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-<!-- Pending Changes:
-Frontmatter:
-(ne) 17tdoi title: blurb missing [jsd: Need blurb for title page]
-(ne) 17tdoi dedicate: dedication missing [jsd: need original dedication
-& blurb]
-(ne) 17tdoi acknwldg: missing credits (transcription, illustration
-transcription, proofreading) [jsd: didn't I add these?]
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: free-state -> Freeland
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: Kai lord -> Kai Lord
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: north-east -> northeast
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: new-found -> newfound [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: shadow gate -> Shadow Gate [so: x3]
-(ne) 17tdoi tssf: of his prison, and in possession [so: Italicise 'and'.]
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: freestate -> Freeland [x2]
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: doomed to fail -> doomed to failure [so: Unsure about this one.]
-(ne) 17tdoi tssf: skyrider [so: Italicise.]
-(ft) 17tdoi tssf: [jsd: Somebody (can't remember who) has commented
-that starting with either 15tdc or 16tlov, it's possible to create a
-timeline accurate enough to monitor using the advanced Curing and
-Deliverance restorations of large EP numbers. If we can put such a
-timeline together, we ought to footnote the issue someplace -- with the
-time reference, this seems like the best place to do it.]
-(??) 17tdoi tssf: domain--the Darklands and -> domain--the Darklands--and
-(??) 17tdoi tssf: Naar--the King of the Darkness, to destroy -> Naar,
-the King of the Darkness, to destroy --or-- Naar -- the King of the
-Darkness -- to destroy
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: elite -> élite [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi tssf: Kai lord -> Kai Lord [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(ne) 17tdoi tssf: allout -> all-out [ik:as in exactly the same text in lw13-lw16]
-
-(er) 17tdoi gamerulz: that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages [so: Remove this.]
-(er) 17tdoi gamerulz: on the last page of this book [so: Remove this.]
-(er) 17tdoi gamerulz: (ie, -> (i.e. [so: x2]
-(ft) 17tdoi gamerulz: The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the Rules Handbook for details. [so: copied directly from TDC.]
-(ft) 17tdoi gamerulz: [so: New footnote required regarding restoration of Korlinium Scabbard and Silver Bracers to and removal of Helshezag and Dagger of Vashna from permissable Special Items list.]
-(ft) 17tdoi discplnz: The rules of the books in the Magnakai series (6-12) and the fact that the 'rank of Kai Grand Defender . . . means you are skilled in two . . . weapons' imply that for each book that you complete of the Grand Master series (13-20), you will gain mastery of an additional Kai weapon. E.g. if you complete The Plague Lords of Ruel and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next book, you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have Mastery of. [so: copied directly from TDC.]
-(ft) 17tdoi gamerulz: [jsd: footnote needed on the changing Special
-Item list?]
-(??) 17tdoi gamerulz: points over to Book 16 -> points over to Book 18
-
-(er) 17tdoi discplnz: gods -> Gods
-(er) 17tdoi discplnz: Magi-Magic -> Magi-magic
-(er) 17tdoi discplnz: opposite and overleaf -> below
-(??) 17tdoi discplnz: add... to your Action Chart in Book 17 -> add...
-to your Action Chart in Book 18
-
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: safe-keeping -> safekeeping
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: (see the inside front cover of this book [so: remove this.]
-(??) 17tdoi equipmnt: map [so: encode as link to map.]
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: (eg -> (e.g.
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: arrow -> Arrow [so: x5]
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: bow -> Bow [so: x8]
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: quiver -> Quiver
-(er) 17tdoi equipmnt: safe-keeping -> safekeeping [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-
-
-(er) 17tdoi cmbtrulz: on the inside back cover of this book [so: Remove this]
-(er) 17tdoi cmbtrulz: on the page after the Random Number Table -> in the back of this book
-(er) 17tdoi cmbtrulz: Lone Wolf (Combat Skill 32) -> Lone Wolf (Combat Skill 27)
-(er) 17tdoi cmbtrulz: adds 3 points to his -> adds 8 points to his
-
-(er) 17tdoi kaiwisdm: Incorrect order [so: In my UK copy of TDoI, Grand Master's Wisdom appears before Improved Grand Master Disciplines and Levels of Kai Grand Mastership. Books 16 and 18 also have this change in order, but books 19 and 20 have the normal order.]
-(er) 17tdoi kaiwisdm: value at all,. -> value at all.
