Fixed two (ne) from Richard Cave: 299: slaves -> staves; 228: among -> along

git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@622 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11

diff --git a/03tcok.xml b/03tcok.xml
index 62ff823..d4100a8 100755 (executable)
--- a/03tcok.xml
+++ b/03tcok.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
    &inclusion.gary.chalk.bio.lw;
   </creator>
   <publisher>Project Aon</publisher>
-  <date class="publication"><year>2008</year><month>4</month><day>23</day></date>
+  <date class="publication"><year>2008</year><month>4</month><day>26</day></date>
   <description class="blurb">
    <p>You are Lone Wolf<ch.emdash/>last of the Kai Lords. You have defeated the Darklords and saved your land from their devastation. But Vonotar the Traitor has escaped to the frozen wastes of Kalte and now rules over the Ice Barbarians. Your people demand that Vonotar be made to pay for his treachery. So great is the outcry that the King is obliged to promise that the evil traitor will be brought back to Holmgard, and made to stand trial for his crimes. For you, Lone Wolf, the King<ch.apos/>s promise is the start of a quest that will pit you against a hated foe, deep within the dangerous Caverns of Kalte.</p>
   </description>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
         <dt>Coordination</dt>
          <dd>Jonathan Blake</dd>
         <dt>Special Thanks</dt>
-         <dd>Scott Ferguson, James Marshall, Peter Smyth, Robert Wellock, Arthur Yin</dd>
+         <dd>Richard Cave, Scott Ferguson, James Marshall, Peter Smyth, Robert Wellock, Arthur Yin</dd>
        </dl>
       </data>
      </section>
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
      <p>After the defeat of the Darklords, Vonotar escaped to the frozen wastes of Kalte. He made his way to the ice fortress of Ikaya where, through deception, he tricked the cruel Brumalmarc into adopting him as his magician. It was a mistake that was to cost the barbarian leader his fortress and his life.</p>
      <p>The news that Vonotar still lives spreads like wildfire throughout Sommerlund. Thousands of Sommlending surround the capital and demand that Vonotar be made to pay for his treachery. So great is the outcry that the King is obliged to promise that the evil traitor will be brought back to Holmgard, and made to stand trial for his crimes.</p>
      <p>For you, Lone Wolf, the King<ch.apos/>s promise is the start of a quest that will pit you against a hated foe, deep within the hostile Caverns of Kalte.</p>
-    </data>    
+    </data>
    </section>
 
    <section class="frontmatter" id="gamerulz">
@@ -3344,7 +3344,7 @@
       <meta><title>228</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>You draw on all your powers of concentration to levitate the bowl of fuming herbs, and send it hovering among the corridor. You bring it to rest in the shadow of the pilaster and watch its effects with great curiosity; for in less than a minute, the Ice Barbarian guards have collapsed to the floor.</p>
+       <p>You draw on all your powers of concentration to levitate the bowl of fuming herbs, and send it hovering along the corridor. You bring it to rest in the shadow of the pilaster and watch its effects with great curiosity; for in less than a minute, the Ice Barbarian guards have collapsed to the floor.</p>
        <p><quote>Now<ch.apos/>s our chance,</quote> whispers Loi-Kymar, and he ushers you out of the kitchen. You approach the Hall of the Brumalmarc undetected and discover that one of the magnificent jewelled doors is unlocked. Drawing your weapon, you gently push the door ajar and enter Vonotar<ch.apos/>s chamber.</p>
        <choice idref="sect173"><link-text>Turn to 173</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>
@@ -4163,7 +4163,7 @@
       <meta><title>299</title></meta>
 
       <data>
-       <p>Unless you have used the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, bolts of blue energy leap from the black slaves and catch you squarely in the chest. You are thrown backwards by the force of the charge, and left lying on the cold temple floor. You lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If you used the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, the raw energy arcs harmlessly between the two staves and you are not injured.</p>
+       <p>Unless you have used the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, bolts of blue energy leap from the black staves and catch you squarely in the chest. You are thrown backwards by the force of the charge, and left lying on the cold temple floor. You lose 2 <typ class="attribute">ENDURANCE</typ> points. If you used the Kai Discipline of Mind Over Matter, the raw energy arcs harmlessly between the two staves and you are not injured.</p>
        <choice idref="sect65">If you wish to try to activate the buttons again, <link-text>turn to 65</link-text>.</choice>
        <choice idref="sect306">If you wish to leave the temple, <link-text>turn to 306</link-text>.</choice>
       </data>