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<div class="cm jb">Jonathan Blake</div>
<div class="cm jp">Justin Parks</div>
+<div class="cm js">Jennifer Sigman</div>
<div class="cm dd">David Davis</div>
<div class="cm ik">Ingo Klöcker</div>
<div class="cm so">Simon Osborne</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect6.htm">6</a> #1: satety -> safety</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect7">sect7</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect8">sect8</a></div>
-<div class="
u"><a href="sect8.htm">8</a> #1: empty vial -> empty Vial</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect8.htm">8</a> #1: empty vial -> empty Vial</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect9">sect9</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #1: If you have versed -> If you are versed<div class="cm so">Errata - surprisingly.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect9.htm">9</a> #2: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect26">sect26</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect27">sect27</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect28">sect28</a></div>
-<div class="
u"><a href="sect28.htm">28</a> #1: evade combat turn -> evade combat, turn</div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect28.htm">28</a> #1: evade combat turn -> evade combat, turn</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect29">sect29</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #1: Item-slung -> Item&emdash;slung</div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect29.htm">29</a> #2: Item-hung -> Item&emdash;hung</div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect38.htm">38</a> #6: Wytchking -> Wytch-king</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect39">sect39</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #1: lIke -> like</div>
-<div class="u"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #2: The first choice requires you to spend 1 WP. Shall we add a footnote there, or change the choice here to include "if you have 1 WP..."?</div>
-<div class="u"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #3: Demon Lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash <div class="cm tw">With or without comma?</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #2: The first choice requires you to spend 1 WP. Shall we add a footnote there, or change the choice here to include "if you have 1 WP..."?<div class="cm so">I'd opt to change the link text accordingly.</div><div class="cm jb">Let's go for changing the text for the choice.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect39.htm">39</a> #3: Demon Lord, Agarash -> Demonlord Agarash <div class="cm tw">With or without comma?</div><div class="cm so">I think 'without comma', but not 100% sure ;)</div><div class="cm jb">without</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect40">sect40</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect41">sect41</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect42">sect42</a></div>
<div class="cf"><a href="sect47.htm">47</a> #3: The term <cite>Agarashi</cite> is not used in any other place in the <cite>Worls of Lone Wolf</cite> books, but it is used elsewhere for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned. <div class="cm tw">That footnote really sucks. Better ideas anyone?</div><div class="cm so">How about: "The term Agarashi is not found elsewhere in the World of Lone Wolf series. However, in the more recent Lone Wolf books, Dever has used the term to denote any monstrous servant of Agarash the Damned." Still not that great, though.</div><div class="cm jb">Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used in anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used elsewhere as the collective name for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.</div><div class="cm jb">I meant: Although the term <quote>Agarashi</quote> is not used anywhere else in the <cite>Worlds of Lone Wolf</cite> books, it is used in other books as the collective term for the monstrous servants of Agarash the Damned.</div><div class="cm tw">Using GS instead of WoLW in Jon's version.</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect48">sect48</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect49">sect49</a></div>
-<div class="u"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #1: empty vials -> empty Vials <div class="cm tw">I think...?</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #2: a Special Item, which may -> an item on your Action Chart. It may <div class="cm tw">Argh, another of these "Special Item in your Backpack" confusionisms.</div></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #3: or your Herb Pouch -> or in your Herb Pouch</div>
+<div class="e"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #1: empty vials -> empty Vials <div class="cm tw">I think...?</div><div class="cm so">second occurrence only needs changing, you mean?</div><div class="cm tw">Technically maybe only the second, but I think it would look very odd, so I'm for changing both.</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #2: a Special Item, which may -> an item on your Action Chart. It may <div class="cm tw">Argh, another of these "Special Item in your Backpack" confusionisms.</div><div class="cm so">LOL! The rules are just a mess, aren't they?</div><div class="cm jb">I say lose the bit about making it a Special Item (if this doesn't create any continuity problems).</div></div>
+<div class="
ce"><a href="sect49.htm">49</a> #3: or your Herb Pouch -> or in your Herb Pouch</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect50">sect50</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect50.htm">50</a> #1: Intinctively -> Instinctively</div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect50.htm">50</a> #2: this power -> this Power<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect103">sect103</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect104">sect104</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #1: crowd of demons are -> crowd of demons is</div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect104.htm">104</a> #2: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect105">sect105</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect106">sect106</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect107">sect107</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect110">sect110</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect111">sect111</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect112">sect112</a></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect112.htm">112</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect112.htm">112</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect113">sect113</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect113.htm">113</a> #1: magical Power -> Magical Power<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect114">sect114</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect139">sect139</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #1: Move illustration 8 here, and give it the new caption "Your heart misses a beat as a huge pair of monstrous eyes appears within the flames of the portal."<div class="cm so">Blimey! After checking up you're absolutely right. I'd second this.</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #2: The horde stop -> The horde stops</div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect139.htm">139</a> #3: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect140">sect140</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect141">sect141</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect141.htm">141</a> #1: large, reptilian -> large reptilian</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect143">sect143</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect144">sect144</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect145">sect145</a></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect145.htm">145</a> #1: You are never asked to deduct the 1 WP that section 92 required of you to have to get here. Footnote?</div>
