Footnote revisions for LW Books 10 and 12

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@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
        <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>The bonus to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score provided by the Magic Talisman is added to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score only once and does not prevent your score from falling to zero or below.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
       <footnote id="equipmnt-4-foot" idref="equipmnt-4">
-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
       </footnote>
      </footnotes>
 
@@ -4161,7 +4161,7 @@
        <p>The slightest contact with this monster<ch.apos/>s flesh could spell death for you. You must fight defensively. Deduct 1 point from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this combat.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Large Quoku</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">15</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">30</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>You may only fight one round of combat as the Quoku flies past.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect331">If your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score is still more than 10, <link-text>turn to 331</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect331">If your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score is still 10 or more, <link-text>turn to 331</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect32">If it is less than 10, <link-text>turn to 32</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
      </section>
@@ -5051,7 +5051,7 @@
 
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-       <creator>JC Alvarez /Jonathan Blake</creator>
+       <creator>JC Alvarez / Jonathan Blake</creator>
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@@ -5679,7 +5679,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>lifted and</quote> with <quote>lifted, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>last agonized</quote> with <quote>last, agonized</quote>. Replaced <quote>erupts and in a blinding flash both</quote> with <quote>erupts, and in a blinding flash, both</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote> onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Replaced <quote>power of Prophecy</quote> with <quote>Power of Prophecy</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect281">281</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect281">281</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>. Replaced <quote>is still more than 10</quote> with <quote>is still 10 or more</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>hand and</quote> with <quote>hand, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>breath</quote> with <quote>breathe</quote>. Replaced <quote>subsides and</quote> with <quote>subsides, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>tunnel you</quote> with <quote>tunnel, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>outnumbered and</quote> with <quote>outnumbered, and</quote>.</p>