-
-(er) 17tdoi imprvdsc: ie. lightning -> i.e. lightning
-(er) 17tdoi imprvdsc: 'Mindfort' -> Mindfort [so: perhaps italicise this first occurrence rather than have the quote marks.]
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Slow Fall [so: Encode as Spell.]
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Breathe Water [so: Encode as Spell.]
-(er) 17tdoi imprvdsc: 'Improved Grand Master Disciplines' -> Improved Grand Master Disciplines
-(??) 17tdoi guardian: infra-vision -> infravision [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Magi-Magic -> Magi-magic [ik:as in PAMoS]
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Distipline -> Discipline
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: lncreases -> increases
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: Kai-Blast -> Kai-blast [ik:2x, this change is already listed in the Errata]
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: ofintense -> of intense
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: body-weight -> body weight [ik:as in lw16; this change is already listed in the Errata]
-(ne) 17tdoi imprvdsc: eg: -> e.g. [ik:this change is already listed in the Errata]
-
-Illustration Placements:
-Small Illustration 1: Icebergs [147, 224(?), 345, 291(?), 345, or 51 and 189]
-Small Illustration 2: Undead skull in Winged Helmet [243?]
-Small Illustration 3: Shadow Gate (?) [149? 200? 290? 300, 349?]
-Small Illustration 4: Crystal Spire of Xaagon Ext. [266?, 289, 338]
-Small Illustration 5: Glass dome, plinth & Onyx Key [180]
-Small Illustration 6: Puzzle - called Illustration V [69]
-Small Illustration 7: Ice-coated ship [162? 177?]
-Small Illustration 8: Skeleton rod machine [106]
-Small Illustration 9: Lightning over Mountains [44?]
-Small Illustration 10: Weapon roack scimitars & spears [141]
-Small Illustration 11: Deathstaff vs. Sommerswerd [214]
-Small Illustration 12: Sommerlund & Lencian shields [321?]
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-Sections 1-50:
-(er) 17tdoi 1: Kai aspirants -> Kai Aspirants [so: As in "Kai Master".]
-(er) 17tdoi 1: urges Rimoah, 'Banedon -> urges Rimoah. 'Banedon
-(ne) 17tdoi 1: Skyrider [so: Italicise x3.]
-(er) 17tdoi 1: iceboat -> ice-boat [so: as per the two other ocurrences in this section.]
-(er) 17tdoi 1: seven days the pilot -> seven days, the pilot
-(er) 17tdoi 1: pack ice -> pack-ice [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(??) 17tdoi 1: I will... hour [jsd: mark as <thought>]
-(er) 17tdoi 3: demonlord -> Demonlord (so: cf. deathlord.]
-(er) 17tdoi 3: down-draught -> down-draft [so: Dictionary.com says that 'draught' is chiefly British in usage, but personally, I would only ever use it to describe liquid rather than air current.]
-(er) 17tdoi 3: demonlord's -> Demonlord's (so: cf. deathlord.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 4: lock plate -> lockplate [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 6: Click -> click [so: and encode as onomatopoeia.]
-(er) 17tdoi 6: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 7: yards beyond you -> yards beyond, you
-(er) 17tdoi 7: it as if -> it is as if
-(er) 17tdoi 8: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 8: If you cannot -> If you do not [so: Strange phrasiology.]
-(er) 17tdoi 9: ultra-violet -> ultraviolet [so: as per Section 39 and 313.]
-(ft) 17tdoi 10: [so: This is the correct answer to the puzzle in Section 69 and Section 213.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 10: clunk [so: encode as onomatopoeia.]
-(er) 17tdoi 13: icy sea water -> icy seawater
-(er) 17tdoi 14: who were -> who are [so: LW is told in present tense.]
-(er) 17tdoi 15: rough hewn -> rough-hewn [so: or, roughly hewn]
-(er) 17tdoi 15: rough hewn -> rough-hewn [IK: as in the PAMoS, but might be correct as-is (predicate adjective?)]
-(er) 17tdoi 15: Backpack item -> Backpack Item
-(er) 17tdoi 18: Skark oil -> skark oil [so: not an item or combatable opponent.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 18: sadiy -> sadly
-(er) 17tdoi 18: 'Do not fear,' [so: New paragraph for speaker.]
