Issues with FW Books 3&4
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        <footnote id="equipmnt-2-foot" idref="equipmnt-2"><p>The bonus to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score provided by the Magic Talisman is added to your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score only once and does not prevent your score from falling to zero or below.</p></footnote>
        <footnote id="equipmnt-3-foot" idref="equipmnt-3"><p>If you have mastered the Lesser Magick of Alchemy and therefore have a Herb Pouch, you may choose to keep potions, vials, or ingredients in either the Herb Pouch or your Backpack. All other Backpack Items must be kept in your Backpack.</p></footnote>
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-       <p>The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
+       <p>The Collector<ch.apos/>s Editions of the <cite>Lone Wolf</cite> books clarify that <quote>You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.</quote></p>
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        <p>The slightest contact with this monster<ch.apos/>s flesh could spell death for you. You must fight defensively. Deduct 1 point from your <typ class="attribute">COMBAT SKILL</typ> for the duration of this combat.</p>
        <combat><enemy>Large Quoku</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">15</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">30</enemy-attribute></combat>
        <p>You may only fight one round of combat as the Quoku flies past.</p>
-       <choice idref="sect331">If your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score is still more than 10, <link-text>turn to 331</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect331">If your <typ class="attribute">WILLPOWER</typ> score is still 10 or more, <link-text>turn to 331</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect32">If it is less than 10, <link-text>turn to 32</link-text>.</choice>
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     <meta><title>The Shadakine Empire</title></meta>
 
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        <creator>Paul Bonner</creator>
        <p>(<a idref="sect276">276</a>) Replaced <quote>lifted and</quote> with <quote>lifted, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>last agonized</quote> with <quote>last, agonized</quote>. Replaced <quote>erupts and in a blinding flash both</quote> with <quote>erupts, and in a blinding flash, both</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote> onto</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect278">278</a>) Replaced <quote>power of Prophecy</quote> with <quote>Power of Prophecy</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect280">280</a>) Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect281">281</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect281">281</a>) Replaced <quote>air, and</quote> with <quote>air and</quote>. Replaced <quote>is still more than 10</quote> with <quote>is still 10 or more</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect282">282</a>) Replaced <quote>hand and</quote> with <quote>hand, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect283">283</a>) Replaced <quote>breath</quote> with <quote>breathe</quote>. Replaced <quote>subsides and</quote> with <quote>subsides, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect284">284</a>) Replaced <quote>tunnel you</quote> with <quote>tunnel, you</quote>. Replaced <quote>outnumbered and</quote> with <quote>outnumbered, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect347">347</a>) Replaced <quote>light, which</quote> with <quote>light which</quote>. Replaced <quote>light, and</quote> with <quote>light and</quote>. Replaced <quote>grow</quote> with <quote>draw</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>agility, and flushing</quote> with <quote>agility, flushing</quote>. Replaced <quote>unceremoniously, outside</quote> with <quote>unceremoniously outside</quote>. Replaced <quote>things I think,</quote> with <quote>things, I think,</quote>. Replaced <quote>Tribe has</quote> with <quote>Tribe, has</quote>. Replaced <quote>bells and his</quote> with <quote>bells, and his</quote>. Replaced <quote>here and you</quote> with <quote>here, and you</quote>. Replaced <quote>teeth and</quote> with <quote>teeth, and</quote>. Replaced <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>riddle of the Shianti<ch.lsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote> with <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>riddle of the Shianti<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>. Replaced <quote>rhyme it</quote> with <quote>rhyme, it</quote>. Replaced <quote>king agrees</quote> with <quote>king, agrees</quote>. Replaced <quote>nursey</quote> with <quote>nursery</quote>. Replaced <quote>series.</quote> with <quote>series:</quote> and added the name of the next book. Replaced <quote>the Way of the Shianti</quote> with <quote>The Way of the Shianti</quote>. Added a period to the end of each of the illustration<ch.apos/>s captions.</p>
 
+       <p>(<a idref="map">Map</a>) Added label <quote>Dagorlan</quote> to the nameless village in harmony with recent maps of Magnamund.</p> 
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Added a fourth step <quote>Pick a number from the <a idref="random">Random Number Table</a>.</quote> in the first step list. Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the <!--a idref="crtable"-->Combat</quote>.</p>
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