added a few errata entries
authorJonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Sun, 23 Mar 2008 21:15:35 +0000 (21:15 +0000)
committerJonathan Blake <jonathan.blake@projectaon.org>
Sun, 23 Mar 2008 21:15:35 +0000 (21:15 +0000)
git-svn-id: https://projectaon.org/data/en/xml@599 f6f3e2d7-ff33-0410-aaf5-b4bee2cdac11

18dotd.xml

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        <p>(<a idref="sect10">10</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect11">11</a>) Replaced <quote>of River Kinam</quote> with <quote>of the River Kinam</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect13">13</a>) Replaced <quote>Magnakai healing</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Curing</quote>. Replaced <quote>to well-established</quote> with <quote>too well-established</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Put the signposts into a table.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect14">14</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>North<ch.emdash/>Chod<ch.emdash/>250 miles</quote> with <quote>Chod: 250 miles North</quote>, <quote>West<ch.emdash/>Holona<ch.emdash/>50 miles</quote> with <quote>Holona: 50 miles West</quote>, and <quote>South<ch.emdash/>Tenzha<ch.emdash/>20 miles</quote> with <quote>Tenzha: 20 miles South</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect15">15</a>) Replaced <quote>eh boys?</quote> with <quote>eh, boys?</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect17">17</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-79885-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>are rushing</quote> with <quote>is rushing</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-79885-ITEM--></p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect19">19</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-80830-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>VANAMOR</quote> with <quote>Vanamor</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-80830-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect81">81</a>) Replaced <quote>legs, With</quote> with <quote>legs. With</quote>. Replaced <quote>grasssnake</quote> with <quote>grass snake</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect82">82</a>) Replaced <quote>Old Kingdom battle-spell</quote> with <quote>Old Kingdom Battle-spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect84">84</a>) Replaced <quote>Vellino<ch.rsquot/>,</quote> with <quote>Vellino,<ch.rsquot/><ch.thinspace/></quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Put the signposts into a table.<!--ERRTAG-RE-160908-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-160908-ITEM--></p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect85">85</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>North<ch.emdash/>Chod<ch.emdash/>250 miles</quote> with <quote>Chod: 250 miles North</quote>, <quote>West<ch.emdash/>Holona<ch.emdash/>50 miles</quote> with <quote>Holona: 50 miles West</quote>, and <quote>South<ch.emdash/>Tenzha<ch.emdash/>20 miles</quote> with <quote>Tenzha: 20 miles South</quote>. <!--ERRTAG-RE-160908-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>on to</quote> with <quote>onto</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-160908-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect86">86</a>) Replaced <quote>shout, <ch.lsquot/>String</quote> with <quote>shout. <ch.lsquot/>String</quote>. Replaced <quote>stammers, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>stammers. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>. Replaced <quote>uneasily, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>uneasily. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-164579-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Lucky Bucket inn</quote> with <quote>Lucky Bucket Inn</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-164579-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-165347-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Scade, with</quote> with <quote>Scade with</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-165347-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-165444-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>muster, and</quote> with <quote>muster and</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-165444-ITEM--></p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect87">87</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-168372-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>cloud of arrows and bolts descend</quote> with <quote>cloud of arrows and bolts descends</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-168372-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect88">88</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect107">107</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-197365-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>ambushers</quote> with <quote>Ambushers</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-197365-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect108">108</a>) Replaced <quote>lavas</quote> with <quote>Lavas</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>. Replaced <quote>the Gate</quote> with <quote>the Shadow Gate</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect109">109</a>) Replaced <quote>1 Broadsword</quote> with <quote>Broadsword</quote>.</p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Put the signposts into a table.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect110">110</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>North<ch.emdash/>Chod<ch.emdash/>250 miles</quote> with <quote>Chod: 250 miles North</quote>, <quote>West<ch.emdash/>Holona<ch.emdash/>50 miles</quote> with <quote>Holona: 50 miles West</quote>, and <quote>South<ch.emdash/>Tenzha<ch.emdash/>20 miles</quote> with <quote>Tenzha: 20 miles South</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect111">111</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-202481-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>her majesty</quote> with <quote>her Majesty</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-202481-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-203498-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>reads: Vanamor 280 miles</quote> with <quote>reads <ch.lsquot/>VANAMOR 280 miles<ch.rsquot/></quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-203498-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect112">112</a>) Replaced <quote>facade</quote> with <quote>fa<ch.ccedil/>ade</quote>. Replaced <quote>Lone Wolf</quote> with <quote><cite>Lone Wolf</cite></quote> when referring to the series. Replaced <quote>says, <ch.lsquot/>I</quote> with <quote>says. <ch.lsquot/>I</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-202455-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>says: LIBRARY</quote> with <quote>says <ch.lsquot/>Library<ch.rsquot/></quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-202455-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-204183-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>words: