<p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>stormclouds</quote> with <quote>storm clouds</quote>, <quote>transluscent</quote> with <quote>translucent</quote>, <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>, <quote>Canal, and</quote> with <quote>Canal and</quote>, <quote>connversation and</quote> with <quote>conversation, and</quote>, <quote>powerful and</quote> with <quote>powerful, and</quote>, <quote>landing and, within</quote> with <quote>landing, and within</quote>, <quote>visible covering</quote> with <quote>visible, covering</quote>, <quote>shimmering green</quote> with <quote>shimmering, green</quote> and <quote>goodbyes and</quote> with <quote>goodbyes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>Carcos range</quote> with <quote>Carcos Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of Gorgoron</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Gorgoron</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>, <quote>tap it and</quote> with <quote>tap it, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>persistance</quote> with <quote>persistence</quote> and <quote>to bursting</quote> with <quote>to the bursting</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect1">1</a>) Replaced <quote>stormclouds</quote> with <quote>storm clouds</quote>, <quote>transluscent</quote> with <quote>translucent</quote>, <quote>air and</quote> with <quote>air, and</quote>, <quote>Canal, and</quote> with <quote>Canal and</quote>, <quote>connversation and</quote> with <quote>conversation, and</quote>, <quote>powerful and</quote> with <quote>powerful, and</quote>, <quote>landing and, within</quote> with <quote>landing, and within</quote>, <quote>visible covering</quote> with <quote>visible, covering</quote>, <quote>shimmering green</quote> with <quote>shimmering, green</quote> and <quote>goodbyes and</quote> with <quote>goodbyes, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>north-west</quote> with <quote>northwest</quote>. Replaced <quote>Carcos range</quote> with <quote>Carcos Range</quote>. Replaced <quote>chasm of Gorgoron</quote> with <quote>Chasm of Gorgoron</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect2">2</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai</quote> with <quote>Magnakai</quote>, <quote>tap it and</quote> with <quote>tap it, and</quote>.</p>
<p>(<a idref="sect4">4</a>) Replaced <quote>persistance</quote> with <quote>persistence</quote> and <quote>to bursting</quote> with <quote>to the bursting</quote>.</p>