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<publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
<date class="publication"><year>2003</year><month>1</month><day>3</day></date>
<description class="blurb">
- <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Last of the Kai Lords. Bitter war rages through your homeland as the evil Darklords of the west lay siege to the capital. The King has sent you on a desperate journey to retrieve the only power in Magnamund that can save your people: the Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Ahead of you lie terrible dangers<ch.emdash/>ferocious sea-storms, the tunnel of Tarnalin, and the ghostly death-hulks of Vonotar the Traitor. But only you can save your land from the devastation of the Darklords.</p>
+ <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>Last of the Kai Lords. Bitter war rages through your homeland as the evil Darklords of the west lay siege to the capital. The King has sent you on a desperate journey to retrieve the only power in Magnamund that can save your people: the Sommerswerd, the sword of the sun. Ahead of you lie terrible dangers<ch.emdash/>ferocious sea-storms, the tunnel of Tarnalin, and the ghostly death-hulks of Vonotar the Traitor. But only you can save your land from the devestation of the Darklords.</p>
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<description class="publication">
<p>Internet Edition published by <a href="&link.project.website;">Project Aon</a>. This edition is intended to reflect the complete text of the original version. Where we have made minor corrections, they will be noted in the <a idref="errata">Errata</a>.</p>
<p>The climb is very difficult, for you have only one free hand<ch.emdash/>the other holds the glowing hilt of the Sommerswerd.</p>
<p>You eventually reach the rim of the tower and quickly hook a leg over the narrow ledge. You are about to jump into the tower and attack when a thin voice makes you freeze.</p>
<p><quote>How I shall delight in the irony of your death, Lone Wolf.</quote></p>
- <p>The sorcerer is standing in the far comer of the tower, his left hand pointing at your head. <quote>Your quest has failed Lone Wolf. Now you must die!</quote></p>
+ <p>The sorcerer is standing in the far corner of the tower, his left hand pointing at your head. <quote>Your quest has failed Lone Wolf. Now you must die!</quote></p>
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<creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
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<p>You are in combat with a Helghast.</p>
<combat><enemy>Helghast</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">21</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">30</enemy-attribute></combat>
- <p>It is attacking you with a powerful Mindblast. If you do not have the Kai Discipline of Mindshield, you will lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for every round of combat that you fight it. The Helghast is immune to Mindblast.</p>
+ <p>It is attacking you with a powerful Mindblast. If you do not have the Kai Discipline of Mindshield, you will lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points for every round of combat that you fight it. This creature is immune to Mindblast.</p>
<choice idref="sect92">If you win the combat, <link-text>turn to 92</link-text>.</choice>
<choice idref="sect183">You may evade at any stage of the fight by diving into the forest, and <link-text>turning to 183</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>A fierce battle now rages throughout the ship as the evil Giaks fight to win control of the Green Sceptre. Perched high up in the masts, the Kraan are rending the sails with their talons and razor-sharp teeth whilst the Zlanbeast have flown back towards Wreck Point to pick up more nets of malicious Giaks.</p>
- <p>Through the body-strewn decks, a menacing shape looms. Both Giaks and sailors are cut down by the creature as it advances towards you. It is a Drakkar, a cruel warrior of the Darklords. Raising his jet black broadsword, he attacks and you must fight him to the death.</p>
+ <p>Through the body-strewn decks, a menacing shape looms. Both Giaks and sailors are cut down by the creature as it advances towards you. It is a Drakkar, a cruel warrior of the Darklords. Raising his <!--ERRTAG-RE-358734-->jet-black<!--/ERRTAG-RE-358734--> broadsword, he attacks and you must fight him to the death.</p>
<combat><enemy>Drakkar</enemy><enemy-attribute class="combatskill">16</enemy-attribute><enemy-attribute class="endurance">24</enemy-attribute></combat>
<choice idref="sect243">If you win this combat, <link-text>turn to 243</link-text>.</choice>
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<p>(<a idref="sect314">314</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect315">315</a>) Moved the Mind Over Matter choice into the first position.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect321">321</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai lord</quote> with <quote>Kai Lord</quote>.</p>
- <p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Added <quote>The Helghast is immune to Mindblast</quote> to the end of the final paragraph.</p>
+ <p>(<a idref="sect332">332</a>) Added <quote>This creature is immune to Mindblast.</quote> to the end of the final paragraph.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect333">333</a>) Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect334">334</a>) Moved the Tracking choice into the first position. Replaced <quote>pot-holes</quote> with <quote>potholes</quote></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect337">337</a>) Moved the Hunting choice into the first position.</p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect345">345</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-358734-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>jet black</quote> with <quote>jet-black</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-358734-ITEM--></p>
<p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Durncrag mountains</quote> with <quote>Durncrag Mountains</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>.</p>
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