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<div class="ce"><a href="sect10.htm">10</a> #4: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect10.htm">10</a> #5: powers -> Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect11">sect11</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect11.htm">11</a> #1: Phinomel pods -> Phinomel Pods <div class="cm so">cf. Sect 34 Zakutsk Flower</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect11.htm">11</a> #2: <div class="cm so">Should you choose to carry any or all of them in your Backpack, three Phinomel Pods take up one slot (Or just one overall?)</div><div class="cm tw">Unnecessary, I think.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect12">sect12</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect12.htm">12</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect12.htm">12</a> #2: Dimension door -> Dimension Door</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect12.htm">12</a> #3: The wordings of the 1st and 3rd choices are confusing I think. The 1st sounds like you have to use Thaumaturgy if you can, but of course you'd rather use a Temeris potion and save some WP. Therefore I propose that we: 1) move the second choice to the first position, and 2) (see the next errata entry).<div class="cm jb">Moonstone, deduct -> Moonstone, you may deduct</div><div class="cm jb">Thaumaturgy, deduct -> Thaumaturgy, you may deduct</div><div class="cm tw">Keep the same choice order or not?</div></div>
<div class="re"><a href="sect12.htm">12</a> #4: If you are using -> Otherwise, you may use <div class="cm tw">This abuses the sentence structure a bit, but it works, or?</div><div class="cm jb">I think the other proposed corrections would make this unnecessary.</div><div class="cm tw">OK, rejected.</div></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect12.htm">12</a> #5: <div class="cm jb">Make the last paragraph a <choice/>.</div><div class="cm tw">Hm I have vague memories we have had this up before, long ago... should all "death sentences" be <choice> encoded?</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect12.htm">12</a> #6: Freedom guild -> Freedom Guild</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect13">sect13</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect14">sect14</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect15">sect15</a></div>
<div class="re"><a href="sect15.htm">15</a> #5: <div class="cm so">Is there a missing link option that should go here? The final link lists 3 Magical Powers you can use, but you are only given the option of two of them. If not, 'Theurgy' should be removed from the final option.</div><div class="cm tw">To reach this section, you have to possess Theurgy, so the first choice implies that you use it. We could perhaps modify the choice text to make it explicit?</div><div class="cm so">Ah, right. Would footnoting this would be best?</div><div class="cm jb">I vote for clarifying footnote.</div><div class="cm tw">OK, but... hm.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect15.htm">15</a> #6: Explain that the first choice means you use Theurgy. <div class="cm tw">I have no creative idea here. Anyone?</div><div class="cm jb">I would suggest that "wish to ask" should become "wish to use the Power of Theurgy and ask"</div><div class="cm tw">OK, this becomes an erratum.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect16">sect16</a></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect16.htm">16</a> #1: Phinomel pods -> Phinomel Pods <div class="cm so">cf. Sect 34 Zakutsk Flower; first instance only?</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect16.htm">16</a> #2: <div class="cm so">Should you choose to carry any or all of them in your Backpack, three Phinomel Pods take up one slot (Or just one overall?)</div><div class="cm tw">Unnecessary, I think.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect17">sect17</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect18">sect18</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect18.htm">18</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #2: The first choice requires you to spend 1 WP. Shall we add a footnote there, or change the choice here to include "if you have 1 WP..."?<div class="cm so">I'd opt to change the link text accordingly.</div><div class="cm jb">Let's go for changing the text for the choice.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #3: Demon Lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash <div class="cm tw">With or without comma?</div><div class="cm so">I think 'without comma', but not 100% sure ;)</div><div class="cm jb">without</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect40">sect40</a></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect40.htm">40</a> #1: <div class="cm so">Should you choose to carry any or all of them in your Backpack, three Phinomel Pods take up one slot (Or just one overall?)</div><div class="cm tw">Unnecessary, I think.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect40.htm">40</a> #2: Phinomel pods -> Phinomel Pods</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect41">sect41</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect42">sect42</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect42.htm">42</a> #1: ceatures -> creatures</div>
<div class="cf"><a href="sect47.htm">47</a> #3: The term <cite>Agarashi</cite> is not used in any other place in the <cite>Worls of Lone Wolf</cite> books, but it is used elsewhere for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned. <div class="cm tw">That footnote really sucks. Better ideas anyone?</div><div class="cm so">How about: "The term Agarashi is not found elsewhere in the World of Lone Wolf series. However, in the more recent Lone Wolf books, Dever has used the term to denote any monstrous servant of Agarash the Damned." Still not that great, though.</div><div class="cm jb">Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used in anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used elsewhere as the collective name for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.</div><div class="cm jb">I meant: Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used in other books as the collective term for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.</div><div class="cm tw">Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect48">sect48</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect49">sect49</a></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #1: empty vials -> empty Vials <div class="cm tw">I think...?</div><div class="cm so">second occurrence only needs changing, you mean?</div><div class="cm tw">Technically maybe only the second, but I think it would look very odd, so I'm for changing both.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #1: empty vials -> empty Vials <div class="cm tw">I think...?</div><div class="cm so">second occurrence only needs changing, you mean?</div><div class="cm tw">Technically maybe only the second, but I think it would look very odd, so I'm for changing both.</div><div class="cm tw">I am implementing both.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #2: a Special Item, which may -> an item on your Action Chart. It may <div class="cm tw">Argh, another of these "Special Item in your Backpack" confusionisms.</div><div class="cm so">LOL! The rules are just a mess, aren't they?</div><div class="cm jb">I say lose the bit about making it a Special Item (if this doesn't create any continuity problems).</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #3: or your Herb Pouch -> or in your Herb Pouch</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect50">sect50</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect103">sect103</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect104">sect104</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #1: crowd of demons are -> crowd of demons is</div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