-(er) 17tdoi 18: fear,' you reply, 'I -> fear, you reply. 'I
-(er) 17tdoi 19: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 19: attained, above -> attained above
-(er) 17tdoi 20: now-open -> now open
-(ne) 17tdoi 20: lock plate -> lockplate [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(ne) 17tdoi 22: Skyrider's [so: italicise.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 22: Skyrider [so: italicise.]
-(er) 17tdoi 22: silver-haired King -> silver-haired king.
-(er) 17tdoi 22: King's -> king's [x3]
-(er) 17tdoi 22: freestate -> Freeland
-(er) 17tdoi 22: in previous Lone Wolf adventures -> in any previous Lone Wolf adventure [so: or similar]
-(er) 17tdoi 22: If you have not -> If you did not
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-(ne) 17tdoi 22: hub-bub -> hubbub [ik:as in lw08, lw14, lw16] [so: hyphen occurs at line break]
-(er) 17tdoi 23: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 24: your psi-screen -> your Psi-screen [so: as per tlov changes]
-(er) 17tdoi 24: spindly-limbed, black insectiods -> spindly-limbed black insectoids [so: I think this is an appropriate change?]
-(er) 17tdoi 24: head in which -> head from which
-(er) 17tdoi 24: bow -> Bow [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 25: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 26: camouflage -> Camouflage
-(er) 17tdoi 26: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 29: - Slow Fall - -> Slow Fall [so: and encode as Spell.]
- jffdougan: encoded as spell
-(er) 17tdoi 30: camouflage -> Camouflage
-(ft) 17tdoi 31: [so: would this bonus include Kai-blast damage?]
-(ne) 17tdoi 32: coup de grace -> coup de grâce [so: and italicise]
-(er) 17tdoi 32: by a short -> by means of a short
-(er) 17tdoi 36: zigzaging -> zigzagging
-(ne) 17tdoi 36: yow -> your
-(er) 17tdoi 38: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 39: kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 39: splutters, 'it's -> splutters. 'It's
-(er) 17tdoi 40: Upon the instant -> At the instant
-(er) 17tdoi 40: demonlord's -> Demonlord's
-(er) 17tdoi 41: camouflage -> Camouflage
-(er) 17tdoi 42: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
-(ne) 17tdoi 43: to-all -> to all
-(ne) 17tdoi 46: Battlespell [so: encode as spell?]
-(er) 17tdoi 46: Battlespell -> battle-spell [ik:as in lw13 144 and 334 where the word is used in exactly the same context]
-(er) 17tdoi 46: - Gloar! - -> Gloar! [so: and encode as spell.]
- jffdougan: I think I'd do Power Word and battle spell, based on 08tjoh. Gloar should definitely be spell-coded, though.
- (ne) 17tdoi 46: Gloar! [tp: Encode as... something, no doubt.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 46: Battlespell [tp: Name of a spell?]
-(er) 17tdoi 48: battle cry - > battle-cry [so: as per PAMoS.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 48: flag-stoned -> flagstoned [ik:as in lw07, lw08, lw09, lw11, lw13, lw15, lw16]
-(er) 17tdoi 50: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
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-Sections 51-100:
-(er) 17tdoi 52: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 53: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 53: - Strength - -> Strength [so: and encode as spell.]
- jffdougan: encoded as spell
-(er) 17tdoi 53: new-found -> newfound
-(er) 17tdoi 53: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 54: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 56: Crack! -> crack! [so: and encode as onomatopoeia.]
-(er) 17tdoi 57: his minions you -> his minions, you
-(ne) 17tdoi 57: power a -> power--a [tp: As for the other correction to this section.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 57: Xaagon the -> Xaagon--the [tp: Not errata, I'm sure, but I don't have the book to check. I assume it was an em dash.] [jsd: couldn't find this one]
-(er) 17tdoi 59: Sun Lord, or higher -> Sun Lord or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 59: [so: Move Telegnosis option to top.]
-(er) 17tdoi 61: - Sense Evil - -> Sense Evil [so: and encode as Spell.]
- jffdougan: encoded as spell.
-(er) 17tdoi 61: splutters, 'it's -> splutters. 'It's
-(ne) 17tdoi 61: bell we're -> bell--we're [tp: As for section 57. I think I remember this bit fairly clearly.]
-(er) 17tdoi 61: gods -> Gods [tp: As per PAMoS] [so: Not sure about this one as it isn't referring directly to any of Aon's
-pantheon.]