HALLS OF LEARNING</quote> with <quote>words <ch.lsquot/>Halls of Learning<ch.rsquot/></quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-204183-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect114">114</a>) Replaced <quote>battle spells</quote> with <quote>battle-spells</quote>. Replaced <quote>lavas<ch.apos/></quote> with <quote>Lavas<ch.apos/></quote>. Replaced <quote>sky, <ch.lsquot/>and</quote> with <quote>sky. <ch.lsquot/>And</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-207175-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>wave of winged beasts come</quote> with <quote>wave of winged beasts comes</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-207175-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect170">170</a>) Replaced <quote>Silversmith<ch.apos/>s Guild</quote> with <quote>Silversmiths<ch.apos/> Guild</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect172">172</a>) Replaced <quote>Kai mastery</quote> with <quote>Kai Mastery</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect173">173</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-272921-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>arrow</quote> with <quote>Arrow</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-272921-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Put the signposts into a table.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect174">174</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>. Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>North<ch.emdash/>Chod<ch.emdash/>250 miles</quote> with <quote>Chod: 250 miles North</quote>, <quote>West<ch.emdash/>Holona<ch.emdash/>50 miles</quote> with <quote>Holona: 50 miles West</quote>, and <quote>South<ch.emdash/>Tenzha<ch.emdash/>20 miles</quote> with <quote>Tenzha: 20 miles South</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect175">175</a>) Replaced <quote>Varnos harbour</quote> with <quote>Varnos Harbour</quote>. Replaced <quote>wharfs</quote> with <quote>wharves</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect176">176</a>) Replaced <quote>forest of Salony</quote> with <quote>Forest of Salony</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect177">177</a>) Replaced <quote>riverbank</quote> with <quote>river bank</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-281406-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>city walls</quote> with <quote>city's walls</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-281406-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect257">257</a>) Replaced <quote>feet-first</quote> with <quote>head-first</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect258">258</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-385905-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>your life and the future of Sommerlund ends here</quote> with <quote>your life and the future of Sommerlund end here</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-385905-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect259">259</a>) Replaced <quote>Alright stranger</quote> with <quote>Alright, stranger</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-379389-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>try and</quote> with <quote>try to</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-379389-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-386285-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>backpack</quote> with <quote>Backpack</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-386285-ITEM--></p>
-       <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Put the signposts into a table. Replaced <quote>animal mastery</quote> with <quote>Animal Mastery</quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="sect260">260</a>) Replaced <quote>5 arrows</quote> with <quote>5 Arrows</quote>. Replaced <quote>animal mastery</quote> with <quote>Animal Mastery</quote>. Replaced <quote>North<ch.emdash/>Chod<ch.emdash/>250 miles</quote> with <quote>Chod: 250 miles North</quote>, <quote>West<ch.emdash/>Holona<ch.emdash/>50 miles</quote> with <quote>Holona: 50 miles West</quote>, and <quote>South<ch.emdash/>Tenzha<ch.emdash/>20 miles</quote> with <quote>Tenzha: 20 miles South</quote>.</p>
 <p>(<a idref="sect261">261</a>)<!--ERRTAG-RE-390354-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>gas effects</quote> with <quote>effects of the gas</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-390354-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-390142-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Magnakai healing Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Magnakai Discipline of Curing</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-390142-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect262">262</a>) Replaced <quote>Brotherhood spell</quote> with <quote>Brotherhood Spell</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect263">263</a>) Replaced <quote>shouts, <ch.lsquot/>Ride</quote> with <quote>shouts. <ch.lsquot/>Ride</quote>.<!--ERRTAG-RE-384969-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Captain</quote> with <quote>captain</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-384969-ITEM--><!--ERRTAG-RE-385378-ITEM--> Replaced <quote>Captain<ch.apos/>s</quote> with <quote>captain<ch.apos/>s</quote>.<!--/ERRTAG-RE-385378-ITEM--></p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect349">349</a>) Replaced <quote>farm house</quote> with <quote>farmhouse</quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Crack!,</quote> with <quote><onomatopoeia>Crack!</onomatopoeia></quote>.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="sect350">350</a>) Replaced <quote>Sun-Crystal</quote> with <quote>Sun-crystal</quote>. Replaced <quote>WOLF<ch.apos/>S BANE</quote> with <quote><cite>Wolf<ch.apos/>s Bane</cite></quote>.</p>
+       <p>(<a idref="map">The Lands and Territories of Central Northern Magnamund</a>) Doubled the number of miles on the scale to reconcile it to the scales on other published maps. The original scale went from 0 to 150 miles. Now it goes from 0 to 300 miles.</p>
        <p>(<a idref="crsumary">Combat Rules Summary</a>) Replaced <quote>cross reference</quote> with <quote>cross-reference</quote>, <quote>top of chart</quote> with <quote>top of the chart</quote>, and <quote>fall to 0</quote> with <quote>falls to 0 or below</quote>. Replaced <quote>Kai Disciplines</quote> with <quote>Grand Master Disciplines</quote>. Replaced <quote>Pick number from</quote> with <quote>Pick a number from the</quote>. Replaced <quote>Turn to Combat</quote> with <quote>Turn to the Combat</quote>. Replaced <quote>to random number</quote> with <quote>to the random number</quote>. Replaced <quote>when ENDURANCE</quote> with <quote>when the ENDURANCE</quote>. Replaced <quote>ignored, only</quote> with <quote>ignored; only</quote>.</p>
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