+<div class="
cf"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect105">sect105</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect106">sect106</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect107">sect107</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect110">sect110</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect111">sect111</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect112">sect112</a></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect112.htm">112</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
+<div class="
cf"><a href="sect112.htm">112</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect113">sect113</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect113.htm">113</a> #1: magical Power -> Magical Power<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect114">sect114</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect139">sect139</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #1: Move illustration 8 here, and give it the new caption "Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appears within the flames of the portal."<div class="cm so">Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #2: The horde stop -> The horde stops</div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
+<div class="
cf"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect140">sect140</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect141">sect141</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect141.htm">141</a> #1: large, reptilian -> large reptilian</div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect191.htm">191</a> #2: long &ellips; -> long&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect192">sect192</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect193">sect193</a></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect193.htm">193</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
+<div class="
cf"><a href="sect193.htm">193</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect194">sect194</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect194.htm">194</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect194.htm">194</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect330">sect330</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect331">sect331</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #1: six items -> eight items</div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #2: Tamara -> Tarama <div class="cm so">as per GS1 Sect 183 et al</div></div>
+<div class="cf"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #3: <div class="cm jb">Tarama Seeds may be recorded as Special Items since they don't take up space in your Herb Pouch or Backpack. Each Tarama Seed can be used to cast exactly one spell or to use your Wizard's Staff outside of close combat (e.g. to fire a bolt of energy at a distant enemy) without using the normally required WILLPOWER points. Tarama Seeds cannot be used to maintain the effect of a spell or in place of other drains on your WILLPOWER, like mental attacks. It also seems inappropriate to use a Tarama Seed in close combat where you could then decide to expend an infinite amount of WILLPOWER to automatically win a fight. (as taken from book 1)</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #4: Phinomel pods -> Phinomel Pods <div class="cm so">cf. Sect 34 Zakutsk Flower</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect332">sect332</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect332.htm">332</a> #1: tree-tops -> treetops <div class="cm ik">as in gs02, gs03, lw11, lw15 (2x)</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect333">sect333</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect335">sect335</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect336">sect336</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect336.htm">336</a> #1: Remember that your Herb Pouch will hold up to six items may be stored in your Backpack. -> Remember that your Herb Pouch can hold up to eight items, and any other potions may be stored in your Backpack.</div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect336.htm">336</a> #2: Tamara -> Tarama <div class="cm so">as per GS1 Sect 183 et al</div></div>
+<div class="cf"><a href="sect336.htm">336</a> #3: <div class="cm jb">Tarama Seeds may be recorded as Special Items since they don't take up space in your Herb Pouch or Backpack. Each Tarama Seed can be used to cast exactly one spell or to use your Wizard's Staff outside of close combat (e.g. to fire a bolt of energy at a distant enemy) without using the normally required WILLPOWER points. Tarama Seeds cannot be used to maintain the effect of a spell or in place of other drains on your WILLPOWER, like mental attacks. It also seems inappropriate to use a Tarama Seed in close combat where you could then decide to expend an infinite amount of WILLPOWER to automatically win a fight. (as taken from book 1)</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect336.htm">336</a> #4: Phinomel pods -> Phinomel Pods <div class="cm so">cf. Sect 34 Zakutsk Flower</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect337">sect337</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #1: melée -> mêlée</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect337.htm">337</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #5: time &ellips; no -> time&ellips; no</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect354">sect354</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect355">sect355</a></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect355.htm">355</a> #1: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?<div class="cm jb">Assuming we're talking about the Alether, we can add a "for the duration of the combat".</div><div class="cm tw">Oops, that should have been for section 355</div><div class="cm jb">I always assumed that it was a permanent change. Yes, we probably need a footnote for this, but we don't have any solid evidence to back us up. Are there any other opinions on how this bonus should work?</div><div class="cm js">I second the assumption of a permanent change... that's how I always handled it, anyways.</div><div class="cm tw">What about "It appears that for every Phinomel pod that you possess and wish to throw into the Leafwater pool, you may permanently raise your COMBAT SKILL by 1 when using your Wixard's Staff. Remember to delete these Phinomel pods from your Action Chart."</div></div>
+<div class="
cf"><a href="sect355.htm">355</a> #1: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?<div class="cm jb">Assuming we're talking about the Alether, we can add a "for the duration of the combat".</div><div class="cm tw">Oops, that should have been for section 355</div><div class="cm jb">I always assumed that it was a permanent change. Yes, we probably need a footnote for this, but we don't have any solid evidence to back us up. Are there any other opinions on how this bonus should work?</div><div class="cm js">I second the assumption of a permanent change... that's how I always handled it, anyways.</div><div class="cm tw">What about "It appears that for every Phinomel pod that you possess and wish to throw into the Leafwater pool, you may permanently raise your COMBAT SKILL by 1 when using your Wixard's Staff. Remember to delete these Phinomel pods from your Action Chart."</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect356">sect356</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect356.htm">356</a> #1: not &ellips; -> not&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect357">sect357</a></div>
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