-(er) 17tdoi 62: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 63: Backpack items -> Backpack Items
-(er) 17tdoi 66: a-port -> a'port
-(ne) 17tdoi 66: of, Nexus -> of Nexus
-(er) 17tdoi 67: Chaos horde -> Chaos Horde
-(er) 17tdoi 68: Backpack items -> Backpack Items
-(ft) 17tdoi 68: [so: what if you only have 3 or fewer Backpack Items?]
-(ft) 17tdoi 69: [so: Add standard puzzle footnote.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 70: coup de grace -> coup de grâce [so: and italicise]
-(er) 17tdoi 72: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 74: Bulkhead door -> Bulkhead Door
-(er) 17tdoi 75: demonlord -> Demonlord [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 75: delete this weapon -> delete this Weapon
-(er) 17tdoi 76: their plan you -> their plan, you
-(er) 17tdoi 79: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 79: despatch -> dispatch [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 80: creamy-coloured -> cream-coloured [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 81: Bulkhead door -> Bulkhead Door
-(ne) 17tdoi 83: reach . . . return [so: both of these words should be italicised in the final paragraph.]
-(er) 17tdoi 86: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 86: 2-8 -> 2-9 [so: Is there an option missing?]
-(er) 17tdoi 89: at its centre -> from its centre
-(er) 17tdoi 89: round, by -> round by
-(er) 17tdoi 90: a Deathstaff that hums -> the Deathstaff, which hums
-(er) 17tdoi 91: - Invisible Fist - -> Invisible Fist [so: and encode as spell.]
-(er) 17tdoi 95: Kai weapon skill -> Kai Weaponskill
-(ft) 17tdoi 100: [so: This is the correct answer to the puzzle in Section 322.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 96: turh -> turn
-(ne) 17tdoi 96: turh to 213. -> turn to 213. [tp: Also encode as link; I guess the typo made some script or transform miss this.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 92: Invisible Fist [tp: Encode as spell name?]
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-Sections 101-150:
-(er) 17tdoi 101: korlinium scabbard -> Korlinium Scabbard
-(er) 17tdoi 103: Kai healing skills -> Kai Healing skills
-(er) 17tdoi 103: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 104: still to be -> to still be [so: It may split the infinitive, but it sounds better IMHO.]
-(er) 17tdoi 105: demonlord -> Demonlord [so: x2]
-(ne) 17tdoi 105: Huntmasterv -> Huntmastery
-(er) 17tdoi 106: high galley -> high gallery
-(er) 17tdoi 106: Sun Lord, or higher -> Sun Lord or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 108: unnervering speed -> unnerving speed
-(er) 17tdoi 109: lightning swift blows -> lightning-swift blows
-(er) 17tdoi 110: at its centre -> from its centre
-(er) 17tdoi 110: bonuses to your COMBAT SKILL -> bonuses [so: the bonuses the Sommerswerd conveys vs. undead is double damage, not a CS bonus.]
-(er) 17tdoi 110: third round, by turning -> third round by turning
-(er) 17tdoi 111: simultaneously to -> to simultaneously [so: sounds better to me.]
-(er) 17tdoi 111: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 112: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(ne) 17tdoi 112: Lightning Hand [so: encode as spell.]
-(er) 17tdoi 113: gutteral -> guttural
-(er) 17tdoi 113: attained, above -> attained above
-(er) 17tdoi 116: Kai sixth sense -> Kai Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 117: court martial -> court-martial [so: as per Dictionary.com]
-(er) 17tdoi 118: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 120: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 120: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 121: - Lightning Hand - -> Lightning hand [so: and encode as spell.]
-(er) 17tdoi 123: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 124: hurling -> hurtling
-(er) 17tdoi 124: both [so: italicise]
-(er) 17tdoi 127: high galley -> high gallery
-(er) 17tdoi 128: place it into -> stow it in [so: or similar]
-(er) 17tdoi 128: in Magnamund -> on Magnamund
-(er) 17tdoi 131: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 131: 0 = 100 -> 0 = 10 [so: I bet a lot of frustrated Lone Wolf players died here!]
-(er) 17tdoi 132: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 133: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 133: - Breathe Water -> Breathe Water [so: and encode as spell.]
- jffdougan: encoded as spell
-(er) 17tdoi 136: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 136: - Levitation -> Levitation [so: and encode as spell.]