+<div class="cf"><a href="sect145.htm">145</a> #1: You are never asked to deduct the 1 WP that section 92 required of you to have to get here. Footnote?<div class="cm jb">footnote it</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect146">sect146</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect147">sect147</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect147.htm">147</a> #1: small, black -> small black</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect156">sect156</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect157">sect157</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect158">sect158</a></div>
-<div class="n"><a href="sect158.htm">158</a> #1: Who? &ellips; Who? &ellips; -> Who?&ellips; Who?&ellips; <div class="cm tw">Or... shall the spaces remain there?</div></div>
+<div class="cn"><a href="sect158.htm">158</a> #1: Who? &ellips; Who? &ellips; -> Who?&ellips; Who?&ellips; <div class="cm tw">Or... shall the spaces remain there?</div><div class="cm jb">spaces should go away</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect159">sect159</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect159.htm">159</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect159.htm">159</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect191.htm">191</a> #2: long &ellips; -> long&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect192">sect192</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect193">sect193</a></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect193.htm">193</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect193.htm">193</a> #1: This is a WP usage you cannot avoid. Footnote with ref to the sect175 method? Or change section 118, requiring you to have 2 WP to go here? <div class="cm tw">Or is it impossible to have run out of WP here?</div><div class="cm jb">Barring figuring out that it is impossible, footnote as you mention</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect194">sect194</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect194.htm">194</a> #1: higher magick -> Higher Magick <div class="cm ik">as in the PAMoS</div></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect194.htm">194</a> #2: these powers -> these Powers<div class="cm so">Errata</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect229">sect229</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect229.htm">229</a> #1: Half-way -> Halfway</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect230">sect230</a></div>
-<div class="e"><a href="sect230.htm">230</a> #1: Pin-points -> Pinpoints <div class="cm so">as per PAMoS</div><div class="cm tw">Wait a minute... Is the PAMoS entry valid for the noun as well as for the verb?</div></div>
+<div class="ce"><a href="sect230.htm">230</a> #1: Pin-points -> Pinpoints <div class="cm so">as per PAMoS</div><div class="cm tw">Wait a minute... Is the PAMoS entry valid for the noun as well as for the verb?</div><div class="cm jb">Both noun and verb</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect231">sect231</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect232">sect232</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect233">sect233</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect330">sect330</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect331">sect331</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #1: six items -> eight items</div>
-<div class="f"><a href="sect331.htm">331</a> #2: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect332">sect332</a></div>
<div class="ce"><a href="sect332.htm">332</a> #1: tree-tops -> treetops <div class="cm ik">as in gs02, gs03, lw11, lw15 (2x)</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect333">sect333</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect353.htm">353</a> #5: time &ellips; no -> time&ellips; no</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect354">sect354</a></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect355">sect355</a></div>
+<div class="f"><a href="sect355.htm">355</a> #1: Do we need a footnote explaining how this actually works? Does it mean that you can increase your CS for the rest of the adventure?<div class="cm jb">Assuming we're talking about the Alether, we can add a "for the duration of the combat".</div><div class="cm tw">Oops, that should have been for section 355</div><div class="cm jb">I always assumed that it was a permanent change. Yes, we probably need a footnote for this, but we don't have any solid evidence to back us up. Are there any other opinions on how this bonus should work?</div><div class="cm js">I second the assumption of a permanent change... that's how I always handled it, anyways.</div><div class="cm tw">What about "It appears that for every Phinomel pod that you possess and wish to throw into the Leafwater pool, you may permanently raise your COMBAT SKILL by 1 when using your Wixard's Staff. Remember to delete these Phinomel pods from your Action Chart."</div></div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect356">sect356</a></div>
<div class="cn"><a href="sect356.htm">356</a> #1: not &ellips; -> not&ellips;</div>
<div class="section"><a name="sect357">sect357</a></div>
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<div class="cn"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #1: Wytch-Queen -> Wytch-queen <div class="cm ik">just like Wytch-king</div><div class="cm so">(Wytch-Queen -> Wytch-queen) This is Errata.</div><div class="cm jb">Approved. I think this can be considered "ne".</div></div></div>
<div class="Ce"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #2: artifacts -> artefacts <div class="cm so">Except it was in the Newsletter, so I don't think it counts as Errata.</div> <div class="cm jb">erratum</div></div>
-<div class="f"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #3: This epilogue to the <cite>Grey Star</cite> series was included in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 7</cite>.</div>
+<div class="
cf"><a href="passing.htm">The Passing of the Shianti</a> #3: This epilogue to the <cite>Grey Star</cite> series was included in <cite>Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 7</cite>.</div>
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