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@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2007</year><month>7</month><day>23</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2008</year><month>1</month><day>25</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are the warrior, Lone Wolf, last of the Kai Masters of Sommerlund and sole survivor of the massacre that destroyed your kinsmen during a bitter war with your age-old enemies the Darklords of Helgedad. You have given your solemn pledge to restore the Kai to their former glory, ensuring the security of your land in the years to come.</p>
    <p>Diligent study of the tome called <cite>The Book of the Magnakai</cite> has enabled you to master only three of the ten Magnakai Disciplines. Now, you must fulfil your pledge by completing the quest first undertaken by <cite>Sun Eagle</cite> over one thousand years ago.</p>
@@ -736,7 +736,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p>To your horror, you discover that the quiver is completely empty. Your <!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-->Arrows<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690--> have fallen out and lie buried in the nest of vegetation upon which you awoke (erase these <!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-->Arrows<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690--> from your <a idref="action">Action Chart</a>).</p>
-      <p>With a cry of frustration, you discard your <!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-->Bow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899--> and unsheathe a hand weapon as the snake draws itself back in preparation to strike.</p>
+      <p>With a cry of frustration, you <!--ERRTAG-RE-56969-->shoulder your<!--/ERRTAG-RE-56969--> <!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-->Bow<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899--> and unsheathe a hand weapon as the snake draws itself back in preparation to strike.</p>
       <choice idref="sect301"><link-text>Turn to 301</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -3397,8 +3397,8 @@
        <meta>
         <creator>Gary Chalk</creator>
        </meta>
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       <blockquote>
@@ -5459,7 +5459,7 @@
        <p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>stormclouds</quote> with <quote>storm clouds</quote>, <quote>transluscent</quote> with <quote>translucent</quote>, <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>, <quote>Canal, and</quote> with <quote>Canal and</quote>, <quote>connversation and</quote> with <quote>conversation, and</quote>, <quote>powerful and</quote> with <quote>powerful, and</quote>, <quote>landing and, within</quote> with <quote>landing, and within</quote>, <quote>visible covering</quote> with <quote>visible, covering</quote>, <quote>shimmering green</quote> with <quote>shimmering, green</quote> and <quote>goodbyes and</quote> with <quote>goodbyes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>Carcos range</quote> with <quote>Carcos Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of Gorgoron</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Gorgoron</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>, <quote>tap it and</quote> with <quote>tap it, and</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>persistance</quote> with <quote>persistence</quote> and <quote>to bursting</quote> with <quote>to the bursting</quote>.</p>
-<p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--></p>
+<p>(<a idref="sect7">7</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>bow</quote> with <quote>Bow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-55899-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--> Replaced all occurrences of <quote>arrows</quote> with <quote>Arrows</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RA-55690-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-56969-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>discard your</quote> with <quote>shoulder your</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-56969-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>view and, for</quote> with <quote>view, and for</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-61381-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>black, iron portcullis</quote> with <quote>black iron portcullis</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-61381-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect12">12</a>) Replaced <quote>head and</quote> with <quote>head, and</quote> and <quote>Lipo</quote> with <quote>Lio</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-63215-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>its entrance is partially</quote> with <quote>its entrance partially</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-63215-ITEM--></p>