-(er) 17tdoi 137: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 137: Chaos horde -> Chaos-horde [so: As per Section 111.]
-(er) 17tdoi 138: Backpack items -> Backpack Items [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 139: disciplines -> Disciplines
-(ne) 17tdoi 140: Maycastle [so: italicise x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 145: Chaos horde -> Chaos-horde [so: As per Section 111.]
-(er) 17tdoi 146: infra-red -> infrared [so: cf ultraviolet.]
-(er) 17tdoi 149: Ghosts, in -> Ghosts in
-(er) 17tdoi 150: demonlord -> Demonlord
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-Sections 151-200:
-(er) 17tdoi 152: Sun Lord, or higher -> Sun Lord or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 154: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 155: shortlived -> short-lived [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 156: cavern; -> cavern:
-(er) 17tdoi 161: Thane, or higher -> Thane or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 163: Above you can -> Above, you can
-(er) 17tdoi 163: of rusty sword -> of a rusty sword
-(er) 17tdoi 164: in Magnamund -> on Magnamund
-(er) 17tdoi 165: Lord, or higher -> Lord or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 166: me my friend -> me, my friend
-(er) 17tdoi 167: bonuses to your COMBAT SKILL -> bonuses
-(er) 17tdoi 175: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 176: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 176: - Levitation - -> Levitation [so: and encode as spell.]
-(er) 17tdoi 176: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 180: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 180: Special Item, do not -> Special Item, or do not
-(er) 17tdoi 183: from the enemy -> from your enemy [so: sounds better IMHO]
-(er) 17tdoi 184: destroyed (erase . . . list). -> destroyed. (Erase . . . list.)
-(er) 17tdoi 184: Pained but -> Pained, but
-(ne) 17tdoi 184: yout -> your
-(er) 17tdoi 185: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 185: creamy-coloured -> cream-coloured [IK: as in the PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 185: sky, beat -> sky beat
-(er) 17tdoi 185: down-draught -> down-draft
-(er) 17tdoi 185: demonlord's -> Demonlord's
-(er) 17tdoi 189: collison -> collision
-(er) 17tdoi 190: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: x3]
-(er) 17tdoi 190: grudgingly to -> to grudgingly
-(er) 17tdoi 190: feet-first -> feet first [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 191: attack upon the -> attack the [so: for clarity]
-(er) 17tdoi 191: pre-empted -> preempted
-(er) 17tdoi 194: impregnated -> imbued [so: or similar]
-(er) 17tdoi 194: korlinium scabbard -> Korlinium Scabbard
-(??) 17tdoi 195: [so: The bow is the front of the ship; why would the crew flee to the front of the ship instead of the stern when the Ixian vessel is approaching from the north?]
-(er) 17tdoi 195: cry, 'Ishir -> cry. 'Ishir
-(er) 17tdoi 196: un-life -> undeath [so: possibly?]
-(er) 17tdoi 196: Fear your survival -> Fearing for your survival
-(er) 17tdoi 196: Thane, or higher -> Thane or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 196: Lord, or higher -> Lord or higher
-(ne) 17tdoi 197: Crack! -> crack! [so: and encode as onomatopoeia.]
-(ft) 17tdoi 197: [so: If you only possess Grand Nexus, you may still add 2.]
-(er) 17tdoi 198: porthole -> port-hole [so: did we decide this one before?]
-(er) 17tdoi 199: effect -> effects
-(er) 17tdoi 200: achieve your quest [so: this sounds odd to me.]
-(er) 17tdoi 200: noise behind you -> noise from behind you
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-Sections 201-250:
-(er) 17tdoi 202: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 202: by the stairs -> by means of the stairs
-(er) 17tdoi 203: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 205: [Odd justification in last paragraph.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 205: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(ne) 17tdoi 205: Crack! -> crack [so: and encode as onomatopoeia]
- jffdougan: I couldn't find this one.
-(ft) 17tdoi 205: [so: If you only possess Grand Nexus, you may still add 2.]
-(er) 17tdoi 208: camouflage -> Camouflage {so: Maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 209: falter and -> falter, and
-(er) 17tdoi 209: counter-attack -> counterattack [so, ik: as per PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 211: an explosion white-hot -> an explosion of white-hot
-(er) 17tdoi 212: face-first -> face first [so: maybe?]
