. Then the front line of bikers open fire with their machine pistols, and suddenly the air is filled with the whine and whistle of bullets. Its ready! shouts Kate, and takes off across the bridge at a run.

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Tensely you watch the clansmen as they gun their bikes along the freeway, and you glance repeatedly over your shoulder, praying for Kate to signal that the bomb is ready. Then the front line of bikers opens fire with their machine pistols, and suddenly the air is filled with the whine and whistle of bullets. Its ready! shouts Kate and takes off across the bridge at a run.

Add together your current ENDURANCE points score and your Stealth skill total. (Note: If your ENDURANCE score is low and you are heavily encumbered, it may be advisable to discard some of your Backpack Items in order to increase your Stealth skill level).

If your total is 11 or less, turn to 324. If your total is 12 or more, turn to 200. @@ -3872,7 +3872,7 @@ 251 -

An eerie silence is broken by Long Jake, who shouts out: Taint over yet, Cal. Theres more of them damn peckerwoods hidin out there somewhere! As if to prove his point, two single shots ring out, almost simultaneously, and ricochet off the storehouse wall. Watch your sides, Jake yells. Dont let em circle you.

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An eerie silence is broken by Long Jake, who shouts out, Taint over yet, Cal. Theres more of them damn peckerwoods hidin out there somewhere! As if to prove his point, two single shots ring out, almost simultaneously, and ricochet off the storehouse wall. Watch your sides, Jake yells. Dont let em circle you.

You sense someone, or something, moving among the ruined shops away to your right. They are trying to get into a position where they will have a clear shot at you. If you are to survive this ambush you had better find somewhere less exposed.

If you wish to make a dash for the store, turn to 126. If you decide to jump into your roadster and take off along the main street, turn to 142. @@ -4013,7 +4013,7 @@

Instinctively you dive away from the window, your speedy reactions saving you from being cut down by the swathe of bullets. Then you hear a man scream and abruptly the firing ceases. You chance a glance out of the window to see the sniper falling from the parapet, clutching at his chest as he crashes to the sidewalk below. With a smile you signal a thumbs-up to Kate and she returns your thanks with a wave of her rifle.

A few minutes later a column of motorcyclesthe main body of the clanrides into view. They are now less than a mile from the bridge, Cmon you two! shouts Cutter. Its time to go.

The tanker has made it across the platform and is now parked with the other vehicles on the far side of the river. You leave the factory and run back towards the bridge. When you reach the position that Kate is defending, you say breathlessly: Set the bomb Ill stay here and cover you!

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Tensely you watch the clansmen as they gun their bikes along the freeway, and you glance repeatedly over your shoulder, praying for Kate to signal that the bomb is ready. Then the front line of bikers open fire with their machine pistols, and suddenly the air is filled with the whine and whistle of bullets. Its ready! shouts Kate, and takes off across the bridge at a run.

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Tensely you watch the clansmen as they gun their bikes along the freeway, and you glance repeatedly over your shoulder, praying for Kate to signal that the bomb is ready. Then the front line of bikers opens fire with their machine pistols, and suddenly the air is filled with the whine and whistle of bullets. Its ready! shouts Kate and takes off across the bridge at a run.

Add together your current ENDURANCE points score and your stealth skill total. (NOTE: if your ENDURANCE score is low and you are heavily encumbered, it may be advisable to discard some of your Backpack Items in order to increase your Stealth skill level.)

If your total is 11 or less, turn to 324. If your total is 12 or more, turn to 200. @@ -4109,7 +4109,7 @@

What is it? you ask, curiously.

The guy you killed back there in the store, the one who wasted Long Jake, well, his name was Stinger, she replies, as if the name should mean something to you.

So, what of it? you say, quizzically.

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Well he was Mad Dog Michigans brother. When the others report what has happened to him, Mad Dogs gonna be after us for sure. The guys a psycho. Believe me, I know. Hell stop at nothing to get even.

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Well he was Mad Dog Michigans brother. When the others report what has happened to him, Mad Dogs gonna be after us for sure. The guys a psycho. Believe me; I know. Hell stop at nothing to get even.

Turn to 211. @@ -5527,21 +5527,23 @@

(216) Replaced Three rounds of 12-gauge shotgun ammunition with Three rounds of 12-gauge ammunition.

(218) Replaced Weapons list with Weapons List.

(220) Replaced and ll with andll.

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(222) Replaced gulley with gully.

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(222) Replaced gulley with gully. Replaced take two Drinks (or lose 6 ENDURANCE points) with take two Drinks (or lose 3 ENDURANCE points per drink missed).

(228) Replaced death cry with death-cry.

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(229) Replaced breathlessly:Set with breathlessly: Set . Replaced across the bridge. at a run. with across the bridge at a run.. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced motor cycles with motorcycles.

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(229) Replaced breathlessly:Set with breathlessly: Set . Replaced across the bridge. at a run. with across the bridge at a run.. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced motor cycles with motorcycles. Replaced open fire with opens fire. Replaced shouts Kate, and takes off with shouts Kate and takes off.

(233) Replaced (minimum - one round; maximum - four rounds) with (minimum: one round; maximum: four rounds)

(242) Replaced C.B. Radio with CB Radio. Replaced gulley with gully.

(246) Replaced feet first with feet-first.

(247) Replaced Kate and with Kate, and.

(248) Replaced C.B. radio with CB Radio.

(250) Replaced machine-gunner with machine gunner.

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(251) Replaced shouts out: with shouts out,.

(253) Started a new paragraph for Cutters speech.

(255) Replaced text based number puzzle with illustration.

(257) Replaced the Day with The Day.

(259) Replaced pistol with Pistol.

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(260) Replaced Cmon with Cmon and Comanche county with Comanche County. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items.

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(260) Replaced Cmon with Cmon and Comanche county with Comanche County. Replaced Backpack items with Backpack Items. Replaced open fire with opens fire. Replaced shouts Kate, and takes off with shouts Kate and takes off.

(265) Replaced camp fire with campfire.

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(267) Replaced Believe me, I know with Believe me; I know.

(269) Replaced Weapons list with Weapons List.

(270) Replaced water canteen with Water Canteen.

(279) Added ONLY to the end of the sign to properly parallel Section 334.

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