Fix issues in Book 24
authorSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Sat, 9 Apr 2016 10:54:54 +0000 (10:54 +0000)
committerSimon Osborne <simon.osborne@projectaon.org>
Sat, 9 Apr 2016 10:54:54 +0000 (10:54 +0000)
git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/trunk@2525 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11

en/xml/24rw.xml

index 8a67dd9..4b8f1c4 100644 (file)
 
      <data>
        <p>You emerge from beneath the bridge and your boat is carried swiftly away in the grip of the river<ch.apos/>s powerful current. Within the hour you arrive at a point where the river meanders into a hilly, timbered region. It is difficult to navigate this section of the river in the dark and so you decide to stop and rest until daybreak. You beach your boat on the left bank and settle down to sleep under the bough of an oak tree.</p>
-       <p>Before you go to sleep, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points.</p>
+       <p>Before you go to sleep, you sate your hunger from the provisions provided for your voyage.</p>
        <choice idref="sect138">To continue, <link-text>turn to 138</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
      <meta><title>96</title></meta>
 
      <data>
-       <p>Drawing upon your Grand Master skill, you command the angry serpent to ignore you and your companion and swim off along the waterway. The creature withdraws its head and slowly it blinks its green eyes. It hesitates, and you sense that its rudimentary mind is confused by your command. Although it does not obey your mental suggestion, you detect that it has momentarily lost its desire to attack.</p>
+       <p>You command the angry serpent to ignore you and your companion and swim off along the waterway. The creature withdraws its head and slowly it blinks its green eyes. It hesitates, and you sense that its rudimentary mind is confused by your command. Although it does not obey your mental suggestion, you detect that it has momentarily lost its desire to attack.</p>
        <p><quote>Quick, Hulsta, follow me,</quote> you whisper. <quote>Let us get away before it recovers its senses!</quote> You press your back against the rough wall of this underground conduit and edge your way around the menacing creature.</p>
        <choice idref="sect329"><link-text>Turn to 329</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
        <choice idref="sect130">If you possess Kai-alchemy and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 130</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect29">If you possess Magi-magic and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 29</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect4">If you possess Kai-surge and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 4</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect96">If you possess Animal Mastery and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
-       <choice idref="sect317">If you possess none of these Disciplines, or if you choose not to use any of them, <link-text>turn to 317</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect96">If you possess Animal Mastery or an Eye of Lhaz and wish to use it, <link-text>turn to 96</link-text>.</choice>
+       <choice idref="sect317">If you possess none of these Disciplines nor this Special Item, or if you choose not to use any of them, <link-text>turn to 317</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
 