-(ne) 17tdoi 213: coup de grace -> coup de grâce [so: and italicise]
-(er) 17tdoi 213: chamber, is -> chamber is
-(ft) 17tdoi 213: [so: standard puzzle footnote.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 213: map [so: encode as link.]
-(er) 17tdoi 213: [so: indent puzzle instructions as choice.]
-(er) 17tdoi 216: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 216: fight, you -> fight you
-(er) 17tdoi 217: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 217: - Counterspell - -> Counterspell [so: and encode as spell]
-(er) 17tdoi 218: second wave . . . come -> second wave . . . comes
-(er) 17tdoi 218: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 218: towards the Tagazin -> towards Tagazin
-(er) 17tdoi 218: demonlord's -> Demonlord's
-(ne) 17tdoi 219: [so: Italicise Banedon's words.]
-(er) 17tdoi 219: korlinium scabbard -> Korlinium Scabbard
-(er) 17tdoi 219: another weapon -> another Weapon [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 223: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(ne) 17tdoi 224: saehsa [so: Italicise]
-(er) 17tdoi 224: [so: indent choices.]
-(er) 17tdoi 225: coiled -> oiled [so: as elsewhere]
-(er) 17tdoi 226: .. -> .
-(er) 17tdoi 227: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 229: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 230: Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell
-(er) 17tdoi 230: - Strength - -> Strength [so: and encode as spell]
- jffdougan: encoded as spell
-(er) 17tdoi 230: new-found -> newfound
-(er) 17tdoi 230: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 230: out-distance -> outdistance [so, ik: as per PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 231: suprise -> surprise
-(er) 17tdoi 233: splutters, 'it's -> splutters. 'It's
-(er) 17tdoi 234: cover avoiding -> cover, avoiding
-(er) 17tdoi 235: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures
-(er) 17tdoi 235: feet-first -> feet first [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 239: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 240: you 're -> you're
-(er) 17tdoi 241: see better -> better see
-(er) 17tdoi 241: Knight, or higher -> Knight or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 242: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 243: camouflage -> Camouflage
-(er) 17tdoi 243: Drakkarim undead -> Drakkarim Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 244: arrow -> Arrow [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 244: bow -> Bow
-(ft) 17tdoi 244: [so: You do not need to remove the Bow from your Action Chart.]
-(er) 17tdoi 246: rope -> Rope [so: in the first instance at least?]
-(er) 17tdoi 249: ante-chamber -> antechamber [ik:as in lw05, lw06, lw09, lw13, lw15]
-(er) 17tdoi 250: action they were committing -> action they were performing
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-Sections 251-300:
-(er) 17tdoi 253: face-first -> face first
-(er) 17tdoi 253: Thane, or higher -> Thane or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 254: pre-empt -> preempt
-(er) 17tdoi 254: Lord, or higher -> Lord or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 254: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 255: insticts -> instincts
-(er) 17tdoi 256: camouflage -> Camouflage
-(er) 17tdoi 257: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 258: Click -> click [so: and encode as onomatopoeia]
-(er) 17tdoi 259: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 259: feet-first -> feet first
-(er) 17tdoi 260: Drakkarim marines (undead) -> Drakkarim Marines (Undead)
-(er) 17tdoi 260: rounds, or less -> rounds or less
-(er) 17tdoi 260: rounds, or longer -> rounds or longer
-(??) 17tdoi 261: bow fire [so: Is this acceptable?]
-(er) 17tdoi 262: head-first -> head first [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 265: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 266: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 266: cross-winds -> crosswinds [ik:"crosswind" occurs once in lw11]
-(er) 17tdoi 267: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 269: healing -> Healing
-(er) 17tdoi 272: Knight, or higher -> Knight or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 273: - Slow Fall - -> Slow Fall [so: and encode as spell.]
- jffdougan: encoded as spell
-(er) 17tdoi 275: at its centre -> from its centre
-(er) 17tdoi 275: round, by -> round by
-(er) 17tdoi 278: chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures
-(er) 17tdoi 278: Chaos horde -> Chaos-horde
-(er) 17tdoi 278: rounds, by -> rounds by
-(ft) 17tdoi 279: [so: This x2 bonus applies to Kai-blast as well?]
