Book 5:

(er) 32: wrapped in prayer -> rapt in prayer
(ne) 75: refuse in climb -> refuse and climb

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diff --git a/05sots.xml b/05sots.xml
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@@ -965,7 +965,7 @@
 
      <data>
       <p>You raise the hood of your cloak and hurry through the open doors into the dark, cool hall. The people are kneeling in front of a pulpit where a holy man, dressed in flowing robes of black and gold, reads aloud from a gem-encrusted book. Behind him, the face of the late Zakhan, immortalized in a tapestry suspended from the roof by huge silken cords, looks down on the mourners.</p>
-      <p>The congregation is wrapped in prayer, and nobody sees you enter. The ceremony soon comes to an end, and you are able to slip past Maouk<ch.apos/>s men as the mourners flood into the streets.</p>
+      <p>The congregation is rapt in prayer, and nobody sees you enter. The ceremony soon comes to an end, and you are able to slip past Maouk<ch.apos/>s men as the mourners flood into the streets.</p>
       <choice idref="sect169"><link-text>Turn to 169</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -1513,7 +1513,7 @@
      <data>
       <p>You twist the handle but the gate is locked. You are about to turn and run when suddenly the gate flies open: a man stands in the doorway. <quote><!--ERRTAG-RE-111078-->Quickly, Northlander. I<!--/ERRTAG-RE-111078--> will hide you!</quote> The man steps back to allow you to enter.</p>
       <choice idref="sect24">If you wish to enter, <link-text>turn to 24</link-text>.</choice>
-      <choice idref="sect169">If you wish to refuse in climb the path towards the archway, <link-text>turn to 169</link-text>.</choice>
+      <choice idref="sect169">If you wish to refuse and climb the path towards the archway, <link-text>turn to 169</link-text>.</choice>
       <choice idref="sect117">If you wish to enter the alley, <link-text>turn to 117</link-text>.</choice>
      </data>
     </section>
@@ -6135,7 +6135,7 @@
       <p>(<a idref="sect27">27</a>) Replaced <quote>oil</quote> with <quote>Oil</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect29">29</a>) Replaced <quote>joint and</quote> with <quote>joint, and</quote>, <quote>water, and</quote> with <quote>water and</quote>, and <quote>bar and</quote> with <quote>bar, and</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect30">30</a>) Replaced <quote>wall, and</quote> with <quote>wall and</quote>, <quote>action, when</quote> with <quote>action when (awkward)</quote>, and <quote>narrow and</quote> with <quote>narrow, and</quote>. Moved the Guardian choice into the first position.</p>
-      <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>prayer and</quote> with <quote>prayer, and</quote> and <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>.</p>
+      <p>(<a idref="sect32">32</a>) Replaced <quote>prayer and</quote> with <quote>prayer, and</quote> and <quote>end and</quote> with <quote>end, and</quote>. Replaced <quote>wrapped in</quote> with <quote>rapt in</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect33">33</a>) Replaced <quote>corroded but</quote> with <quote>corroded, but</quote>.</p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect35">35</a>) Replaced <quote>disgusting and</quote> with <quote>disgusting, and</quote>, <quote>six, silver-handled</quote> with <quote>six silver-handled</quote>, and <quote>tunic, and</quote> with <quote>tunic and</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-69812-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>emeralds and pearls</quote> with <quote>emeralds, and pearls</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-69812-ITEM--></p>
       <p>(<a idref="sect38">38</a>) Replaced <quote>Half-way</quote> with <quote>Halfway</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-71865-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-71865-ITEM--></p>