Fixed 14tcok Section 9 [BK]

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diff --git a/en/xml/14tcok.xml b/en/xml/14tcok.xml
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--- a/en/xml/14tcok.xml
+++ b/en/xml/14tcok.xml
@@ -937,7 +937,7 @@
       <meta><title>9</title></meta>
 
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       <meta><title>9</title></meta>
 
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-       <p>Aided by your youthful strength and Kai skills, you catch hold of the archway and pull yourself to safety. After pausing just long enough to catch your breath, you look into the dust-filled room and reflect upon how you were nearly buried alive. With a shake of your head you dismiss these morbid thoughts and set off along the tunnel.</p>
+       <p>Aided by your youthful strength and Kai skills, you catch hold of the archway and pull yourself to safety, yet your submersion has cost you your money pouch and one item from your Backpack, lost when you first fell into the dusty pool. Erase all your Gold Crowns, and the first item recorded on your Backpack Items list. After pausing just long enough to catch your breath, you look into the dust-filled room and reflect upon how you were nearly buried alive. With a shake of your head you dismiss these morbid thoughts and set off along the tunnel.</p>

        <choice idref="sect82"><link-text>Turn to 82</link-text>.</choice>
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        <choice idref="sect82"><link-text>Turn to 82</link-text>.</choice>
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@@ -5783,6 +5783,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>veterans</quote> with <quote>Veterans</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect3">3</a>) Replaced <quote>click</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>click</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect5">5</a>) Replaced <quote>veterans</quote> with <quote>Veterans</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect6">6</a>) Replaced <quote>sixth sense</quote> with <quote>Sixth Sense</quote>.</p>

+          <p>(<a idref="sect9">9</a>) Replaced <quote>safety. After</quote> with <quote>safety, yet your submersion has cost you your money pouch and one item from your Backpack, lost when you first fell into the dusty pool. Erase all your Gold Crowns, and the first item recorded on your Backpack Items list. After</quote> (cf. Sections <a idref="sect165">165</a> and <a idref="sect342">342</a>).</p>

        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>commotion, and your presence, has</quote> with <quote>commotion<ch.emdash/>and your presence<ch.emdash/>has</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar guard</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim guard</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>the Sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>head first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>. Replaced <quote>commotion, and your presence, has</quote> with <quote>commotion<ch.emdash/>and your presence<ch.emdash/>has</quote>. Replaced <quote>Drakkar guard</quote> with <quote>Drakkarim guard</quote> to reflect <a idref="erruse">standard usage</a>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai-alchemy, and</quote> with <quote>Magi-magic and</quote>. Replaced <quote>skill, or</quote> with <quote>skill or</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>the Sword of Helshezag</quote> with <quote>Helshezag</quote>.</p>