-(er) 17tdoi 280: wall, more -> wall more
-(er) 17tdoi 281: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 281: arrow -> Arrow
-(er) 17tdoi 283: spindly-limbed, black -> spindly-limbed black
-(er) 17tdoi 283 in which composite -> from which composite
-(er) 17tdoi 283: bow -> Bow [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 285: rope -> Rope
-(er) 17tdoi 287: arrow -> Arrow
-(er) 17tdoi 287: bow -> Bow
-(ft) 17tdoi 287: [so: You do not need to remove the Bow from your Action Chart.]
-(er) 17tdoi 288: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 288: Ziog: -> Ziog
-(er) 17tdoi 288: damaged -> wounded [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 289: this city had been -> this city was
-(er) 17tdoi 290: shattering remnants -> shattered remnants
-(er) 17tdoi 294: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 296: gutteral -> guttural
-(ft) 17tdoi 296: [so: You do not need to possess either of the other Disciplines to use the +1 Grand Nexus bonus.]
-(er) 17tdoi 297: raidant -> radiant [ik:I guess]
-(er) 17tdoi 300: attention, it -> attention; it
-(er) 17tdoi 300: Ixian elder -> Ixian Elder (so: cf. Acolyte Elder]
-(er) 17tdoi 300: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
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-Sections 301-350:
-(er) 17tdoi 301: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 301: demonlord's -> Demonlord's
-(er) 17tdoi 303: face-first -> face first [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 310: but only to find -> only to find
-(er) 17tdoi 310: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 312: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 312: destroyed (erase . . . list). -> destroyed. (Erase . . . list.)
-(er) 17tdoi 313: Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery
-(er) 17tdoi 315: healing -> Healing
-(er) 17tdoi 317: despatch -> dispatch [so, ik: as per PAMoS]
-(er) 17tdoi 318: chaos horde -> Chaos-horde [so: as everywhere else.]
-(er) 17tdoi 319: face-first -> face first [so: maybe?]
-(ne) 17tdoi 321: Maycastle [so: Italicise x2.]
-(ft) 17tdoi 322: [so: standard puzzle fotnote.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 322: map [so: encode as link.]
-(er) 17tdoi 323: rope -> Rope
-(er) 17tdoi 324: sixth sense -> Sixth Sense
-(er) 17tdoi 326: landing you -> landing, you
-(er) 17tdoi 329: Ixian undead -> Ixian Undead [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 330: bow -> Bow
-(er) 17tdoi 330: [so: Place the Kai-surge option first?]
-(er) 17tdoi 332: Thane, or higher -> Thane or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 336: Drakkarim undead -> Drakkarim Undead
-(er) 17tdoi 338: had been -> was
-(er) 17tdoi 101: korlinium scabbard -> Korlinium Scabbard
-(er) 17tdoi 341: demonlord's -> Demonlord's
-(er) 17tdoi 341: If, at -> If at
-(er) 17tdoi 343: by huge frozen -> by a huge frozen
-(er) 17tdoi 343: Lord, or higher -> Lord or higher
-(er) 17tdoi 346: Crack! -> crack! [so: and encode as onomatopoeia.]
-(ne) 17tdoi 346: Sommersword -> Sommerswerd [ik:]
-(er) 17tdoi 347: camouflage -> Camouflage
-(er) 17tdoi 347: demonlord -> Demonlord
-(er) 17tdoi 350: Ardan, 'Is -> Ardan. 'Is
-(er) 17tdoi 350: dragon-creatures -> Dragon-creatures [so: maybe?]
-(er) 17tdoi 350: my county -> my country
-(er) 17tdoi 350: Kai acolytes -> Kai Acolytes [so: cf. Acolytes of Vashna.]
-(er) 17tdoi 350: champions awaits -> champions, awaits
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-QUESTIONS
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-free-standing vs. freestanding (i.e. Section 32, 143 and others)?
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-mainmast vs. main mast?
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-Crystal Spire (Section 5, 269) vs. crystal spire (everywhere else)?
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-(er) 17tdoi 17: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire [so: cf. Section 5.]
-(er) 17tdoi 55: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire [so: as elsewhere]
-(er) 17tdoi 62: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 84: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 152: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 165: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 173: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 178: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 193: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 200: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 245: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 266: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 270: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 290: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 299: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 300: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire [so: x2]
-(er) 17tdoi 325: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 328: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 330: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 333: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
-(er) 17tdoi 343: crystal spire -> Crystal Spire
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-(er) 17tdoi 5: Crystal Spire -> crystal spire
-(er) 17tdoi 269: Crystal Spire -> crystal spire