        <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Added a paragraph break between <quote>the city.</quote> and <quote>You recall</quote>. Replaced <quote>Slovarian plain</quote> with <quote>Slovarian Plain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The east road is called Knucklebone Lane and the west road is called Kettle Street.</quote> with <quote>The west road is called Knucklebone Lane and the east road is called Kettle Street.</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect257">Section 257</a>, where following Knucklebone Lane leads to the <em>west</em> wall of Duadon). Replaced <quote>the Captain</quote> with <quote>the captain</quote>. Replaced <quote>The Captain</quote> with <quote>The captain</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>) Replaced <quote>the potion</quote> with <quote>the Potion of Gallowbrush</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>must now eat</quote> with <quote>must eat</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>Before you go to sleep, unless you possess the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery, you must now eat a Meal or lose 3 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points</quote> with <quote>Before you go to sleep, you sate your hunger from the provisions provided for your voyage</quote> (cf. <a idref="sect63">Section 63</a> which states the boat contains a large amount of food and <a idref="sect138">Section 138</a> which makes it clear there is still plenty of food in the boat).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect91">91</a>) Replaced <quote>lune</quote> with <quote>Lune</quote>. Replaced <quote>record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Special Item which you carry in your Backpack. You must discard one Backpack Item in its favour if you currently have the maximum number of items permissible</quote> with <quote>record it on your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a> as a Backpack Item</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>plates and</quote> with <quote>plates, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect92">92</a>) Added <quote>If you wield the Kai Weapon <quote>Alema</quote> or <quote>Kaistar</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect93">93</a>) Replaced <quote>battle flags</quote> with <quote>battle-flags</quote>. Replaced <quote>battle maps</quote> with <quote>battle-maps</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect95">95</a>) Replaced <quote>must now eat</quote> with <quote>must eat</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>whisper, <ch.lsquot/>let</quote> with <quote>whisper. <ch.lsquot/>Let</quote>. Replaced <quote>Grand Mastery skill</quote> with <quote>Grand Master skill</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect96">96</a>) Replaced <quote>whisper, <ch.lsquot/>let</quote> with <quote>whisper. <ch.lsquot/>Let</quote>.  Replaced <quote>Drawing upon your Grand Mastery skill, you command</quote> with <quote>You command</quote> as you may have used an Eye of Lhaz to control the serpent (see errata entry for <a idref="err214">Section 214</a> for justification for this change).</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect97">97</a>) Replaced <quote>shop, then</quote> with <quote>shop, and then</quote>. Replaced <quote>Ah, t<ch.apos/>is</quote> with <quote>Ah, <ch.apos/>tis</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect98">98</a>) Replaced <quote>clang</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>clang</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect99">99</a>) Replaced <quote>parallel with</quote> with <quote>parallel to</quote>. Replaced <quote>blood-stained</quote> with <quote>bloodstained</quote>. Replaced <quote>least busy</quote> with <quote>least-busy</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>west gatehouse</quote> with <quote>south gatehouse</quote> since it looks like south on the <a idref="map">map</a>; also, according to <bookref series ="lw" book="06tkot" section="sect306">Section 306</bookref> in <em><bookref series ="lw" book="06tkot">The Kingdoms of Terror</bookref></em>, the city of Tekaro lies directly next to the convergence of the Quarl and Storn rivers, so┬áthere wouldn<ch.apos/>t be room for the highway mentioned in <a idref="sect99">Section 99</a> on the west side of the city.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect210">210</a>) Replaced <quote>another, <ch.lsquot/>have</quote> with <quote>another. <ch.lsquot/>Have</quote>. Added a paragraph break between <quote>soldiers.</quote> and <quote><ch.thinspace/><ch.lsquot/>He<ch.apos/>s</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect211">211</a>) Replaced <quote>birdsong</quote> with <quote>bird song</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect213">213</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai rank of Grand</quote> with <quote>rank of Kai Grand</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pathsmanship, and</quote> with <quote>Pathsmanship and</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Mastery and</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a id="err214" idref="sect214">214</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-alchemy and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Magi-magic, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-surge, and</quote> with <quote>Kai-surge and</quote>. Replaced <quote>Animal Mastery, and</quote> with <quote>Animal Mastery or an Eye of Lhaz and</quote> since <cite><bookref series="lw" book="22tbos">The Buccaneers of Shadaki</bookref></cite> <bookref series="lw" book="22tbos" section="sect156">Sections 156</bookref> and <bookref series="lw" book="22tbos" section="sect167">167</bookref> states that an Eye of Lhaz <quote>enables user to exert control over poisonous snakes</quote>. Replaced <quote>Disciplines, or</quote> with <quote>Disciplines nor this Special Item, or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect215">215</a>) Replaced <quote>doomed ceiling</quote> with <quote>domed ceiling</quote>. Replaced <quote><onomatopoeia>Crack!</onomatopoeia>,</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>Crack!</onomatopoeia></quote>. Replaced <quote>trails of green fire splutter</quote> with <quote>trails of green fire sputter</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect216">216</a>) Replaced <quote>parallel with</quote> with <quote>parallel to</quote>. Replaced <quote>least busy</quote> with <quote>least-busy</quote>. Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>. Replaced <quote>west gatehouse</quote> with <quote>south gatehouse</quote> since it looks like south on the <a idref="map">map</a>; also, according to <bookref series ="lw" book="06tkot" section="sect306">Section 306</bookref> in <em><bookref series ="lw" book="06tkot">The Kingdoms of Terror</bookref></em>, the city of Tekaro lies directly next to the convergence of the Quarl and Storn rivers, so┬áthere wouldn<ch.apos/>t be room for the highway mentioned in <a idref="sect99">Section 99</a> on the west side of the city.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect217">217</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Spell</quote>. Removed the dashes around <quote><spell>Invisible Fist</spell></quote>. Added <quote>If you wield the Kai Weapon <quote>Spawnsmite</quote> or <quote>Kaistar</quote>, you will benefit from the additional combat bonus applicable to its unique properties.</quote>.</p>